The Beast Within.

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  1. Hell Kaiser Ryo Kingdom Keeper

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    OOC: Well, I couldn't tell if you were inside or outside...so I guess...I'm gonna have to do something different and ignore my other post on here...okay....hmmm...

    Bic: Ziro ran out into the forest. He however, found Bliss and the man. "I won't...forgive." he said darkly and ran at them, full speed and knocked the man in the side at full force as he stood on his feet, standing next to Bliss "Want a tag partner?" he asked, his voice still almost the same, only drunkily yet velvet still.
     
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    Atoli looked into Scott's eyes nodding a thanks. She opened her mouth, blood began to rush out. You saved me...Thank you Atoli thought as she sat down, trembling. Atoli began whining and tied to reach her wound but couldn't because the pain shot up.

    OOC: Ahaha, xD Good timing then.
     
  3. Roxas24Sora King's Apprentice

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    Name; Jacob (Jake) Rogers
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    Appearence; black skater-dude hair, 5'11, mostly wears rock band merchandise
    Bio; Jake doesn't really know much about his family, since he was sent away at birth. His family, however, is royal blood and rules a far away land. He has no clue he's royal blood. He helps the white Balverines.
    Personality; Jake is very optimistic, cheerful, and is found usually jamming out to his favorite rock music. The only time he is actually serious is during battle or has lost a friend. He will give his life for his friends.
    Weapon (Without Form); Ike's Sword (the yellow one)
    Weapon (In Form); Ike's sword (holds in mouth)
    Other; N/A

    RIS is not a Fable fan.:D
     
  4. Rissy Queen of the Clouds

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    OOC: Entity, if you wish to continue, you can. I actually like how you RP. Noobs, I know, are a problem. But I can't just ask them to leave...

    BIC: Bliss saw the man get up again, this time, hurrling her to a tree. He pinned her, making sure she couldn't escape. The man silently slipped into her mind, and said,
    You are such a beautiful creature. Why do you hurt me so? Bliss snarled, and tried to slash.
    You know you want me. I can taste it in your thoughts. All you need to do is give me a sign. He answered, Bliss then kicking him off of her. She then bit his sholder, feeling the blood rush into her mouth. She let go, slinging him into another tree, letting him fall. She snarled at him, who wasn't getting up.

    OOC: Let's just say I knew you were there, Entity... xD I don't feel like editting. ):
     
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    OOC: Lol. I know. Saved your @$$! 8D @-@

    BIC: Scott ran over to the girl and crouched next to her. "Ouch. Looks like you've been through a lot." He said, glancing over his shoulder for a moment to double check that the man was knocked out and not trying to kill him at that moment. "What the hell happened...?" My first day in Seattle and I'm already seeing a few fights pop up!
     
  6. Hell Kaiser Ryo Kingdom Keeper

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    OOC: My posts are being ignored...barely again. ._.

    Bic: Ziro saw his guns on the man's belt and took them "Never, EVER, take my guns again!" he snarled and ran in the direction of Bliss' way. He kept running on all fours until he had his speed up to a hundred miles per hour, and he was already in front of Bliss. Ziro stopped her as he pulled her into his arms "Are you trying to die tonight?" he asked, he started chaning back a bit, but kept his strength on her.
     
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    Atoli growled slightly when the man approached her. But gave up when he sat beside her. Ugh... It hurts.. She thought. Atoli tried to say something, but forgot she can't speak. She made a sound like she was laughing.
    Looking at the man, she hoped he would help her. Please.... get this thing.. out of me! She pleased with her mind. Hopeing he would understand.
     
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    Zack ran over to Scott and Atoli he saw her wound,"stay here, well get that cleaned up once the fight is over" he told her. Then, ran back, looking for someone to attack.
     
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    James watched in interest at everything that was going on. There was just chaos everywhere.
    This was a bad time to come... he thought to himself, closing his eyes and leaning against a wall.


    OoC: Eh...my character's barely a part of the story anymore...
    *thinks*
     
  10. Rissy Queen of the Clouds

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    Bliss snarled at the man holding her back. She couldn't speak, and just thought, I'm taking justice. She then tried to pry him off her, and moaned in frustration of not getting out of the hold.

    OOC: Ugh, I hate getting bumped. Sorry, I didn't mean to ignore your post, Entity. It's just SO busy. /:
     
  11. Fayt-Harkwind Where yo curly mustache at?

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    OOC: @Ventez: My characters barely 1% of the story T^T
    Don't know what to do everyones everywhere
     
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    Um...can I join? I put my thing up on the page before.
     
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    OoC: This is why stories shouldn't start at the climax...
     
  14. Hell Kaiser Ryo Kingdom Keeper

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    Ziro smirked "Taking care of justice? Where have I heard that one before?" he chuckled and pushed her against a tree, his grip harder than steel. "Now, you listen to me, you're too simple-minded to face them, you aren't thinking straight, what could happen if you're stuck in the battle and someone came behind you, without thinking at all, and shot you?" he asked, his mind clear of anything at this point.


    OOC: Well...we could get it to where the climax is the beginning, and then we go into the past to where it shows how they got to where they are....which would take a long time and an enduring one at that... :/ just a thought.
     
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    OOC: I backtracked...what's inside Atoli? O.o Random splinter? >>;

    BIC: Scott examined the girl, wondering what exactly was wrong with her. His visioned dimed slightly, changing constantly and not resting for such a long time took its toll on him.

    OOC: *made up an excuse for him not to see an obvious injury*
     
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    Ventez, honey there's many places you can join up at.
    Right now there's a fight between the guards of the castle thing we were at.

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    StarKiller: Ahaha, it's a bullet. xDD

    BIC:
    Can I transform back? Will I stay like this forever? Atoli started to panic, and rose. Her chest roared with growls of pain. Her vision blurred from the loss of blood, but refused from lossing consciousness.
     
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    A man ran by Zack, he put up his claw and drove it into his chest, he dropped, Zack looked around for another man to attack.
     
  18. Rissy Queen of the Clouds

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    OOC: You guys both can jump in. I didn't mean for it to be the climax, but how else could I start it?
    That's a pretty good idea, but it just seems a little too confusing. Maybe something like the man dies and his son or something comes along... He had a wife or something before this. Maybe he's like White Balveriene as well... But younger. O-o

    BIC: Bliss snarled, and hated the smart remarks. Who asked you? She thought, as she felt his grip. She began to whine, and her eyes began to turn less grey, as they did before she transformed.

    OOC: Hmm... Maybe if the transformer is hurt enough, they turn back... Or something like that... *thinking out loud*
     
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    OOC: ...>< *stupid* I'm too lazy to be badass with detail sooo...

    BIC: Scott finally realized what was wrong. "You don't know how to revert back, huh?" He asked, concentrated hard on his left arm to make a partial transformation which was somewhat painful. "A little trick I've learned..." He said, having razor sharp talons on his hand. He carefully dug out the bullet from the girl and winced, knowing how much it'd hurt her. "There." Good thing I washed my hands.

    OOC: Who knows where his hands could've been? 8D
     
  20. Hell Kaiser Ryo Kingdom Keeper

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    OOC: Or, how's about when they blackout, they transform back? *thinking out loud*

    Bic: Ziro smirked "You did, when you first met me." he retorted, putting more pressure on her and pounding her into the ground, more experice he had over her in this state, and with it, came power. "I'm just going to change you back, and in one moment...you'll be good as new." he stated, changing her back was the first thing on his mind.
     
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