Rhyme battle KHV

Now make your longer son so I can disown who?[/quote]
Ha ha ha, man you make me laugh. Your rage filled comment back is not a smack or a hit not even a nip of my self esteem, because that's just me say what you want to me and I can bounce it back like a baseball bat on the diamond all green and brown like the ring you tell me to bring but I will never ever bring myself to it or go through with what me to do because there is something else better to do: Trash your pain with rain of joy out of keys and boards I wore to advertise my sammich shop with a big o'll wallop of payback in the form of mayo. You may not like it but you eat it because its something we all swallow and wallow in to the end. Our time is no where up unlike your powered up punches you throw at the punching bag but the bag just laughs and asked if that's all you got when you bought this lot of power instead of it being your own it was words you gained but a soul you payed and now I think its time for my rhyme to take a break because in my wake its time for you to take off your parking break and start rolling with my punches like bunches of banana's that I pick so I can quick-ly make them my breakfast like the words I grew for myself without the use of my wealth.

 

From you taking this long to think of something clever to come back at me I know you suck
There's no need to keep on fighting since your already stuck in a rut
Saying my comments are filled with rage
Ok since its gonna be said that way might as well call me insane
Listen I'll cut your f**king balls off homie my saws off the chain
Chop you in half with it and saw off your legs
While the top half of your torso f**king crawls off deranged
That's what happens when you allow the price of fame
To become too much for you to maintain
Silly sucka bum lova you make worse attempts to this rhyme thang than Lil Wyane
You claim to put me out with your lyrical flame
No way for this clown hit it home with words like these
Where did you learn to even think is my question?
Do you think New Years is when they have the new election?
Maybe it that's payback sammich you think I want to get a slice of?
The worse part of that is that I hate mayo
So when you attempt to swing I'm not even there so
Could that be how bad you want to try to diss someone?
Make a thread and use others styles like 'Yea I'm number 1'
So now you'll see why you were always losin
That instrumental loop and I sit in a mental institution
With screws loose in my temple, sending you simpleton illusions
Confusing your views with simple distribution
Of lyrics I’m using to abuse you
Recite the Bible on the Toilet cuz my God I'm the sh**
All you're hear is the house sittin on Amityville couch sayin Star man you a b*tch!!!
I’m in a zone where the f**k is the ref with the whistle?
Don’t gotta impress you, I just diss you
The Press Pretzels the issue
Once I saw the net I went and got me a gross net fiscal
Meaning I outclassed so while you cry its harassment I got the money to keep them on the hush like my silenced pistol

 

Well, I will stop you right there, I don't care what you think of me, but you see I have a small life outside of here so I swear to dear god that if you just say what you think about my way of how to deal with my day without thinking about the other persons life is just a crime that I feel like you do just cause you can dosent mean it won't make someone mad like the hatter is a mind of worth of a dime. And what's with all the cursing? It's just making worst things that would be beautyful if your blood bath with chains and saws was rather rusted over and covered in dust because it sounds obnoxious to just because its the way I was raised. If my words offended you forgive me, but you see this is the truth in my world and its how I see, like a bee, I need the pollon of truth from its top to core to root and I loot it all before the Fall.

 

It was only 5 times I cursed
Lyrically I still demolished you to make it worse
I have a life outside this site just to burst that bubble
You think I'm a offended by those words you must have a screw loose
I only offend the offensive when the incentive is hitting them towards their roots
As proof you want me to think of life from under your roof
Impossible that'll never happen
I'd rather find lost soul then trap them
Have them on a conveyor belt and slash on their bodies constantly
The way I speak is bloody still with a clear goal to show variety
Of skills I have instead of giving a sob story as if I were your dad
Now that this has been bought to your attention I'm glad
Here's what makes this great
You're starin into a barrel of hate
You got little chance to escape this is not Fable nigga its Fate
Oh great now I have to wait for this fake to compensate for defeat for heavens sake
This will deplete the brain cells in your fragile mind state
Take time to think degenerate before you regurgitate more volatile waste in this place
Trying to prove to you my superior skills is becoming a drag
I'm tired of finding other ways to brag
How many times has it been sayin I'm nicer then?
Or I'm better then?
So much harder or just way more clever then?
I haven't even been alive that long and I've already gained the status as a veteran
Next time speak with your feet if I'm who you think about steeping to
This proves to be intense for someone who wants so badly to see blue
You claim to have a pure soul so where would that make you go?
Think of a safe utopia where you are free to walk with such big talk
I come there hit you in the leg like chopping off a tree stalk
You and those mediocre metaphors proves the skill I'm put up with
Time to replenish before I have got to vomit
Better yet find where he calls home and bomb it
Do it in his dreams so he can drown for a bit
Once he wakes up that's when you complete the hit
Bring him to school so he can really learn some new tricks

 

Naz your no veteran in my book
Your skill ha where can I look?
To find someone who speaks right
Ha there is no one in sight
We all have little skill
And many write till their fill
So no matter what you say
To me your no veteran in any way!

 

Because your words actual mean something
Pretty cool how you come in to save him before the ring
Now there's a sigh of relief since this clown loves to talk cheap
I feel that I'm a vet for the works I come to beat
The easiest one was that of a BIG pipsqueak
Your ego will be your downfall
But your hot headed so that won't work at all
And if you want to look at my skill we can just go back to Second Chances
'Nas do some rapping' as I talked about my pitiful romances
You could only write from what I put
I'll bite since you got people that would give me a good hook
Then again I would just make them shook when they see what I have laid out
'ODA YOU SUCK!!!' That's there shouts
Smile some more please I need to pout
He left the coop tried to make a basket with no hoop
Now why is this a big whoops?
I'm stopping him from proceeding further
I just killed the Master who trains students with lyrically murder

 

Say what you like it matters not
And your pitiful rapping is all you've got
It takes real talent to speak with heart
And who cares where people start
granted your rap did aid me in the past
But now we bare a new cast
Darkness isn't the only style
And some think rapping is just plain vile
So that is all for this darkness galore
Go on I dare you insult me some more
I'm not afraid of a little bad press
And I don't fall victim to the writer's stress
I do this because it is something I enjoy
And don't get me wrong your little boy
Star means nothing to this man
So go insult him as much as you can
I just thought he needed a break
So is this a hint you will take
Try something different than your rap
Cause I've had enough of Mr BitchSlap

 

Eww gross you think darkness is the only thing I have
I love to live my life that's my bad
Tending to the weak is something I enjoy to do
Seeing as its you I'll pass the buck to Drew
Or whom ever thinks they have time to waste on you
Giving me orders is pretty funny
I'm not a student of yours dummy
I'd hate to be the chump who got suckered into learning from a punk
Caring that you needed my help in the past is way beyond me
I only put it there for its a diss rhyme scheme see
You need to go back to your attic
Sorry the place where you can think of things dramatic
I can flip my style with ease and just aim for the knees
Render you stupid and walk past the useless
Better take your time to get used to this
You again only see one side of a 3D guy
How can that be if its being typed on the fly
Dissing you more is like that of a bore doing a chore
I write since I have the talent and means to
You write cause you enjoy it yea bullsh** dude
Star would enjoy it if he wasn't taught by a wanna be Roger Rabbit
Oh I mean the skunk who only brings funk which is its natural habit
Aqua is so beautiful and lavish
Something that would make me quit a tad punchline craftsmanship
To get confused with loose dues that only leads you to lose on what I have the ability to type
Is the same way people always have connection problems on Skype
You only said that because of all the Hype
Part of the reason why I told you this more than twice
Its alright to see what you lack and are incapable of
Me is knowing what it means to actual love
I can talk and write smooth songs about it
Until you come and try to pollute your ways about jack sh**
Fact is you're whack when it comes to written compositions
You add rhythm to it and now it becomes verbal competitions
RAP could mean Rhythm Assisted Poetry
That only works when you have something good to work with see
Why is it you always like to clash with me?
That inane claim of asking me for help in the past has just become a lie
Nas I need your help to diss this other guy
He's on the net just a different set on a new site
I got it you're a flake lacking a bark and bite
Sound Check... Wait he's still breathing he'll be alright
Back to the main issue
Learn from this so a diss will seem like a miss than a hit fool
Not saying from me just the words that have been placed
You can keep on trying this isn't your time or place
As a matter of fact not even the right space
Go with the newbies and enter that race
I'll stay over here with me and my mind going at my pace
So I can get this taste of a great debate which is a disgrace out of my face
Ignorant ramble nothing but words and amble yet I spew hate
Couldn't possibly be since I got two naysayers talking as hypocrites constantly coming like a second rate

 

Naz don't you get the facts
People are not always biding by their contracts
I do this because I find it quite fun
And in honestly I have taught no one
I lied Star and Zelda have not learned from me
And I refuse to say who my students may be
Keep up this crap and I'll go blind
I'll get you out of my sight and mind
You dis a guy who once shown you respect
Yet my request for the rapping to cut down you reject
That invite to diss another
Is still needed since that jerk may have cost me a net brother!
Still perhaps your words lack zest
And this is no jest
Don't claim you have talent when you lack fans
And where is you fame plans?
If you say Naz people will reply "Who?"
Granted they would do the same to Oda too
We are not good or above the rest
And you have just proven your a rapping pest.

 

Guys, keep the insults to a minimum. A rap battle doesn't mean that regular behaviour should be forgotten, regular rules ofof conduct apply, as with anywhere on here.
I shouldn't be warned that people are starting to get ticked off by comments made in the Playground section.

Keep it fun for all.

 

Fans on Kh-v is a lie I told to thee
You're a pain so try me
Saying you and I are net brothers
The only relation we have to this is the net and our mothers
Exactly that means nothing at all
I have talent because if I didn't you wouldn't be saying I've had it
Rap isn't for everyone yet tried by anyone who has the means leave their mark branded
This is just something I do for fun
I never liked it like the way I see guns
Ewww I said guns over the net like that was cool
I'm talking to a guy who constantly tries to prove what again?
Oh the fact you don't want to tell who those idiots are following
Complete trash that basks in glory of others
Then has the audacity to call those above him brothers
A real teacher shows all forms and ways to complete different activities
Touching you've made a foolish attempt which is where this becomes of sensitivity
To create thoughts in words that fought what you believe in
Is different from being able to type slash write mask hype in words that prove who'll win
And to lie about who you taught makes you like a false poet
Claiming one thing just to seem cool to those truly devoted
Now I see you're a sellout a joke from spit
My fame plans have nothing to do the my words of obscure nature
I'm gonna leave and start something called Dreams filled with haters
Or just prove people wrong as I constantly do in my songs
Tell me who was being fooled all along?[DOUBLEPOST=1357894601][/DOUBLEPOST]Oh snap wow hehehe sorry about that, but its spam with a voice

Nah let me stop I understand Peace, but isn't the playground filled with trolls?
I didn't mean to post this up because I was still typing it wow =.=
Seriously if people are getting hurt, or as you say ticked I'll stop

 

Your reason why I will not say
Who I am helping to this day
No one deserves to suffer through your work
And I can you one perk
I can easily click ignore
I have done that before
And PaW thanks for the step in
This battle is something no one will win.

 

You're such a baby
I don't care if you ignore me or are my words too hazy
Can you not see of since you're in a different place
You think its ok to instigate?
I mean I won
And the only person here suffering at my work is you
It keeps eating at the fact that your skills are weak compared to my silly rapping
Hahahahaha lol yo this clown man hahahahah I'm done hahahaha lol I'm done please hurry up and ignore me

 

You think your words effect me?
How naive can you be?
Around this time each and every day it is a bore
So I thought "I can't take this anymore"
Your rap means very little
And my "talent" may be brittle
But that matters none at all
Because those who rise hit hard as they fall
I don't need to be known like a king of a castle
In my book it just isn't worth the hassle

 

You're shooting words that might just kill
I think it's best we all just chill
for now I think it's time we stopped
and let this thread be locked

 

It matters not Nights for you see
This is the end of this for me
I'm done wielding the lyrical knife
Because I actually have a life.

 

Dude it really isn't worth it you keep saying you don't care so stop replying and keep it to yourself. Why is this so hard for you to understand

What you have is not skill just ill will
I'd rather not have all eyes on me since I like to chill
Again you keep saying my raps mean very little
Been saying that same tune like the cat and the fiddle
You think since you have a huge ego its gonna stop this
Keep running up to me and that so called 'skill' will be demolished
You can have the last word with all honesty
You'll just keep proving my point so I think you need a lobotomy
Take that piece of your brain out so you can understand what's being said
If skill consists of constantly repeating yourself then I'd rather just dread
Then have to do the he said she said over garbage spread onto this thread
From there look as a viewer and rather be dead
Nah more like I wish this didn't happen instead
Laugh at kid who stunk
For being a simpleminded punk
Hope your words aren't as bad like the junk
You keep stored in your trunk
Forgive me I meant to say cranium
But I'm only filled with dark intent so Oda your dumb
I could get a better response from a bum
Then again I went to NYLC so I know his story of the slums
Experience here is key just impossible for a guy like N-A-Z
Hold the phone... THAT'S ME!!!
I knew this couldn't be
Then again I act as if I never had any friends so Nas... Can you love again?
I do and I can, but wait Oda said I can't so cancel those plans
He doesn't know me at all but since I rap I'm just dammed
Now I'm caught in this 3 letter jam
O-D-A and N-A-Z- with R-A-P now add an online community and what do you get?
One big headed ego guy who feels he's a threat
Another poser who knows what he's doing, but choose the wrong way to compose and get
Any reaction on a biased net
So what about the rap?
Who cares
I do it simply for the length of my hairs
The longer the wiser, but shammed thanks to liars who play fair

 

-_- now look guys, like Paw said, we need to tone it down. Now I speak more at you Naz as he is the instigator and is kinda annoying me with all the insults Also since I think it mist be said, I am buizy during the day and have an early bed time so I have to shut off my rythme for a few hours and try to type with the small touch screen made of the beans I need to bring for the shiny ring I need to buy before my time is up but I spent them not on the food or ring but my dream. Yup I may be weak but unlike you I can grow my skill outside your violence, so 'nuff of it when I get to it I will edit a bit of true wit into the middle of it and I mean by it my OP, you see and it is my dream for this to live, even when mods come with the thought of peace so we can stop this war that tried to tore it appart like my heart.
Or in human speak, I will edit my op after school with new rules. Also I did not think I was rapping writting that ss a matter if fact. God dang it I will smack it in the back of its head, me of course because not of choice I did it again. Will I ever win?
Also shout out to Nights for joining us!

 

Here I am, I've come back.
I was just hiding from the rap attack. (-.-)

Now that it's cooled down a bit,
I'm ready for you to yell at me.
So sorry for leaving you, but it
Was actually quite confusing.
I have no quarrel with Naz or Star,
So I could not keep up this far.
But maybe now that the insulting is gone,
I can stay, and more might come.

 

I'm the instigator really because of my insults
I wasn't the one who started it since it turned into a rap battle so don't talk
I proved countless times I'm not all about violence
But apparently this is what the crowd indulges in
The only reason why I have free time is since I'm out of college
Apparently I don't have a life then how can drop this?
I did go overboard with the disses and ask for forgiveness
Then again you went further than I expected
Since I suspected you wouldn't want to keep it up, but the further it went the more I regretted
Bringing that side right out
Not even mad at the fact I made others pout
Too much of the past came out and hit back like whiplash
Then infected the others likes SARS with it spreading quick fast
Now looking back on it
Your boy really is the one who started this
Driving him insane yet no one even said anything
I pop right back, but meant no disrespect which I now intend to forget
Then it was said I'm calling out to you when no said for you to step to the side
Part of the reason why going with that guy is nothing but bumpy rides
Constantly being told I reside
In dark and lack a soul or a heart
Which is the reason I made fool of his art
Mans has skill, but that ego of his caused unneeded ill will
Sorry Zelda, sorry Star to the both since it was you two that inspired me to come forth to be a new addition to your crew
A couple of jokes then someone who has high hopes when seeing me fall isn't what I call teacher qualities at all
No disrespect to anyone under my dudes wing
If it weren't for him I'm not sure my heart would attempt to sting
As if I'm supposed to reject the ideas of what I did wasn't proper at all
Yea it was no still is so get on your knees kid
*Down on both knees with my head down to Zelda and Star with the crown.*
Its crucial that you both really listen to what I need to say
I'm not down here for an idiotic apology
The pain inflicted was out of rash thinking, and pure ignorance
Although all of what was said came from experience
I would like to distinct those skills from what you were originally were listing to
Aqua is a side I hide for my heart dies from the lies, and eyes that are affected
My other persona's name kinda like Star when he had his Crona thang
Ever so sorry asking with nothing, but sweets from the actual lyrics I love to speak
I tend to study the style of others a lot like a geek
I enjoy looking at the sick and cwazy talented and super proactive about what they wanna complete
Or bashing people so to speak
Learning from this showed me to tweak
My other persona to my skills like an electric surge going in a creek