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Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics' started by Odamadillo, Mar 4, 2013.

  1. Odamadillo Twilight Town Denizen

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    Hello readers of my newest creation
    I send out a little recommendation
    Come here to rhyme honest and free
    No matter what the rhymes may be
    There is only one rule you must follow
    And that is what I can show
    All posts must be in rhyme like mine is now
    So rhyme in what ever way you know how
    All styles are welcome in this thread
    So I leave it to you for the word to be spread.
     
  2. nasirrich King's Apprentice

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    Been a while since I've last had a chance to speak
    Hope that what's said in the start will make others peep
    At what's going down
    Doesn't matter the type of flow or your sound
    Just come take a ride to this side of town
    Got many minds here that should be scooped for being dope
    Get ecstatic since you can showcase what you got with no rope
    To tell you how far you can go about doing this
    Take some time to unwind just a tad bit
    Been reckless in the past cause the gas inside my head
    Being a lit fuse made anyone who crossed me dead
    Never was like that just a trait that happened to stay stuck
    On me which put me in a huge rut
    Ended my beefs to prove not matter how tough life is
    Just walk with a clear mind and continue to truly live
    As who you are
    Screw those haters man don't let those chumps try to taint a star
     
  3. Sumi suicidé

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    if rhyming's the game
    and fun is the aim...

    then at the ends of lines
    are rhymes necessary,
    or is from time to time
    placement discretionary?

    to produce good meter
    at times it is found:
    rhymes are effective
    when inside is the sound.

    to recap the question,
    must rhymes be at ends?
    or can our rhymes come
    in a rhythmic blend?
     
  4. Odamadillo Twilight Town Denizen

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    As long as your replies have some kind of rhyme
    Then you can post here all of the time
    So spread the word of our new home
    The place all us poets can roam.
     
  5. nasirrich King's Apprentice

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    Enough of those lies that blind closed eyes with corrupt ties keeping the swines and those with fine signs together in a bind
    I hope the other poets have a steady grip
    On what they spit when they wanna rip and spill some sick wicked steady kicking realistic not fib tricks
    Putting yourself in a situation that has you facing skilled and honest
    Beings will have you hooked on phonics
    Nothing complicated about it

    Their calm is what makes you wanna repeat, scream, and shout this
    Kh-v has style that's straight lethal and deadly
    QLJ and Oda are proof that members here are nothing but blessed see
    Then you got a guy like me
    Not well known
    When it comes to spittin raw rhymes hand me a microphone
    I'm one of many on here who speak such words that'll makes you stay home
    Just so you can look up how they compile all of these thoughts like this alone
     
  6. Odamadillo Twilight Town Denizen

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    I may not have replied too soon
    But I was trapped by the giant buffoon
    Alas my rhyme shall be quite short
    Since this is my last resort
    Join in the readers here
    There is no reason to fear
    This is only meant for you to enjoy
    And a rhyme style is all you must employ.
     
  7. Zelda Living a lie

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    Hi, Everybody! How have you been?
    it seems I've been tricked into rhyming again.
    Poems are fun, as you can see,
    They just might be less fun for you than for me.

    The second line is being funny; I don't know why,
    But it won't let me capitalize my "i."
    Now, I am off to play The Sims 2,
    I really like commas, and good day to you.
     
  8. nasirrich King's Apprentice

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    If true rhymes is what you are after
    Kh-v is a very proud founder
    No superficial surroundings
    With bullets, fiends, cop hounds in
    Here to scare you away from thinking with your mind
    So collaborate in honor of being alive in this time

    See you maybe battered and badly bruised
    Please do not allow what has been going on to effectively choose
    How those who want to follow in your footsteps fill in your shoes
    Forget fitting in with those chump crews
    You're the only one that can make you lose
    Instead of getting proper dues
     
  9. Hiro ✩ Killing Machine

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    Hiya! Heeyeah!
    That is my initial idea
    However, as deceiving as my name may be,
    Don't believe everything you see.

    I am quite talkative, as shown here
    I always have a word if your willing to lend an ear.

    My most recent interest is Doctor Who
    It's a great series, I promise you!
    Clara is my wife
    I have never seen anyone so pretty in my life

    Now I bid you adieu
    I'll be back! Now see you!
     
  10. Odamadillo Twilight Town Denizen

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    It is good to see life here
    And you next reply draws near
    Spread to words to all around
    Mention where new friends can be found

    The whole point of here is to have fun
    So I hope your rhyming has just begun
    That is all I had to say
    So to all of you I wish a good day.
     
  11. nasirrich King's Apprentice

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    We rhyme here to have fun
    So come join in on this world wide run
    The possibilities are endless for what can be done
    Only peace here so don't think about being number one

    This is no competition for written compositions from misprints to verbal scripts in hidden tricks with subliminal dissin

    Just folks kicking while sittin on what they feel like spittin with no fear of who could be listening proving once and for all its not a street thing

    Create a song to make frowns be gone while looking along on other posts
    Is something to look forward too like french toast
    Alright that was gross, but once again we are here to help not boast
    Enjoying what people fiend for the most
    You want peace well you got it so just lay back and allow your mind to coast
    In doing that you have the ability to help promote
    This thread to help set sail to this lyrical boat

    Got flows from different parts of each hemisphere
    Wanna hate well buddy now your end is near
    The goal is pretty clear for the people here stay sincere
    So develop a new way a of thinking to keep a light heart to keep less carbon foot prints in our atmosphere
    Don't get what I mean by that just proves to mind your P's and Q's dear
    It falls onto you on where you want your mind to steer
    You can be in the front of the pack or the rear
     
  12. Odamadillo Twilight Town Denizen

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    I call out to all who like to make some rhymes
    Keeping it to yourself is one of your many crimes
    A gift like that is meant for you to share
    And now we've shown you where
    Let your spirit flow into your fingers
    Type in a place where talent lingers
    You can make is subtle or simple in style
    So join us here once in a while

    Nasirrich, Sumi, Zelda and HoT
    Have all had to guts to join me
    They didn't hide their skills away
    They took a chance and are welcome here any day
    So are you gonna join that list
    Take part in a chance that shouldn't be missed
    Join us here in your new home
    A place where us poets can always roam.
     
  13. mindstorm787 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Two sides of a coin
    By Ze Operator
    A person isn’t one; but two of a kind,
    They’re more than one, the heart that binds.
    One mere side shows the person you visibly see,
    The outer flesh, the person who tries to be,
    But there is one thing, which they cannot visibly see,
    The blinding lie that doesn’t show “ME!”
    The inner side, that blinds the eye,
    The Darker evil that binds the lie.
    The corruption within, the anger that cries,
    “Let me out, I want to see your friends suffer and die!”
    Clearly shows that you aren’t yourself,
    Making you look like a bottle on a shelf.
    The inner side, that claws to come out,
    Threatens your reputation,
    Worse than the threats emitted from the mouth.
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    BLOODLUST
    By Ze Operator
    The burden that plagues upon life, the strong or the weak.
    It has no bounds, destroying the mighty and the meek.
    Its path is unending; it goes abound on life's hell bending.
    Fool, follow this path and destroy your soul,
    Ripping it apart, until you are dull.
    As you crush the bones of the living to make your bread,
    You live in fear, you ran and fled.
    Life’s true meaning, is not taking the life of your neighbor,
    You are life's greatest hope,
    Don't give corruption its favors,
    And don't bear the fruit of its bloody labors.
     
  14. mindstorm787 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Time
    By Ze Operator
    As life confronts undeniable dead,
    There is a concept of life that needs to be fed.
    Whether it is alive, dead or in-between,
    This concept has passed the eyes of those who seen.
    This thing lives by our side from birth to death,
    Judging our choices, until we are nothing left.
    It dethrones kings,
    And turns metal to rust,
    As we try to stop these antagonistic things,
    It’s hard to get time to trust.
    Might as we may, we cannot beat it,
    For it operates in a straight line,
    But occasionally diverted, according to the laws of time.
    So live your life, try to be swell
    Otherwise, you might as well
    Be as worth as much the forgotten dead,
    At the disposal of time itself.



    Fire
    By Ze Operator
    Among the smoke, among the ashes,
    One would in encounter life’s claws and slashes.
    A living power, a living light,
    A raging force that brightens the night.
    The living flame, in all its might,
    Is fueled by anger and by fight.
    A furious monster within the pit,
    Brings loyalty and protection whenever it is lit.
    It sears anything that would do harm
    A burn here, burn there, on a leg, on an arm.
    But be wary, for that much power, given to one,
    Will burn you alive, a mistake that will never be undone.
     
  15. nasirrich King's Apprentice

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    I'll bring you all deeper within my mind that shoots off like a gun
    Killing off any of the fakes for fun
    So you can kick some fresh spits or just run

    Be lucky Obama is trying to take away my right to bare arms
    Walk around with an Uzi wrapped in my sweater like its my toy dog
    I won't even have to fire because I know you won't last long
    This isn't even a diss song
    Your boy Nas lives raw and balls

    Unlike frauds living off anothers innovation
    Which causes a lot of confron... Confrontation
    Debatable stakes raising in the same place you were raised in
    Unable to get a firm grip on it unless you went in for an augmon...Augmentation

    Takes place often
    In the same place of sin you face off in

    Now tell me whose the top dog without lying
    Or innocents will start dying
    Sorry just me committing lyrical crimes again

    Although I'm willing to have you spilling
    Like oil when they mess up drilling

    That's what happens to all those enemies trying to be friends with me
    Lacking any sort of skill to even walk in my community
    Now they want to try hard so they too can see
    The problem with that is those actions won't grant them munity
    Don't swim in these water if you don't possess the ability
    I'm just one of many ridiculous talents on kh-v
     
  16. Odamadillo Twilight Town Denizen

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    Haha there he goes showing no mercy once more
    Just tell me can you endure?
    Or will you fold like many before
    Heck some have even tried to hide behind the "hero" they adore
    Do you think that our skills are just as poor?
    Haha that just proves your brains should be on the floor

    Trying to be a guy with real skill
    But really enjoying the fake thrill
    Of knowing in time your worthless blood will spill
    It takes more than simple rhymes on your antidepressant pill
    It takes raw talent and a powerful will
    Only then can you go in for the kill

    Don't think this is an invite to diss
    This is just a message to you there little miss
    The sad fake kid no one wants to kiss
    Trying to intimidate with that imitation snake's hiss

    Yeah yeah that cycle wasn't as long
    But some of us don't need large rhymes to be strong
    Heck I can rhyme even without insperation's gong
    Think that makes me bad? Nope your wrong
    Because unlike you I have too much balls to fit in that thong
    Now I ask will you continue to be a stupid mong?

    Or will you go deliver a critical hit
    And show us your raw talent and grit
    Let the spark ignite your quick wit
    And forget those worthless piles of spit
    You let out while trapped in the fool's pit
    Or maybe that is just you in a tantrum or a fit.
     
  17. nasirrich King's Apprentice

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    Trying to send out some hidden hits will not get you any further in this then you are before the first riddled diss
    Now can you riddle me this?
    Can critical hits deliver powerful twists in the mind when others read along with it?
    How can raw skill not make those considered pro not have a thrill to try to whip
    Into shape to keep up with said fake just for a lyrical debate knowing they can't stay with

    That type of crowd
    For the truth spoken is just way to loud
    Creating bizarre sounds discouraging others to stick around

    This is what happens when you live the life of a serpent
    Others wanna say something reckless just roll up in a Viper then wipe them it's perfect
    Show some respect to the Veterans the rifles dispersin

    You want to squeeze so much talent out of something that thinks of your thoughts as past tense
    Meaning no matter what you do to try to bring something new its already been done stop being so dense

    Continuing to act as if you've been in that trench of wretched stench
    Oda will take you kids schooling you leave you sittin on the bench
    Tell me how you will go to resolve his teachings with all of your pent
    Up anger hoping to endanger what he's bought to a place poets won't have to resent

    What they wrote because the critics like to provoke until you choke to embody their image

    This blinds you from the fact the experience you have doesn't match that
    Of those whose carried hell on their back
    So why wouldn't powerful rhymes eat into the minds of those with small balls swearing they got a huge sack?
    What could it be that they lack to add to rest of the honorable pack?
    Speak with your heart think with your mind is a term many say is whack
    Part of the reason why beings try so hard to think, see, and embody the color black
     
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    Earth
    By Ze Operator
    A crack in the ground, a fissure in the stone,
    And among the dirt mound, this tool is defensive on its own.
    This power destroys mountains, and upturns seas,
    This stubborn element is difficult to appease.
    It is strong, but does not think,
    It acts on instinct,
    And destroys structural links.
    Masses of Earth can level cities and states,
    It is wise to stop the Earth’s rage before it’s too late.
    But on approval, this power will never falter or ever get meek,
    It protects till the end,
    And will always defend,
    The weakest of the weak.
    Enemies be warned,
    If you have scorned,
    The stigma of the Earth,
    Trials await you,
    Insulting the power of the mighty Earth,
    Flee while you still can,
    And this best and true.
     
  19. nasirrich King's Apprentice

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    There's a living legend on here about this boy Nas when it comes to rhyming dude is HOT!!
    Many have tried to challenge and once they saw he was too much for them to handle they were like STOP!!!
    He kept going knowing how little control they have over him in the rhyming BLOCK!!
    Staff came around like cops reporting that they got complaints of verbal assault up in the SPOT!!!
    Even they weren't able to stop it so they got back up for his rhyming popped off like live SHOTS!!
    Nas then had to keep order so he changed his flow like frozen water doing his job for he was on the CLOCK!!
    It’s said he pays a shrink to tell him basically stating that what he does lyrically shows how psychotic he is NOT!!!
    The rumble from the sheer force from his intense wordplay has cats purchasing aftermarket SHOCKS!!!
    To underestimate his craft claiming to have supreme skill you better be prepared to fight to stay on TOP!!!!

    Lyrically I'm Untouchable, Uncrushable ask your friends who's the Illest
    From that alone you should understand I'm here to kill hits
    Prospering from eradicating the fib gibberish taking out the ridiculous
    Vaporizing the ignorance just so others are able to walk with bliss
    Tell me who's able to dish out spits crazier than this

    Let me re-state for the mistake for others might think I am trying to tarnish the greats
    This is not a debate on who the best is to date
    I was stating how serious I am when saying I wasn't playing

    On when I said I stay true to my craft
    Many others only do it just too see cash
    If that's the case then you should think fast
    I've come to take you out in a flash
    Post that pic of what happens when you like to do things adding a dash

    Of effort hoping to see if that'll make your feeble attempts work
    You do this for the wrong reason so me calling you out can't make me the jerk

    I know my history of this sort of art you see
    The first line of my second verse came from B.I.G.
    I only said to show how real I came with it be

    Honestly if you think you'd stand a chance do me a solid
    Prove you contain more skill then those on kh-v and rock this
    Claim you're hot so I can come heat seek ya like a rocket
     
  20. Zelda Living a lie

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    Okay, I've been avoiding this for way too long.
    It's time to get back, I've been doing it wrong.

    I feel the need to not post more,
    If only to remain as I was before.

    And to add to the fun,
    It would be just one
    Post until I will
    Have the next title.

    And since it's getting rather late,
    I now have just one thing left to say:

    Congratulations, everyone,
    For staying here and having fun.
    I know that it's only begun,
    So I hope to stay until it's done.