KNIGHT's Code

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I'll have to read it tomorrow. I have to log off momentarily.
BUT I WILL READ IT. :ninjacat:

 

FINALLY. :/8D:

It was good! It took you a long time, but it was good. 8D I hope Alaric will be okay. ; ; I imagined those...wolves-like animals with only their eyes visible. It was an interesting image. XD The ending was interesting. I already know who those people are since you told me about it a long time ago and refreshed my memory again the other day. 8D

I'm really wondering when Ashley will show some gratitude to Alaric. DX He really deserves at least something from her. ; ;

Anyway...I hope the next chapter doesn't take too long. D: Glad you finally updated though. ^^​

 

(I finally found the time to read it! >8D)

You're quite good at writing battle/action scenes. You describe it in a way that doesn't bore the reader; varied descriptions and such. c:
The wolf-creature things seemed a bit random. I'm not sure why they encountered them in the sewers. o.O

Other than that, it was really good. : D
And I don't need to tell you to update more. :B|:

 

:/8D: YOU GAVE THE HINT THAT ASHLEY SAW ALARIC NUDE.

Anyway...Cathal interests me somehow. It'd be nice to see more of him later on. But...it was interesting to read all of that. 8DD I'm glad you updated quicker this time too. So I'm hoping the next chapter comes out soon as well. It'd be nice to see how Ashley and Alaric get along now. XD

I was happy that Ashley was finally...nice to Alaric. She's been so mean to him since the start of the story. ; ; Ending was rather...funny. I couldn't stop laughing. XD As I said above, you really gave the hint as though she had seen him naked, but I'm glad it was only half naked as you told me.

Can't wait for the next chapter~ 8DD​

 

I really have no idea what was going on with the coloured dialogues, but I see I wasn't really supposed to have an idea. <<>>

Relationship hinting-ness! >8D (omg, finally). And Cathal seems like he's going to be interesting to work with. I can't wait to see if he's going to turn out to be a good guy or a bad guy.

Continue! :=D:

 

Vi read the last chapter to me over the phone and I must say hearing out loud, I could imagine what was going on. Despite the fact that I haven't read it since chapter two. Anyway, I loved the ending. I had to get Vi to read it over again. I think I will pick back up on this story. I find it good that a later chapter could bring me back to it. Keep it up.

 

Yayyy. Finalllyyyyy.

I'm a little sad that you've updated your stories with short chapters, but I really hope you update soon with longer ones. ;__; But anyway, I'm just curious what plan Alaric has. @-@ By the way Ashley reacted, seems like it's some sort of crazy yet awesome plan. XDD I want to know what is it.

I don't have much else to say except that you should just updated sooner. ;__; Like now.

 

Sometimes short chapters are necessary to break up the longer action-packed ones.

For some reason, Ashely's dialogue really stood out; I could really hear the differences in their accents.

There does seem to be a lot of ellipsis, which break up the dialogue more than necessary. Cut back on those and it will be a smoother read. c:

I want to find out what this grand scheme is! :'D