Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth

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  1. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    A new story i'm doing with my little sister rexmildd:D
    I can add you in this story if you'd like!:D Just pm me or tell me on post...yeah...








    Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth

    (prolouge)



    Noemy was looking out the window. It was nighttime, all the power was off.
    Stars were sparkling in the night sky. The moon was shining. It was all beautiful.
    Staring into the sky, a shooting star passed by. Noemy gasped and sighed after putting her hand under her chin.
    "I wished many times, and they never come true!" Noemy thought outloud.
    She sighed and closed her eyes whispering, " I wish Kingdom Hearts was real...on Earth!"

    Noemy opened her eyes and jumped in her bed under her sheets. Closing her eyes it was pitch black.



    She just had to wait and see if her dream came true.








    Liked it? Me and my little sister made it up....at times i wish Kingdom Hearts were real
     
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  5. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Sure you can join!!:D
    Im gonna write my first chapter in the next few days maybe friday or thursday not really sure when to write the next chapter:D

    I need you-

    Name:( Can be real or fake name)
    Canada or USA or other...

    what you wanna be when kh comes to earth..

    Here's mine to get the idea

    Name: Noemy(soon to be Mexony)
    Canada or USA or other: Canada

    I wanna be in the organization... a new organization to create:)
    I wanna have powers..

    Yeap:D

    Perhaps i'd do the first chapter first....it might be short but worth it...i was going off in 5 mins so im typing the fast I can.





    Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth
    Chapter 1 - The Wish came true.





    Noemy opened her eyes, the light was shining through the blinds. It was bright outside. Slowly she got out of her bed, she rubbed her eyes and stretched out with a yawn.
    "Yet another morning that will repeat" she muttered.

    As Noemy walked down the stairs she found her little sister Mildred eating some sunny side up.
    "Hey sis! Guess what, there was a shooting star last night and i made a wish!" She excitedly said.
    I grinned raising my eyebrow.

    "Oh really?What was your wish?" I asked, still grinning at my smiling little sister.
    She pointed to her plate, with sunny side up.
    "Oh, hahaha!" I laughed.
    I rubbed my eyes and looked out the window.
    All of a sudden I saw a man in an armor suit, walking with a keyblade.
    "Oh my heart." I whispered.

    My heart was pounding fast.
    "My wish came true...my wish came true!" I gasped.
    My little sister cocked her head with a small stare.
    "What you talking about?" she asked ina confused face.
    "My wish... I wished for Kingdom Hearts to Come to Earth!!!" I excitedly said.

    To be continued.

    Sorry if it was short i only had five minutes so yeah welp hoped you liked it and please comment if you'd like:D
     
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  7. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Sure:D

    Im adding you in:D

    Here it is! Chapter 2 on this story:D





    Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth
    Chapter 2: Jack's discovery.




    My little sister looked at me.
    "You..wished for Kingdom Hearts?" she asked, still confused.
    I nodded excitedly, putting my hand on her should i turned her to the window.
    "Look! A knight!" I excitedly said.
    "Ohhh! Cool!" she gasped.

    I nodded, putting my shoes on.
    "Where you going Noemy?" My little sister asked.
    I turned to her and back.
    "I'm gonna say hi to the knight!" I said, I ran out opening the door running to the knight, I was only 5 steps away from the knight.
    "H-Hi!Knight!" I called.
    The knight turned his head to me and stuck his keyblade out.
    "Who are you?" His voice was deep.
    "I'm Noemy!I see you weild a keyblade!Impressive!"

    The knight took 3 steps forward and grabbed the collar of my shirt.
    "Nice armor! I like the way it's disigned!" I said. The knight dropped me and pointed his keyblade to my face, ready to slice me.
    "Who are y-"
    "I'm not a heartless man! I'm a somebody! You know...a person with a heart!"
    "Who are y-"
    "Dude! Not a heartless! Can't you see me! I'm all in pj's and we're starting a fight already!?"
    "Silence!" he yelled.

    I closed my mouth and looked at his shiny armor, half there was damage.
    "Who are you?" He asked in a calm deep voice.
    I gulped and slowly stood up.
    "I'm Noemy I already said, and i'm from Earth!Canada!" I happily said, swinging my arms back and forth.
    "Earth?A...new...world?" He whispered.
    "Yeap!"

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    In the USA, jack was walking around the park, back and forth.Bored.
    He sighed and looked to the sky, it was greyish, it looked like in any minute it was about to rain.
    "Such a boring day." He whispered to himself.
    While listening to nothing but silence, he saw a black thingy creeping around in the sand.

    "W-What?"
    Jack took a step forward to get a closer look.
    It was a heartless, creeping back and forth in the sand, until it saw Jack.
    "Uh-oh." Jack said, he turned around running for his life, trying not to get his heart stolen.
    The heartless was following him.
    "Since when was they're heartless on Earth!" He asked himself.

    He kept on running, until he stopped. It was catching his breath for some air.
    Panting and panting repeatedly.
    The Heartless was getting closer, very closer. Jack wiped his forehead and turned around.
    The Heartless jumped, Jack closed his eyes sticking his hand out to a stop sign.

    A cold rasp of ice flew out of his hands, attacking the heartless.
    Jack opened his eyes and saw the heartless on the ground.
    "Wha?" he whispered. The heartless got up and jumped forward to Jack.
    The heartless jumped on Jack, trying to reach for his chest to grab his heart.
    "Get..a...way!" He yelled, fire came out of his hands, hitting the heartless.
    It dissapeared.

    Jack panted again and looked at his hands. He closed his hand into a fist and looked up to the sky.

    What just happened? How did Heartless come here? When did this start!? How did I get magical powers!!!!

    Jack walked away,into the streets. While he was walking, each step he took was a weird feeling. The only thing he felt now was the wind blowing and his legs moving and the liquid dripping.
    "I must know..." he whispered.
    While walking he saw a gang of boys walking to him having their hands in their pockets, giving a grin upon their face.
    Jack glared. It was the bullies.

    "Hey Jack-o-lantern!" They called. Jack tightened his teeth together.
    "You should get home!" The called out again.
    Jack glared.
    "I know you have some money in those pockets so pass em!" They ran to jack jumping on him.
    Jack punched some on their faces trying to get through them.
    "Get off!!!" he yelled.
    A lightning bolt came down smacking them out cold, for a little while.
    "Huh?" Jack got up wiping the dust off him.

    He looked at them and ran before they woke up.
    "I got powers...awesome!" He said.
    As Jack was running, a figure took his arm and pulled him in, covering his hand over his mouth.
    "Don't bite or scream...come with me..." a voice said.
    Jack nodded, he was shaking cautiosuly, scared that he would be kiddnpapped for life..or worse...murdered.

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    Jack was getting sleepy, as he was carried he was in the woods laying on the mudd that was wet.
    "Where...am..I?" He asked himself.
    "Welcome." said a figure.
    "Show your self! Or i'll take serious charges!" he yelled.
    They're were chuckles surrounding him, about 12 people..or more...
    "Gladly." one said in a deep voice.
    Portal came in showing 12 people in black cloaks.

    "Your...your...Organization XIII!!!" Jack yelped, running in circles.
    "Indeed...and..how did you know...?"
    Jack took a deep breath and looked at them in a smile.
    "Well...I knew you all ever since Kingdom Hearts 2 came out! Umm take off the hoods!" Jack commanded excitedly.

    "What ever..." One said in a bored motion voice.
    They all took their hoods off and looked at Jack, who was smiling excitedly.
    "Oh my god!!!!It's you! Um your Xemnas,Xigbar,Xaldin,Vexen,Lexaeus,Zexion,Saix,Axel,Demyx,Luxord,Marluxia and Larxene!!!!!!!!"

    They all had suprised faces.
    "Tell me..what's your name.." Xemnas asked calmly.
    "I'm Jack!!!" Jack excitedly said.
    Xemnas nodded and summonded a heartless out.
    "You shall become one of us...a Nobody...we shall become Organization XIV!!!" Xemnas said, with a little grin.
    "Woo hooo! One of you-wait! One of you!!?" Jack asked, he looked at the same heartless, only their were 20 times more.

    "Wait Wait!!!" Jack yelled.
    The Heartless jumped and scratched him and started to get to his chest..where the heart was.
    "Leave me alone!" Fire flew out casting some heartless away.

    "Do it Axel." Xemnas said.
    Axel grinned,"Certainly."

    He summoned out his chakrams and grinned.
    "This'll hurt alittle Jack-o-lantern!!" Axel screamed.
    Jack gasped, he was attacked, one hit and he flew across to the tree, bumping his head, causing some blood coming out of the back of his head.
    "Ow..." Jack whined. That hurt lot...
    Heartless jumped on him and holded him back to grabbed his heart.
    "No...No!!" Jack yelled.
    The heartless took Jack's heart out.
    Jack's eyes went all the way back, leaving them white.
    Blood was spreading.
    "His Nobody will be somewhere...I know it..." Xemnas said.
    All the members nodded.
    "Search for him..the other half..which his Larxene,Marluxia,Luxord,Saix and Axel...go find Sora..or...some other children to kiddnap and turn them into Nobodies like us." Xemnas glared.

    "Go.Now."




    To be continued.

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    Kingdom Heart Comes to Earth
    Chapter 3: Keyblade in Luke's Hand




    Noemy was smiling to the soldier. The soldier noticed Noemy's face, just staring at him.
    "What? Got something on my armor?" He asked, checking his armor.
    She shooked her head and looked at him.
    "Take off your armor! I got extra clothes upstairs..I think they're your size!" Noemy said. The soldier shook his head.
    "No...now please..tell me about this..'Earth'." The soldier slowly said.

    Noemy nodded taking a deep breath...
    "Earth is a planet! Not a world! A planet! We breath air in here...Earth was formed by rocks and minerals i think..um, Earth is a planet with 7 continents, has provinces..towns,cities,countries and states." she said, rubbing her temples.
    The soldier sighed.
    "Not really what I was asking for...you see my world dissapeared and so did I in the middle of a war and I appeared in a tall house place, so i wonder around and I find you...techinally weird though..."
    Noemy nodded and walked to the oven grabbing a cup of coffee.

    "Hey soldier man! I made you coffee, I added sugar and milk in it." Noemy said handing the coffee over to his hands.
    He took it and looked at it with a cofused face.
    "Is this a trick?" He asked. She shooked her head and grinned.
    "Take your helmet off to drink it! It's good coffee I swear!" She said, with a grin.
    The soldier put down the coffee and looked away.
    "I don't want to take my helmet off."
    Noemy sighed and yelled her sister.
    "Don't worry 'we' will take it off one way or another!" She yelled.


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    Jack woke up, although he wasn't Jack. He was a Nobody, since Somebodies are randomly turned to Nobodies they must have an X in their names.
    Jack woke up, all confused, his head was aching from the pain.
    "Uh...what..happened?" He asked himself, he looked around surrounded in the woods.

    He took a step forward, the pain came through his leg and a crack snapped.
    The sound of one of his bones from his legs cracked.
    "Oh!Owwww!!!!" He cried.
    He layed down having his hands on his leg holding it softly and gently not to hurt it.
    "How did I end up broken?" He asked.

    "Found him!!!" said a girly voice yet evil.
    Jack gasped his eyes were widened he put his right hand out stretching and pulling on the ground to move.
    "Hey why you running jacky boy! It's us..oh wait..you don't remember us!" said a voice.
    5 people walked forward to Jack.
    "Come with us." said a deep voice. Jack shook his head and slowly stood up, he ran but fell only from 3 steps.
    "Trying to..run?" laughed a voice.
    One pointed to Jack, to his leg.
    "I think one of us broke his leg..which caused him to crack it and not be able to run...let's carry him back to the superior." said a voice.

    The walked forward with they're hands out ready to grabbed Jack.
    "No...get away!!!Away!!!!" Jack yelled. The took his arms and pulled him into a dark corridor.
    "Quit whining." The girly voice said.

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    In Europe, there was a boy named Luke.
    Luke was walking around a lot, he had nothing to do.
    When he heard a mumble around the lot.
    "Huh?" Luke ran and saw a teenager boy with grey hair to his shoulders,baggy blue pants, blue greyish eyes or aqua and a keyblade...way to dawn keyblade.
    "Hey!!!" Luke yelled.
    The person turned and ran.
    "Hey come back!!! I know who you are!" Luke called out.
    Luke ran after the person, the person stopped and was breathing for air.
    Luke caught up with him.

    "Hey! Stop running Riku!" Luke said.
    Riku was the person. Riku turned around and walked to Luke.
    "Is this ansem! Tell me are you Ansem!!! Did you do something with my friends!" Riku yelled pulling Lukes collar shirt.
    "No no! I'm luke! Big fan Riku your soooo cool! I can't believe your actually here!" Luke said in a girly voice.

    Riku sighed and dropped Luke's collar and summoned away his keyblade.
    "Tell me..er..um...Luka-"
    "It's Luke!" Luke corrected.
    Riku nodded, " Tell me Luke, where you from and where am I and how did YOU know MY name?" Riku asked putting his hand on his hip.
    Luke nodded grinned, "Well I'm from Earth in Europe! Your in Earth, Europe right now! Infront of my street!Uh...and! I know you because your Riku and your friends are Sora and Kairi and your from Destiny Island and your a game! I'll show you your on kh and kh chain of memories and kh 2!!!" He yelled, then breathing for air.

    Riku nodded and laughed a little.
    "Tell you what Luka-"
    "Luke!"
    "Yeah, tell you what Luke. You help me find my friends Sora and Kairi and the..king*cough* just incase. That alright?" Riku asked holding his hand out for a slap five.

    Luke smiled wide, without thinking anything else, "Deal!" he said slapping his hand on Riku's.

    "How do we get somewhere else."
    "Oh, theres an airport some km away...we can get there by ...walking!" Luke said. Riku nodded and followed Luke, whom was leading.
    "What an airport?" Riku asked.
    Luke laughed at his question, "Where planes take you somewhere..thats all I can say." Luke said.

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    The arriveed at the airport. Luke and Riku went in, they needed passport.
    "This is the airport!" Luke said spreading his arms out.
    "Nice..and full in there...so where we take the plane?" Riku asked.
    "Right this way!!!" Luke said, until some gaurds came in their way.
    "Passport!" one said.
    Luke chuckled alittle.
    "I wost my mwommy in the airport!!! Me and mi bwig brother are wooking for hwer" Luke cried.
    One of the Gaurds wiped their eye, before crying.
    "We will go look for your mommy, please. Wait here." they said, adn then ran off.

    Luke laughed hysterically and patted Riku's back.
    "It worked!" Riku said. So they ran to the plane...any plane..before it took off.
    So they ran and ran and passed everyone as they arrived Riku took Lukes hand and did a high jump before the doors closed.

    The made it.

    The walked to a seat and sat down relaxed.
    "Thanks!"
    Riku winked and rested," Damn this is soft!" Riku whispered.

    As they rested a scream came from the airplane!
    Luke awoke, Riku seemed to be in deep sleep.
    "Uh-oh!" Luke gasped, he then saw 3 heartless aboard on the airplane, trying to reach for the ladies heart.
    Luke got out of his seat and ran to the heartless with his fist.
    "Get away from her! Look over here buddies!!!" He snickered.
    Until a keyblade appeared in his hand, it was black and full of spike with navy blue. It hit one heartless.

    "I can...I can weild a keyblade!?" Luke said.
    He glared and smiled at the other 2 heartless.
    "Take this!!!" He yelled, furiously he slapped 2 heartlesses and they both disspeared into black ashes.

    "Wow...I did it! I can weild a keyblade! And a cool one!"


    To be continued.


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    Okay:D i'll do it on Friday the 26th cuz i only have 30 minutes right now which takes me an hour to write a chapter:) it'll be up tomorrow afternoon somewhere at 8 or 7:D
     
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    I'd like to be the leader of an underground movement against the heartless with a pistol keyblade (like FFVII AC)

    Rock on, also I'm doing my own fan fic entitled The Destined : http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=18173

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    Here it is folks:D enjoy and remember I can add you in the story anytime! All chapter will go on...for a very very long time!:D




    Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth
    Chapter 4: Heartless sworms in!





    The soldier was panicing, trying to get the two girls off of him!
    "Stop it! Just Stop it!" paniced the soldier. The girls laughed.
    "Not until you take you helmet off!"
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    In the United States in VA, there lived a female, always bored doesn't care about anything much.
    She was sitting outside on her door step, feeling the wind blowing through her hair.She sighed and looked around, it was getting really chilly outside.
    Until she heard her mother call her name.

    She stoof up and walked in, to her mom where ever she was calling her.
    As she entered the kitchen she sees her mom cooking, something in a pot.
    "Angel sweety why don't you go buy the groceries? It will only take an hour since we're very far away from the grocery store, please? Can you go to the grocery to pick up some food? You know the usual." Her mother said, chopping some veggies.

    Angel sighed without a word, she left taking the money from the 'family' savings.
    "Don't forget! Ok? Come straight home!" her mother called out. Angel sighed and muttered "What ever." After she left the house slamming the door, walking to the grocery store.
    Angel was walking along the sidewalk, keeping her head down, she was wearing a black scarf,navy blue jacket and more....
    She still had her head kept down, not looking where she was going.

    Walking looking at her boots, she saw a black antennae thing creeping around the road. She looked up, her eyes were caught on the heartless. She wondered why was there a heartless. Is this a joke? she thought.
    Angel took a step forward, stomping hard on the ground, it attracted the heartless's attention. It jumped towards her getting ready to snatch her heart away.

    Angel had no choice but to take charge she didn't say anything but concentrated on the heartless, coming for her.She took a stick out, remembering Kingdom Hearts 2 what Roxas did in his twilight days.
    Before the heartless attacked two keyblades appeared in Angel's hand.
    A Fire keyblade and a Lightning keyblade.

    "Wow." she whispered, she looked up and waited for the heartless to come for her. The heartless jumped and she attacked. It dissapeared with ashes flowing into the air. Until more heartless came, a group of them. A sentence she only said, " Get ready heartless i'm now known as a keyblade weilder!"

    She slanged the heartless 5 by 5. When there was one left she slanged it with a big slash and cling.
    Finally the heartless's were gone, her keyblades dissapeared into her hands.
    She was catching her air, panting.
    Until she heard a clap from behind.
    "Hello...my name is Zex-"
    Angel nodded, and said " I know who you are. Your Zexion in the Organization number 6. Don't ask why I just do." she said turning away.
    Zexion nodded taking steps forward, " Come with me and join the Organization, help us get hearts." he said.
    Angel bit her lips and turned around see his hand sticking out a few feet away.

    " I don't know...go leave and do it yourself" she retorted.
    Zexion glared at her and summoned his book (lexicon) out.
    "Very well then...i'll make you."

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    In Italy in Rome, there was a bored boy...who was bored.
    Tybic was his name. He sighed and looked up into the sky seeing just a clear blue, no clouds no nothing.
    "Today is the worst Saturday in my life!" he said.
    The wind blew and dry dirt from the ground flew causing it to go in peoples eyes.
    It went in Tybic's eyes, he gasped and quickly wiped his eyes, to get it off. He then saw a girl with dark red hair a pink kinda dress, puple shoes and a black hood.

    "K-Kairi? Or just someone imitating Kairi?" he asked himself.
    He stood up took a deep breath and walked towards the uknown person.
    "Hey um-are you ugh, Kairi?From Destiny Island?" Tybic asked.
    The red dark hair turned around, her hair swished when she turned around.
    It was Kairi.
    " Yes i'm Kairi, from Destiny Island. How did you know my name and where I came from?" Kairi asked, crossing her arms.
    "Oh, well you see your in a game called Kingdom Hearts and-bla bla bla! I can't say it all! Well anyways your in Italy, Rome! The great!"

    "Uh-oh." Kairi said covering her mouth. Typbic crossed his arms.
    "What? You don't like it here?" Tybic asked, with a stray face.
    Kairi shooked her head and pointed out behind Tybic's body.
    "No! Heartless! Their here!" she yelled.
    Tybic turned around and saw about 100 heartless crawling forward.
    "Aww man! Kairi summon your keyblade!" Tybic called.
    Kairi nodded and summoned her flowery keyblade.

    "You have a keyblade?" Kairi asked. Tybic shooked his head and grabbed a hard small rock in his hands.
    "Naw but-" A light came in his hands.
    Appearing was a keyblade! A pistol kind.
    Tybic had no words out of his mouth so he grinned.
    "Let's go!!!" he yelled charging to them.
    Kairi nodded and charged after.
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    Jack was in a black coat, it was big for his size.
    "You..happy jack?" chuckled Xaldin.
    Jack looked up and sighed looking back down.
    "I have...no heart..I can't feel anything." Jack said in a dark voice.
    "Leave him be." Xemnas said.
    "Jack you are now number 14 of our organization.You name is-"
    Jack looked up and glared at Xemnas.
    "Jaxck" he said.
    It was a simple name only added between his name, nothing knew.
    For there he kept it that way, in his thoughts he would change it.

    "Go forth Jack to a new..place-"
    "Canada." he responded.
    "Yes Can-da- go there and 'sense' if anyone has powers...very simple yes?" he said with a grin.
    Jack sighed and bowed to Xemnas like he was the king..." Yes Superior."
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    Luke was happily looking through the window on the airplane, until he heard Riku's voice..talking to himself.
    "Riku...I can weild a keyblade..." Luke said. Riku's eye caught his, he stared.
    "Weild a keyblade? How?" he asked tapping the chair.
    Luke sighed and looking up to the ceiling smiling.
    "Well...there was a heartless aboard on the plane and-"
    "WE"RE GONNA DIE!!! PLEASE WEAR YOUR MASK!!!" said the maid she was crying.
    Riku stood up, " What..happened? Tell me!" he demanded.
    The lady wiped her tears, "he pilots faded into ashes!"
    Riku nodded and walked to where the pilots controlled the plane.
    "Heartless...can't believe their here...this is unbelievable!!!"
    Luke walked in and summoned his keyblade out to attack.
    "That is a big heartless!" he yelled.

    To be continued


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    Awesome......:D.....but....I kind of like Zexion........anyway....the best thing about this story is....I ACTUALLY WON!......sorry....but...yeah....in every single RP I'm in(seriously.......EVERY single one..)....whenever I get into a fight with another person's character I always yield to them....ALWAYS.....even if I don't really want to....so.....yeah.....maybe you can make her apologize to Zexy? :D.......oh wait....I'm doing it again...ignore me and continue your fabulous story.
     
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    Other:she's 13 and has a big crush on Sora.she'd give anything to have a Keyblade and fight alongside Sora.
     
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    .......this is an awesome story.....:D I can't wait for the next chapter.....