Could Tell A Love.

OOC: Honey, this is THIRD PERSON POINT OF VIEW.
It mean you say your character's name instead of 'I'. Okay?
I beginning to loose my paitence.

BIC: Arriel saw the boy fall, and ran over to him.
"A-are you okay?" She said, hoping he didn't see her crying.

 

OOC: ok my bad again ill put it into third person

 

Cody continued to rub his head, oblivious to who was talking to him. "Yeah... I'm okay." Then he suddenly stopped rubbing his head and looked up at the figure who stood before him. It was... the princess?! He quickly bowed low to the ground. "I'm sorry I intruded. I-I'll leave as soon as possible!" This was rotten luck day for him.

 

Arriel sighed, and got up.
"You don't have to act like that in front of me." She said, annoyed.

 

Cody's eyes went wide. He slowly looked up at the princess. He felt the awkward silence slipping in. He slowly stood up and brushed himself off.

"Um... okay..." he decided to change his attitude around. He stuck out his hand bravely towards her. "My name is Cody... what's yours?" Hopefully that was the way she wanted him to treat her...

OOC: I have a feeling this is going to turn out to be an Ariel and Flounder friendship. XD

 

OOC: xD Maybe. (: I mean, Ariel was a princess too, and she needs a new best friend.. O-o

BIC: Arriel shook his hand, beginning to smile.
"Arriel." She said, smiling fully.

 

OOC: Is only exception of third person point of view by using I which only be used in diologe and be talking about himself or herself right.

 

OOC: lol, so very true.

BIC:

Cody felt his confidence build up and smiled. He shook her hand back and then let go of it. "So... uh..." Now he didn't know what to say. He slowly looked back up at her. "Uh..." He felt like such an idiot!

 

OOC: Third Person is when 'I' is only in dialogue. That's right.
Very true. (:

BIC: Arriel smiled, and began to blush.
"Do you want to walk around in the town?" She said, turning, but still looking at him.

 

Cody stood there and blinked for a second. Just a minute ago, he fell out of the tree. Now the princess herself was asking him to go on a walk with her around town. "Sure!" he said bashfully. He walked up until he was beside her and then smiled at her. "So where do you want to go exactly, Arriel?"

 

OOC: ok then

Seth was up in a random person's roof and all of the sudden a dark and light me started to talk to Seth. They said, " You can pick your own path and but theres danger in both sides. You could go with the light or the dark. Light and alot of people would try to kill you, but if u go into the darkness, the darkness inside you would end up killing you. So which path would you take?"
Seth had replied," I would go to the Light. I rather have people kill me than be killed by my darkness."
"So u would have people hate u than be with the darkness. OK I cant change ur mind. Your path is set."
Then they dissapear. Seth fell down and started to sleep.
OOC: sorry to make it so long.

 

OoC: Um...that was long? O.O

Arthur walked around the town, occasionally taking an apple out of his pocket and sinking his teeth into it. Several people asked him for an autograph while some simply stared at him with adoring eyes. Finally, he arrived back at Joshua's apartment.

"Hey, what's up?" Josh said, looking up from a book he was reading.

"Not much." Arthur said, tossing the core of his apple into the trash. "Don't you think it's kinda boring just sitting in here?"

"I guess. But, nothing's wrong with reading a book, right? Think fast!"
Quickly, he threw the book as hard as he could straight at Arthur. To his surprise, Arthur snatched it out of the air in the blink of an eye.
"Um...whoa..." Josh muttered, his eyes widened.

"Don't try testing reflexives with me." Arthur said, turning around so that he was no longer facing Josh. "Don't you remember? I was always more athletic than you."

"Really?" Josh said with a smirk as he stood up and walked towards the door. "How about a race around the whole city? The fountain in the middle of the city is the finish line. You in?"

Arthur spun around, a competitive grin on his face.
"Yeah." he said, opening the door. "I'm gonna remind you exactly how pathetic you are, compared to me."
They both laughed and were in a few minutes right outside of the apartment building.

"Ready..." Joshua said, leaning forward. "Set...GO!"
The two boys began to sprint off.

OoC: All I could think of... >.>

 

Seth all the sudden came in to this part of the area and asked," Whats going on here?"

OOC: my long is not actually long though it just that i didnt write the long i could had thought of so sorry.

 

Elsie clutched her staff tightly an watched the fight. Her heart was racing in her chest. This was going to add to the pain he was going to feel once the gauntlet spell worn down. "Come on Grey..." she whispered quietly. "You can defeat him..."

 

Elsie couldn't just stand by, but Grey insisted to take on this guy on his own. Her magic didn't even have that much effect on this guy. Her knuckles were turning white, hoping that Grey would be okay.

 

Elsie could see the fight was over. She ran over to Grey without a moments hesitation. "Grey!" She kneeled down next to him. Something was wrong, but she didn't know what.