You Ruined my Life

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  1. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    I'm standing here
    all alone
    I thought you
    would be the one
    but now i realize
    that i was wrong

    I feel rejected
    I'm hated by all
    nobody loves me
    but i thought you did
    until the day when you
    broke my heart

    I thought you said
    you loved me
    but I guess that wasn't true
    so now thenks to you
    I have nobody to call out to

    These warm tears
    that run down my cheeks
    symbolize the pain
    that you have caused me
    I really thought you were the one

    I showed you my feelings
    and I stayed by your side
    but now look where i stand
    alone and with nobody
    to care for

    Being with you
    was the stupidest thing
    i have ever done
    so now i realize
    that I can't count on anyone
    and I can't trust you

    You ruined my life
    and now i stand here crying
    all alone in the rain
    I hope you're happy now
    because I will never love again
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    I can hardly believe that i keep writing depressing poems such as this... -.- well i hope you enjoy it...
     
  2. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    It looks like something that I writed for almost everyone in the family.
     
  3. Trace000222 Merlin's Housekeeper

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    woah..........thats.....not like you....
     
  4. Devil's Angel Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Uhh...thats what me or amythest would write....this weather is making you sad right?
     
  5. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    yes... i know this is completely unlike me... and i don't know if it is the weather or what that is making me depressed... I am going to take a few minutes to try and cheer up... maybe clean my pigsty of a room... >.< be back in a bit...
     
  6. Last of the Organization Twilight Town Denizen

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    Good length.....no rhyme but thats ok....going to have to say the atmosphere is depressing....don't really like it....more of a happy poem person as I've said before.....I hope what ever has got you down you will find away around it....and I hope you get to feeling better soon.....
     
  7. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    *smiles* Thanks... I don't really like it all that much either... no rhyme scheme because I don't know how to do that very well (lol)... and for some reason I feel better now that I cleaned my room... O.o so... yeah...
     
  8. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Still, that poem expresses perfectly what I feel for the family, maybe more hatred, no, I am not depressed, somehow my depression turned into anger.
     
  9. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    ..................................

    well i'm glad you liked it, anyways... O.o
     
  10. Nymph of Destiny Chaser

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    Great poem...everything's okay though...? *hugs* Unless you're just writing this for fun...I write depressing poems like that all the time myself, that's why. XD But anyway...I love it, awesome job. :) It actually reminds me of one of Avril Lavigne's songs...
     
  11. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    I acctually wrote it during one of my depressed times this weekend... but everything is fine now... :)
     
  12. Crumpet In your shadow, I can shine!

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    well sad poems dont always mean your sad
    but it was great
     
  13. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Lucky for you, because I am depressed right now -_-.
     
  14. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    I'm glad everything is good for you. It makes me sad to see people writing such sad poems around here. It makes me want to give TONS of cyber-hugs.
    It was a good poem, anyway. Maybe writing it helped you feel better.

    And Chaser007, you now get a cyber-hug!
     
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