Erm..yeah.. I just feel like spilling out some emotions. Be braced for something that's bound to be dreadfully shocking. You don't understand 'Cause you're not the one Alone in the dark Dark smears under your eyes and trailing down Down onto your cheeks Hands shaking Shaking 'cause you don't know What tomorrow holds Heart clenching Then breaking But it's okay Yesterdays mask will hold No need to cry any more The cracks in the smile won't show You just don't know. Okay I'm sorry it's probably terrible.. I just need to vent some emotions and this kind of helps...
Writing is the best way to get emotions out..don't think it's terrible. I like seeing this kind of writing, because it has heart. Something going on then? I hope you're feeling alright
hit me with a hamer and call me strang on a surten level it's great. reminds of a friend from my old school. she make this kind of poems.
thanks, dude. Yeah I never used to write poetry, especially not this kind, but I might actually make a habit out of it.
i don't mind. mayby some great thing will come out of it. PS: i put chapter 5 online yesterday this just in case you didn't got my massage my pc was tripping yesterdag when'd i sent the message.
reiss10, dont spam. Spam is for the Spamzone. wow im really not one to talk. But back to the poem. i really loved it Obsessed. Nice emotions. that might make a nice signature...
