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shhh... 'tis my secret ninja nickname :ninja:
agent bunnycuddles... :P

yeah... I kind of ran out of ideas, though :sweatdrop: I'm actually thinking of taking out that paragraph altogether >>

 

xD

I'm too lazy to read it right now...Give me a minute or two.....Dx​

 

Destiny there are hardly any mistakes.But there are two I caught.Your letter:

Dear Principal,

I would like to express a bit of my concern with you. Recently, I was scanning the internet and I came across an interesting article. It stated that a boy had been shot and killed by his friends for being gay. I noticed that this boy was not that old, and that this was a ridiculous reason for somebody to be killed. However, I found something else in that article that I thought was a great idea.

The second portion of this article explained about a national event called the "Day of Silence". The day of this event will be April 25th, my sister,my friend, and I will be participating along with thousands of others across the globe. On this day, any person who is participating is suppossed to remain silent for the entire day. Many kids think that they can't go a day without talking, so they may tape their mouths shut. The reason for this is to silence the namecalling towards all gay, lesbian, and bi people who get picked on every day. I believe that it would be great if alot of kids from Kittysworth K-8 participated in this event.

Lately, I've seen many kids at Kittysworth K-8 get made fun of for being gay, lesbian, or bi. I feel that this is unfair. They should be treated just like everyone else. So, if the school participates, then we could give all of the gay, lesbian, and bi people a chance to fight back for equality and to feel like they're not any different than me or you, if only for one day.

Also, this event may help students learn a bit about discrimination and see how it is wrong. Many kids don't understand the importance of equality, so they go and pick on other kids. Any person should be aloud to be whatever they want to be, without people making fun of them.

So, I was hoping that you could help me get the students at Kittysworht K-8 to participate, or at least introduce the event to them. I feel that this would be a great learning experience for these students, and it would be great to have as many people as possible to participate. If you want to learn more about the Day of Silence, then go to http://www.dayofsilence.org/. Thank you very much for your time and consideration.

Sincerely,
Bunnycuddles


Well those are the only mistakes I found.Maybe there might be others that I didn't find and someone else will find them.

 

This writing reminds me of the The Day of Silence page in my newsletter. Yay middle school. Finding some mistakes..Not bad but this should should work, after reading it was an inspiration to me. ( In my opinion)

 

T_T

You are my hero sweetie <3

 

Thanks, guys... ur teh bestest <3

 

Hey

I just came back from eating.That pizza was good.

 

yumm xD

 

mmm pizza.

3 pages done, only 5 more to go (yes that's right, it's between 8-10 pages not 10).

 

yep i knew it!!!!!

 

There's no more pizza I ate it all *frowns*


I actually wrote 10 pages one time when I took a college class last year in July and August.I found it simple.

 

booo no more pizza. Most papers are easy, problem is that this is about italian literature, in italian.

 

I had to write a story about 8-10 pages long.I did struggle a little bit when i was writing but then thats when I fell in love with writing.Thanks to that college class I now love to write.

 

i like to listen to music and take long walks on the beach...
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lol...

 

Hai guys . . or . . new family! : D

 

Saint that was random lol

 

RS! *tackles* Hai! =D

 

*ish tackled*

HIYA DS! : DDD

What ya up too?

And like I got a favor, will you read this, and tell me what you think? I think it suck! Dx

http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=48345

 

There's alot of grammatic errors, but that is easily corrected. On a personal note, I don't like the font or the center aligement. I'm a traditionalist when it comes to stories i'm afraid. On the plus side, you really describe each character well, and you include those little details that most writers overlook, I like that.

 

i r invisble family ;D

HAI RAINBOW STONER
LIEK OMG *glomps*