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  1. Xinochlas Merlin's Housekeeper

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    So have some new poetry:

    Those Stars
    I laid outside on the grass and watched the blinking stars tonight.
    I wondered if by some cosmic power, our pupils met by starlight.
    I wondered if the stars themselves could reflect how I miss you.
    I wondered if the stars could reflect a Love so pure and true.
    I continue to wonder these things as we lay under the same sky.
    If stars could be messengers I don't believe they'd tell a single lie.
    I press my key to my lips and gaze as I await your timely return.
    Though the anxious emotion that rests may intensely burn,
    I shall remain patient for the arrival of your company once more.
    For now the stars serve as our ship, and the sky serves as our shore.
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    Sorry it's pretty short, things have been... Wild this Summer.
    Hoping to be around a bit more often.
    Best wishes!
     
  2. Technic☆Kitty Hmm

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    As always, this was absolutely stunning. You're poems are always formed in a way that's almost breathtaking. The images depicted with the flow and rhythm of your poems are so intense. I can always feel the emotion pouring out of the words. This was a lovely little poem. That last line was magnificent. As always, waiting for your next poem. ^^
     
  3. Xinochlas Merlin's Housekeeper

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    You're too kind to me, Nights. I appreciate it very much!