The Organization Band chapter 3

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  1. RRMS Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Ok this chapter is alot shorter than my rest but ill make chapter 4 a bit longer

    ~~Chapter 3~~

    At the castle that never was,
    “Get up lazy bones!†Yelled Axel into Roxas’ ear.
    “What?†asked Roxas
    “We need to practice, AND our first concert is today!!!†yelled Axel
    “….â€
    “WE NEED YOU NOW OR ELSE!!!†screamed Axel getting out his Chakrams
    “Ok ok no need to burn me!!!!†screamed Roxas
    “Just get up†said Axel walking out of the room

    When Roxas got down to the courtyard he saw Demyx playing his Sitar while jumping in random muddy puddles.
    “Ummm…Demyx what are you doing?†asked Roxas
    “Waiting for you†said Demyx continuing to jump in muddy puddles while playing his sitar.
    “Now that we have Roxas let’s go!!†said Larxene happily
    They walked through a portal and found themselves in a High school.
    “Ummm Axel are you sure this is where were we are meant to perform….†Asked Xaldin
    “Well…Ummm…†Axel said as he started running away from the angry band members
    “Well I like it†said Larxene
    “Duh, you’re a girl†Said Zexion

    Larxene followed some girls to a gossip room and they dragged Marluxia along because they thought he was a girl, Despite his flat Chestedness (Well Larxene is a bit flat chested)
    “You have a gossip room?†asked Marluxia
    “Ha you just sounded like a boy†said a girl in a Black dress
    “That’s because I am one, you girls just ignored me when I was TRYING to tell you in a boy…†said Marluxia staring at Larxene who was giving him a ‘stop yapping and go away’ Look
    Larxene got annoyed and thundered him out.
    “Ow…†he said rubbing his head as he got up. He went to the stage and saw Zexion, Axel and Roxas being chased by some crazy fangirls
    “Idiots…†he said to himself
    “HEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!†Screamed Roxas
    Marluxia summoned his scythe and threatened to chop off their heads if they didnts stop annoying the guys
    “Thank you†said Axel

    They played their song and everybody clapped and cheered, when they left the all started bashing poor Axel,

    After they went away Larxene thanked him and he just lay there, waiting for help…

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    Poor Axel...................
     
  2. Sce13 Banned

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    poor Axel!

    Good Story! I like them....Message me whenever the next chapter comes out! please!
     
  3. ...::/final_falling\::... King's Apprentice

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    same here, tell me when its out, this is good
     
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  5. RRMS Gummi Ship Junkie

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    thanx guys i will message you when the next chapter comes out!!
    i feel special, i never knew my storys would be so popular
     
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