The Next Organization

" some things stay secrets and some things are to be told all of us do things others couldn't like i can't have your wepon and you can't have myn...and i dont care what you think of me as long as you work for my plan i dont even care for you..." she said and and warped to a little island floting in darkness " this is why i like being alone i dont have idiots trying to be all tough..." she sighed " now i can finally pull back my hood it sucks they saw my face no one has ever saw my face..." she pulled her hood back and layed down and looked at the darkness around her.

 

OOC: damn another Mary sue RP >.<

 

OOC: another wuty wut???

 

OOC: ugh ill explain it a mary sue as it is called is someone who usually makes an RP and makes them the mysterious character who has no past and has everyhting revolve around them. they are the best character out of anyone else, and are usually the main character leaving the RP more like their own story. almost as if you run the world... its almost like constant god modding the story to the way you want it.

heres from wiki

Mary Sue, sometimes shortened simply to Sue, is a pejorative term used to describe a fictional character who plays a major role in the plot and is particularly characterized by overly idealized and hackneyed mannerisms, lacking noteworthy flaws, and primarily functioning as wish-fulfillment fantasies for their authors or readers. Perhaps the single underlying feature of all characters described as "Mary Sues" is that they are too ostentatious for the audience's taste, or that the author seems to favor the character too highly. The author may seem to push how exceptional and wonderful the "Mary Sue" character is on his or her audience, sometimes leading the audience to dislike or even resent the character fairly quickly; such a character could be described as an "author's pet".

"Mary Sues" can be either male or female, but male characters are often dubbed "Marty Stu", "Gary Stu", or similar names.[1] While the label "Mary Sue" itself originates from a parody of this type of character, most characters labeled "Mary Sues" by readers are not intended by authors as such.

While the term is generally limited to fan-created characters, and its most common usage today occurs within the fan fiction community or in reference to fan fiction, original characters in role-playing games or literary canon are also sometimes criticized as being "Mary Sues" or "canon Sues," if they dominate the spotlight or are too unrealistic or unlikely in other ways.

 

OOC: im just stalling cause idk what to do when theres no one to fight im just having my charter wounder around im not trying to be mystrouis or anything...sorry...

 

OOC: it takes a lot more than that to get me to leave an RP i was just saying some people would leave at the first sight of a Mary Sue

 

OOC: lol just tell me when im being a Mary Sue and ill stop ^^' sorry i didnt mean to...

 

OOC: its cool i like this plot u set up i wouldnt want to leave it ^^

 

OOC: still just tell me and ill stop and fix it ull have to tell me though i dont have a great eye.

BIC:

Xathabat fell asleep.

 

OOC: will do ^^

BIC: Braxen dove into darkness and came out near twilight town. he decided he was going to walk the streets for a while

 

Xthabat woke up and went back to her room " i shouldv'e been nicer to him" she said to herself and layed down on the bed "and what was i saying i dont even have a plan for revenge.." she sighed..

OOC: oh gosh im more bored then my charter -_-'

 

OOC: me too >.<

BIC: "Braxen was thinking. I was kinda harsh. not your best first impression... and anyone who could help is good, id better see where she is He warped back to the strage house and looked for Xathebat

 

OOC: it suck cause i havent been on here for a really long time like all last year so im not in many rps so im not in much right now and your the only one on so im compltly booreeeddddss

BIC: Xathabat decided to go to the libabry and walked into the hall if i see him ill have to aploigize for my behaviour...

 

Braxen turned the corner and saw her "oh! umm hey, sorry i was acting like an ass before"

 

"no im the one who needs to aplogize sorry" she pulled her hood more downwards and crossed her arms

 

"now if I were someplace interestin where would I be...this castle isn't very impressive it only leaves one mad and confused" Claire said out loud putting her arms behind her head with a yawn.

 

Xeol was laying on his bed in his room at the castle"im so bored"he said to himself

 

since he didnt reply she just walked around him towards the libary

 

Xeol stood up"i see whos in the library"he said to himself then started heading to it

 

Xathabat sat down on a chair and opened a book out of random about American History.