Spontaneous Combustion

Ah, so here's your poetry thread. You know that I really like what I'm reading here. It's hard to pick a favorite, but "Lethal Yet Caring" is a masterpiece. Slick rhymes, lots of depth and boldly written. Keep it up, man!

 

Lust Of A Poet

Whoever writes it knows what this means
That moment when you just have so much passion in these verbal schemes
Doesn't matter what it is about as long as you continue the dream
Then when others view it they wonder if what you write is as real as you make it seem
That's when you put your all into it so even the haters will get sucked in like a tractor beam

From there lyrically you can preform Armed Robberies
Getting people to follow your word like Socrates Philosophies
Keep going there's no stopping it see
This lust will help stop these mockeries
Even if it has to be taken to a level that's atomic be
Now the lust is becoming richer like you've won the lottery

Check it, you'll slaughter anything getting the attention of crime squads
Shine brighter than the Ultra Violet light used in forensics my god

Thus creating a massive pandemic
Religious sects claiming the words are created with devilish penmanship
So much of the negative attention just stay with this
I'm been trying to tell you the lust helps creates fresh sick spits
Showing the sick word play that you haven't used until it... Took Over

Got people swearing its all luck from a four leaf clover

So if I say I personally hearse trainers man they gotta get ripped
Equal to what the usual do when trying to confuse you as to what's hip?
I didn't think so the lust has taken over, but I've mastered the ability to control it

Those coming up have that single hot line
One verse Assassin I'm telling you that's not fine
Silly punk I'm everlasting got you cats stay asking how can you continue to be surpassing expectation of washed up has beens this isn't even a classic its a crime
The flow has the ability to eradicate time
Now that's what I call a paradox swine

To do this when the surge comes
You need to pace the rate before you hesitate when asked to help bring those out from the slums
Some says its dumb but your words have more impact than that of a military grade gun
To take an individual out from the criminal route would make anyone stop the pouts scream and shout your name so when they see you on tv that's when the fun
Sprung into action like Spring Break so many people are packing just to go the area that'll host you as the main attraction because that's how its done
The lust is no joke so I pass this message unto you so when you rock it'll keep you afloat when anyone claims your thoughts in music form doesn't promote creativity to make the mind run

 

This last one was not your best, but still has more than enough brilliant moments to remain a solid piece. I dig how the tone in the piece gradually changes like a crescendo.

 

No need for a title
I need pure silence like a piano recital
Whack cats want me to save their environment hoping I recycle
I'd rather sue a dude who's suicidal
Than dial the proper authorities to help their existence in the word art world have a high chance of survival
A lot of you ignorant fiends swear that I'm in denial
How could that be if when you step up to me your feet seems up high bro?
Meaning you keep looking down when talking to me so that means I must be your idol?
You're the main attraction yet people get hype with my arrival

So why do you clowns swear what you spit is contagious?
Saying you got bars for days following the current craze is dangerous
What I says last for eons so my old words has others swearing its compltely outrageous
Get anyone you want to say the words I speak won't phase us
Good the point is it'll just vaporize you suckaz like lazas

This isn't a Raid but your clown rappers are in danger
Ruining the roots with the lame gibberish leaves me in anger
All you hear is swag, money, girls, cars, houses, and clothes just to get fame sir
Idiots now adays say if I criticize bad bars I'm classified as a hater
Don't defend something horrible cause then I'll see if you can out last this street sweeping banger

Come at me wrong I'll be sure to nullify
You're entire flow putting you in an eternal slumber no lullaby
Think I'm bragging too much watch as this iron flies
Right in between eyes so if you can still see make sure what was said becomes notarized
I'm not through now I'm gunning for your legs and thighs
Understand this isn't to please just paralyze

Here's where you hope to see me fall off like an umbilical cord
When that happens atheists will pray to the biblical lord
For now I'll cut you up with a double edge triple syllable sword
Tell me if I'm eligible of being nominated for any music award
Look back at my past battles I've been in too absorb
Nothing and just kill chumps when I get bored
Act out my crimes with those I've deceased and put in the morgue
Stream it to show you how a killer records

I laugh since I killed you walking on beach shores
Then think if me doing that makes me a poor sportsman
Can't let that bug me now I'll watch to see if the freshman can swim

Which is why you need practice before you can preach
You slip up when I'm around I'll cease your speech
See if anyone else wants dibs on this feast of fresh meat
If I get a few contenders I'll fire something hot that'll heat seek into their minds go towards Memphis bleak
Don't see what I did there your idiocy makes me consider you a freak

I don't mark territory without setting deep treads all along
Anyone who steps in the circumference of the area will have their body explode wrong
That's why Obama wants to take away my right to bare arms
So what other amendment rights am I gonna lose due to a song?
Words have gotten to become so strong
I haven't even been working out my brain for that long

Now tell me who the real bomb is
So much for that explosive flow you're just a false alarm kid
Just like now whenever there's an explosion its automatically said Islam did
That's how you can truly see who really listens and those that have words skid

Around one ear and crash into the other
I catch whiff of that pray to your god that this won't be your last supper
The longer I make this the more likely it'll make your eyes plunder
Could you smart asses decipher the clever word play I wonder
Got you thinking too hard so I'll put you down under

I think its time to stab you with this mic and verse I'm rapping to you
Actual to be honest I'm clearly rapping through dudes
Never say my motherfu**ing name even it helps boost the entirety of your crew
Its like I'm babysitting you stupid bastards like daycare teachers do
Don't follow my path of guidance for I am not a fit guru
I still wanna see if my next statement will stay true

Bet you still can't see why my style is one that stays legit
Trying so hard to relate, but my shoes are in a size you can't fit
Time to separate the realness from the rhetoric
Figures only multiply responses from the greats could settle this

 

Once again you set the bar really high. Nice work Nas I hope your next one is just as good!

 

About to use my words to body anyone in minuets
Say you're the best better have a way to instantly fix it
That flow you got causes knowledge to diminish
Your more of a radio spitter who fits the stereotype so there shouldn't be any skipping
The next skip that I hear I'll assure you that there will be stitches
The only reason why people follow you is because their brains belongs to midgets
Too bad that's nothing but a short stop so I can't even scrimmage

From now on I'm not even gonna waste time creating a title
Leave you to wonder what's wrong with this man he must be psycho
That's like a Hayabusa rider not doing drive by's on his motorcycle

I'm about to take this to a whole new level
Shoot my thoughts at you like Wanted bullets, but call this twisted metal
Say you have a problem with me so we can get it settled
Be very careful you say the wrong thing you're brains will be scattered pretty like beach pebbles

Can you understand where these words derive from?
Impossible you're more like a washed up hero and time showed you're destined to become a bum
I'll throw so many subliminals in this it'll give you nerd ass clowns a conumdrum
Process as much as you can, but it'll be too late to run
Leave you stuck in this class until blood can be turned to rum

Here to only confuse try hards
What does that even mean my god?
Aren't you supposed to be someone with brains that'll turn those who oppose you to sod?
I guess being online and acting like someone you aren't has turned your brains to equal weight of a pea pod
Killing off every know it all will leave me with no internet job
There's the staff, and the secret mob squad
Punished those fools for just trying to come through the rhyming bard
You n*ggas say that as if you won't end up working forever in the graveyard

Even if I make this soft you wouldn't be able to decipher the difference like alligators and crocs
That's why going hard is what muffles the screams for the cops
I'll play a game that includes this clock
Put you down under and see how long it takes for that breathing to stop

Leave you Chuckie Finster like scared when I haven't said anything about coming equipped
I'm not even gonna throw out the black part and guns on the hip
No see me I'd rather push you in a pool that has piranhas in it and tell you to give them a dry tongue kiss
Not as wicked as putting a hole in your chest and leave people thinking the Kool Aid Man did it

Just think of what happens when I unload my thoughts and want to interlope
Now here's a great joke
People run off with the mouth, but they type it on this site so those tough words are unspoke
You couldn't even call that cutthroat
They never even said anything thinking something won't make it any harder to simply choke
So now there really is a hidden meaning in the words since the dead body acts like cloak

Its apparent people will say one thing, but their true means are sideways like a lateral movement
Exactly why they wouldn't battle me stupid
No one would cheer you on mostly because you'd be unable to do it
I'm sorry did you want evidence and compelling facts as to why I'm speaking ruthless?
Only clues will help the foolish

All the so called "Good Poets" couldn't even provide a convincing script
Haven't even had sex yet I know you clowns couldn't celibate
When it comes to poetry I'm the wrong person to f*ck with
Although I'm not an AIDS patient just coming in contact will get you feeling sick
I'm slept on by you folks like Snoopy's place of residence ain't that a b*tch?

N-A-Z
Is what I liked to be called see
People seem to have a problem when I R-a-p
Yet when its poetry I'll obviously annihilate those who feel they can step to me
Clean house cause of my OCD
You're tamed and confined thank your lack of flexibility
Don't need to talk about drugs, but only if it'll please thee
Feed you PCP while watching a DVD and download something free on the MP3
That's OD but there's a fee so I collect an EBT from kh-v