Discussion in 'Competitions' started by Inasuma, Sep 26, 2007.
Come here for some advice on your entries!
Constructive criticism only, please.
Really general sotw. We should have used this when more screens of the new kh games came out =\
What do you think of my entry? It's an old one I made.
Which one is the best?
It's alright, but cut it a little bit so that the b/w doesn't show, or just make the whole thing b/w but with a few things in color, such as Sora's eyes, or Kairi's hair, and some lighting and shading.
Thanks. Yeah, it's an oldie. I really didn't know back then xD
I'd say 2. The last one is good for a vert, but don't think it'll be legible due to size =\
Didnt you enter 1, 2 and 3 before? I know 3 won a sotw.
I've never entered any of these in a sowt contest lol.
mixed the mickey one up with sotw 18, my b
Erm, do you guys like mine? >.<
Get rid of the stars, and either
A) Spam "flame" some more, but add some color
B) Add a blue c4d(set it to lighten), make the tag b&w and erase over Sora's eyes.
And do one flame over Sora, so that he's blended, and sharpen and blur areas for depth.
Also, move the text over and smudge it a little(Not to much, since it needs to be readable, or there is no point to the text)
Thanks for the CnC, DJ Danger Mouse. ^^ I'll update it now. I was thinking of spaming the flame and use different colors before, but I just decided not to do it, but thanks! I'll do it now!
EDIT: Here's what I got after following your advise.
Take it off the render. That'll help tremendously.
Anyone think my entries got a chance? I changed it.
It's bright. >.<
But yeah, it has a chance. >.>;
Damn, if I had one more day I could register my new a** pawning Terra sig >.<, anyways, good luck everyone!