SotW Discussion SotW #11 - Discussion!

Discussion in 'Competitions' started by Inasuma, Mar 31, 2007.

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  1. RavenSetFree Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Thanks, I'll use the first one. But do you think you could tell me more specifically, what could I do to make the second one better? Like, make it flow better. I'd really appreciate it. :)
     
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