So, um.

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  1. Spaze Gummi Ship Junkie

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    I've never really tried making poems before, but recently I've taken an interest in poetry. 8D I decided that I would pursue this interest by writing my own poems, so....why not make a thread here to show off what I create? I can't say that I'm good, so I'd love some CnC to help me get better.

    I suppose I should post my first one, yes?



    To Fight


    You have to fight
    Every single day
    Just to know you're alive!
    But it's worth the price you pay

    Please, wipe your eyes...
    Lift your head...
    And see...

    That your are not alone
    Because I am with you
    And you are with me

    I will be here
    Whenever you cry
    So you'll surely shed your tears
    And swallow them with a sigh

    I will be here
    When times are rough
    If things don't seem to get better
    We'll just have to get tough

    But let me ask you one thing
    To know what I'm doing is right
    Are you willing to give up?
    Or are you going to fight?