SO...BORED. *Writes a ****ing poem*

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  1. Cin Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp

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    When tranquil skies become raging storms
    And the bolts of lightning
    Make less of a ring
    In your ears, your fears
    They swallow you with a throat like hell
    A well that leads to nothing but the lowest bottom you can find
    And with walls so high you lose sight of the dead red sky
    And you know you're gonna drown

    When you're standing in the valley living
    It the way your dreams said you would
    But behind you looms the wall, you should
    Be afraid of, nothing but a cracked wall of delusion to keep the water back
    Oh it splinters and wanes and falls and the river behind
    It all comes to a crawl like a gasp of fresh air
    Just waiting for the last inch or hair
    To make the pressure too high and the wall falls down
    And the last thing you see is the dream green sky
    And you drown

    Nothing but silence left in this sea of deceit
    The lies you fed to yourself, oh so bittersweet, gone
    I know of a song
    It keeps running through my head, of the tunes so strong
    And the rhythm and the beat remind me of nothing but defeat
    Something about the drip drop of water into your heart
    As the rain falls down a voice sings to me
    That everything you love is gonna drown
    And no it's never going to stop they way I'm living now
    I expect to much and put forth too little
    I've gotta make it better, stronger, and to quote a song faster
    Be my own master
    Control my own future
    And in an instant I make a new wall of lies
    That "I can"
     
  2. Asterisk NO WONT LET YOU

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    ohmigod im in your po-****!..im a rising..not a raging..****..

    I could picture this as a rap Cin,very nice work.
     
  3. Alex C: Kingdom Keeper

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    That was beautiful Cin. Really relates.
     
  4. Cia (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧*.✧

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    HARDER BETTER FASTER STRONGER.

    Transitions are pretty sloppy but your second paragraph is gold.
     
  5. Cin Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp

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    I was wondering if anyone would get that. d:
     
  6. Cia (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧*.✧

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    si, i smawrtur wun
     
  7. Asterisk NO WONT LET YOU

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    Meh..I got it..didn't feel like it was worth talking about though :P
     
  8. Cin Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp

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    You make me so proud to be your real mother.
     
  9. Alex C: Kingdom Keeper

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    Was that sarcasm?
     
  10. Cin Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp

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    No. I dare you to guess this time.
     
  11. Cia (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧*.✧

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    :3 YYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH <3 CIN MAAAAM.

    u silleh mam billeh

    Pnuemonoulrtamicroscopicsilicovolcanoniosis BAM.
     
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