Riku's Girl

Discussion in 'Archives' started by i love axel ^^, Dec 25, 2007.

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Who do you think riku's girl is??

  1. a new character?

    89 vote(s)
    57.4%
  2. Yuffie?

    8 vote(s)
    5.2%
  3. Aerith?

    6 vote(s)
    3.9%
  4. Selphie?

    14 vote(s)
    9.0%
  5. tifa?

    9 vote(s)
    5.8%
  6. A GUY?? (jk or is it?)

    29 vote(s)
    18.7%
  1. i love axel ^^ Traverse Town Homebody

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    MY DOG GOT RAN OVER!!! it's okay he's okay!! he got two of his legs kinda hurt sooo i'm going to be taking care of him!! (or else my mom will kill me) SO!! i'm going to try to get the chapter out A.S.A.P!!! I'M SOOOOOO SORRY!!!! PLEASE FORGIVE THE MEAN AUTHOR!!! I'M REALLY SORRY!!
     
  2. krayzie Lionhart

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    dam thats sucks
    glad he's okay
    i'll wait for the chapter and those last two chapters we really good ;)
    takes Kurby home
    jk riona dont kill me
    im not really into that lol
     
  3. i love axel ^^ Traverse Town Homebody

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    yes poor thing! *Weeps*

    Thank you for forgiving me!!!

    i wish it was that easy! lol.

    yeah. Thanks! i feel like i'm getting better at writing! :D (Don't mess with kirby she'll bite your head off!!! XD)

    thank you! *feeds him it*

    *licks me* Aww!!!

    hmm....just keep on reading and you'll see!

    I am a proud 13 year old!! I'm getting so old..... XD
     
  4. Aura Goddess

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    I'm sorry to hear about your dog.I hope he gets better.And take as much time as you need with the story.I can wait.But I don't know about everybody else.
     
  5. i love axel ^^ Traverse Town Homebody

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    LOL guys you are the most random people i have ever met!! and i love it!! Okay i'm not finished yet so much has been going on lately and i haven't been able to write!! i'm sorry!!! but i have got something to come out of my mind so here it is!!! it's kinda short but i think it will be good for right now. The next part will come out soon!!

    Flashback

    Since Roxas was 10 years old he pictured his life like his parents. A warm home, a stay at home mother, and a working father. As a child this was the only thing Roxas saw. So he wanted his life the same. Of course good things don’t last forever. When his parents divorced, his innocent and good-natured dream was shattered. His parents seemed so happy together. Once the divorce happened he never could make friends. That was until he met the hyper Sora.
    ~~~~~
    Roxas sat at his desk scribbling on a piece of paper. Since the divorce of his parents he never really got along with anyone. Over the years he got used to the being a loner. The teacher was saying something about a new students. Which of course the class was very excited. But Roxas couldn't care less. He heard the door open and a boy with chocolate hair stepped into the room and blabbing on and on about himself. Then a boy a little taller, with bright silver hair stepped behind him and whispered something in his ear and he then blushed and apologized for being so hyper. The teacher told them where their seats were and then the teacher told them to take out their math books. Later that day Roxas was on the swings and the new kids came up to him.

    "HI!" Sora yelled. Roxas jumped off the swing at the shrill yelling.

    "Sora! Please calm down!" Riku said.

    "I'm sorry!" Sora exclaimed and offered a hand to Roxas. Which Roxas took, stood up, and brushed the sand off him. "I'm Sora! What's your name?"

    "Umm...Roxas."

    "Roxas? That's a cool name! This is Riku!"

    Ever since then, they were best friends. Roxas then opened up and got new friends. He learned how to trust people again. When he got into High School was when things really changed.
    ~~~~~
    Carefully Roxas slipped by the last class he was supposed to be in. He gave a nice sadistic smile and waves to the Sora and Riku who gave him a death stare. Which by the sheer luck of Roxas, the teacher noticed and looked out in the hall and saw Roxas. After being caught he then had to evil fate of having to sit in class. At the end of class the teacher asked Roxas up to her desk. Instead of a lecture Roxas was handed a pink detention slip. ‘Fudge…’ Looking at the slip he noticed the room number, 18. He gave a smirk knowing that this was his favorite teacher’s room.
    “Hey Ms. Arnold!†Roxas yelled as he entered to room.
    “Why hello Roxas. What brings you here?â€
    “Well it seems I got in a bit of trouble…â€
    “Don’t tell me I have to host detention today.â€
    “Sorry to tell you.â€
    “Alright then. Just sit down. Do whatever you want to.†Right after that was said a redhead with bright jdae eyes ran into the room.
    “Uh… is this the room for detention?†He asked nervously.
    “Yep honey this is it. Make yourself comfortable,†the teacher said walking back to her desk. Roxas patted to a nearby desk and put his book bag of the floor. Taking out his obnoxiously heavy math book, he noticed the redhead sat next to him.
    “Hey don’t we have a class together?†the stranger inquired with an interested look on his face.
    “Um…I’m not sure.†The blonde said uneasy and worked on another ‘simplify the expression’ question.
    “Yeah. I think its Language Arts.†He then put a few chips in his mouth.
    Roxas then realized that he wasn’t going to get any work done with this guy around. He seemed nice enough. Roxas simply stuffed his homework in his book and set it aside.
    “Well I’m Roxas.†He gave out his hand for Axel to shake.
    He gave a smirk and shook Roxas’ hand. “Axel.â€

    They were best friends since that detention. Even though they were great friends, something was different. Roxas felt different when he was around him. When Axel would tease him by messing with his hair he was get crazy butterflies in his stomach. It was a feeling he had ever felt before. Usually he would tell himself it was nothing. But deep down he knew it was something.
    After High School, both going to different colleges, lost contact. That was until they ran into each other... literally.
    ~~~~~
    “CRAP!†Axel nearly spilled his coffee on himself as he looked at clock. “I’M GOING TO BE LATE!†Jumping up, he almost knocked over the table. Quickly he gathered his papers, threw his coffee away, and sped out the door. But not without crashing into a familiar face.
    Papers went everywhere as he fell. Axel quickly recovered and gathered his papers.
    “I’m so sorry! I didn’t see you there!†With his free hand Axel offered it to the other.
    “It’s alright. People usually don’t.†When Roxas looked up all he saw was (ZOMG was is saw backwards!!) emerald green eyes and he knew automatically who it was. “Axel is that you?â€
    Axel gave a questioning look to Roxas then realized who it was, “I can’t believe I didn’t recognize you before! Roxas!â€
    “It’s been forever we need to catch up.â€
    “I would love to but I got a job interview in a few minutes.†Axel dug into his pocket and brought out a pen. He then began to write on Roxas. “Call me sometime so we can get together. See you Roxy!â€
    “Sure.†Roxas said with a simple smile. Axel then jetted out the door to hail a cab. ‘He still calls me Roxy…’
    ~~~~~
    “That story always makes me cry!†Axel said dramatically, and then wiped a fake tear.
    “Oh shut it…†Roxas then gave him an elbow to the stomach.
    “Ouch!†(Sorry I had to put in something with Roxas beating up on Axel. But I digress.)
    ~~~~~
    Crickets’ echoed through the Sunday evening. Side by side, Axel and Roxas, holding hands, walked down the sidewalk toward their apartment building. It had already been a couple years since they exchanged vows. Recently, Riku had got married to Sori’s teacher. They instantly accepted Yuffie in their group. But of course that left Namine to find someone of her own.
    They stepped through the door, dropping keys on the table by the door, and saw the answering machine blinking red. They exchanged confused looks and shrugged. Roxas stepped toward it and pressed the flashing button. What the message played made them dash out the door to the hospital.
    ~~~~~
    MORE SUSPENSE!!! so made you guys could get a little head scratcher.... the next chapter will come out soon!!! I PROMISE!!!
     
  6. Xephos Neko, gamer, animelover, and artist :3 *purrs*

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    Wow. This is now Roxas and Axel's story. Try making the story for Namine how she will live on without a boyfriend or will she have one?
     
  7. axel-chanviii Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOOHHH!! Did Yuffie have a baby? Or did Riku just run into a door?
     
  8. i love axel ^^ Traverse Town Homebody

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    yeah this is just part 1!! The next part will have all of that i promise!!

    LOL!!!! Riku ran into a door!!! you'll just have to wait won't you??
     
  9. Juicy Chaser

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    That was a beautiful chapter! I love RoxasXAxel! Its so sweet, getting them to meet as kids *awwws*

    I kinda got confused a bit with the structure of the chapter but managed to work it out eventually lol

    I Lol'd at the little comments you put in brackets.

    Tbh, Id rather hear more about everyone else rather than Namine. Namine irritates me *gets shot by namine fans*


    WOO YEAH 200 POSTS!
    I get to be a twilight town denizen lol
     
  10. i love axel ^^ Traverse Town Homebody

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    Omg! i'm sorry i've been MIA for the last couple of days! I hopefully will have it up today! Back to writing!!
     
  11. Wulphie! Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Today?
    What day are you talking about?
    It's night right now were I live!
    <(^-^)>"Yay!"
    *sings*
    ♪Update, update♪
    *sighs*
    "Now i'll just wait..."
    *waits, but gets bored and rocks out with Linkin Park*
    :rockband::rockband:
     
  12. Roxas24Sora King's Apprentice

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    This story is pretty cool... good job I Love Axel :D
    BTW my favorite yaoi pairing is Kairi x Namine
     
  13. Juicy Chaser

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    Erm.... *awkward glance*

    Sorry! Its just me and Rinoa are rly good buddies! We can't stop talking *sheepishly looks at Rinoa*



    You mean yuri couple. Yaoi is two dudes...


    I have no idea what MIA is, but cool! I await the next post with baited breath. *suffocates from lack of oxygen*
     
  14. zexykupo Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Great story! I wonder what's gonna happen. My bet is that Naminé is in the hospital... pregnant.
     
  15. i love axel ^^ Traverse Town Homebody

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    I'M SO SOOORRRRYYY!!! school totally sucks... i have a ton of homework all the time.... and it's only the third day!!! Spanish suuucckkkkssss... I totally promise to have it by the weekend!!! i swear on my backpack's grave!! (I LOVE MY BACKPACK!!!) seriously though i will have it out! HAPPY AKUROKU DAY!!!
     
  16. i love axel ^^ Traverse Town Homebody

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    Roxas ran into the emergency room with Axel close behind. Immediately, Roxas rushed to the first nurse he saw.
    “Where’s Cloud Strife?”
    “You must be Roxas. Your brother just went into surgery about a half and hour ago.”
    “Is he going to be okay?” He said panicked.
    The nurse’s voice then turned grave. “Well we aren’t to sure about how good surgery is going to be. In the accident some of he metal cut him deeply.”
    “Can it be fixed?”
    The nurse locked eyes with Roxas. “The doctors may or may not be able repair the damage. But it doesn’t look so good.”
    Seeing the hurt face on Roxas’ face, Axel quietly began to rub his back soothingly.
    “Was Eve with him?” Roxas said putting his head down.
    “Yes she was, but only suffered a few cuts and bruises. I send her with a nurse to get stitches.” The nurse looked at them both and nodded. “Have hope.” She turned away to tend to other patients.
    Axel looked at Roxas with pained eyes. “It’s going to be okay.” Axel said while he cradling Roxas in his arms.
    “What if it’s not gonna but okay?”
    “Whatever happens I will be here to face it with you.” Roxas made a sad smile and wrapped his arms around his waist.
    “Thanks.”
    “Uncle Roxas!” a voice yelled. Roxas broke from Axel’s embrace and went to hug the young girl.
    “Eve. Are you okay?” As Roxas examined her she had tears in her eyes and a few cut on her cheeks. She nodded slowly and blinked making the tears in her eyes roll down her cheeks. When he pushed her hair back he saw 4 stitches along her hairline.
    “Is my Dad going to be okay?” She said in a squeaky voice as she wiped the wetness from her face.
    “I don’t know. We just have to wait.”
    “Is he going to die?”
    Roxas wiped the tears that he haven’t realized had formed. “ I don’t know…”
    During the 2-hour wait Axel wanted to call everyone to tell what happened, which, of course, Roxas objected to doing. Axel tried to reason with him but Roxas didn’t want to worry everyone. Axel sighed as he gave up trying to convince Roxas. He looked down at the small girl who had fallen asleep against his chest. Smiling, he put his hands in her long blonde hair, which looked exactly like Roxas’, through his fingers. His eyes drifted over to Roxas, who was chewing on his thumbnail and looked at the door that led to the operation rooms. Suddenly, a nurse came through the door. Roxas stood up automatically. The nurse sucked in some air.
    “Are you brother of Mr. Strife?” Roxas nodded silently. The nurse looked uneasy and sucked in more air. “When we started the surgery everything seemed to be okay, no internal bleeding. But as we got to the abdomen the metal seemed the cut through some vital organs. When we began to stitch it up he began to hemorrhage and we couldn’t stop it. “ She paused to look at Roxas expression, ”I’m so sorry we did everything we could.”
    A shocked Roxas sat down and was overcome with a tidal wave of grief
    ,that ruptured through his body. He broke down crying. Axel couldn’t help but shed tears that dropped to the floor. Instinctively, Axel put his arm over his grief stricken husband. Roxas then buried his head into Axel’s shirt.
    ~6 years later~
    “You ready for school?” Axel asked the depressed looking girl in front of him.
    “Yes dad!” The girl rolled her eyes at her adoptive dad in front of her with a huge grin on his face.
    “Are you su- ouch!” Roxas jabbing him in the ribs cut off Axel.
    “I’m pretty sure she gets it, Axel.” Axel had the hurt puppy dog look on his face that he knew that Roxas couldn’t resist.
    “Please Axel you know I can’t take that face!”
    “ I know…” Axel said huskily into Roxas.
    “Are you trying to imply something?”
    “I don’t know you tell me.” Axel said once again in Roxas’ ear. Roxas was about to say something but Eve beat him to it.
    “Can you guys at least drive me to school before you…,“ she stopped and gagged,” Please don’t make me say it.”
    Axel laughed. “I’ll try… but I’m not promising anything.” Eve once again gagged and grabbed her backpack.
    Roxas laughed and grabbed the keys from Axel’s hand. “I get to drive.”
    Axel quickly tried to snatch the keys back but Roxas was quicker. But then Axel cornered Roxas.
    “You’ll pay for that later…” Axel whispered.
    “Can’t you guys please stop trying to rape each other!” Eve yelled, “I swear you guys are like horny teenagers…” She opened the door to their apartment. “Come on you two! I don’t feel like being late!”
    Both Axel and Roxas let out sighs and trudged to the door. Axel stuck out his tongue at her, which she returned. She smiled as she closed the door and locked it.
    ~later that day~
    Kairi patted Namine on the head, “My dear Namine…”
    “What?” Namine didn’t turn around at the sound of her name. Instead, she still continued her brush strokes and her almost done painting. Over the years she had gotten hired to be an artist at a very famous modern art gallery. Which was a huge deal for her. So she only had been concentrating on her work. That meant that she didn’t have time to date.
    “I’ve got you a date!”
    “Umm… I don’t think so…”
    “Namine! Please! He’s a great guy and would be perfect for you!”
    “Kairi I told you I don’t want to be dating yet!”
    “It’s been years since you were hired at the gallery! You need to get out.”
    Namine carefully dipped her brush into the green and began to make strokes over the blue she laid on earlier.
    “Kairi I really don’t think I could have what you guys have…”
    “Sure you can! You just have to try!”
    “I just…I just don’t think I can do that.”
    “Well, if you don’t want to go out with him I won’t force you.”
    “I do appreciate you trying to help me out though.”
    “Its no problem Namine.”
    ~~~~~
    SOOOOOO SORRRRYYY!!!! yes i know the end sucks. i'm sorry. after this chapter i will make a little chapter that wraps things up. Unfortunately, i don't have a class that i can write in like last year. soooo....i don't know when it will be out. But soon i swear!! I wish you all luck in school! :D
    P.S. MIA means Missing in Action. XD
    P.S.S I'm getting braces too! i seriously can't wait!
    P.S.S.S YAOI ROCKS MY SOCKS!!!!! YAY AKUROKU!! i think i'll write something for it...even though i'm late XD
     
  17. Aura Goddess

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    Nice.I liked it.Can't wait to read more.
    P.S.I didn't even know that XDD
    P.S.S. Really?Everybody is getting braces all of a sudden.I was going to get them at first when I was little but my dentist said that my teeth are perfect.A lot of people like my smile.
    P.S.S.S. I'm not a fan of yaoi.I don't hate it but I don't like it.
     
  18. Juicy Chaser

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    Lol I thought it was kind of amusing that there was nothing to do with Riku in the chapter :sweat:

    But it was good all the same xD

    Omg Rinoa it actually is Missing in Action >.< You were right xDDD

    I love yaoi wooo write that story now wooo go akuroku woo (ive actually written my own akuroku on fanfiction.net coz i didnt think yaoi was allowed here O.O lolz)

    omg i hated having braces x_x lolz it was extrememly painful but now i have straight teeth woop woop
     
  19. i love axel ^^ Traverse Town Homebody

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    oh i'm not going to post it here! do you know how much trouble you could get posting it here?? a lot. lol. but i'm a huge fan of Yaoi. so i might write something. i'll keep you posted!

    oh the next chapter is coming along. just give me a little time and it should be done soon. Ttyl yal!