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  1. Ratchet Bah weep graaagnah wheep ni ni bong!

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    They haunt me still these ancient dreams
    Of heroes bold and fair,
    Nightmares of battles and long gone scenes,
    My sleep their hidden lair.
    Yet when I wake they haunt me still,
    Tugging my thoughts and bending my will.
    Yet I know they are only dreams.
     
  2. Catch the Rain As the world falls down ♥

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    Poetry Contest: May 2008~


    Winner for April is KnightReaper with this beautiful poem themed on dreams, I adored this very much <3

    Guys, I am seriously majorly impressed with how you are all improving and writing, there are some fantastic pieces being written and it is getting harder and harder to judge D:

    Keep it up guys <3

    Anywayz :3

    For the month of May the theme will be: Endings. A lot of people finish school/college/whatevs this month and next, so this month the theme shall be endings.

    As always 7 lines minimum.

    Contest close May 31st

    Winners announced June 5th

    Good luck <3
     
  3. KnightReaper Traverse Town Homebody

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    First off, thank you CTR for the compliment. Second, I'd love to put a poem up for the theme, but sadly I don't have any poem with me at all within a 500 mile radius, so It'd be awhile for me to post something. Once again, thanks for this honor and I hope my next poem is just as well.
     
  4. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    hmm... just a quick question: does it have to be about ending school? or can it be about anything that's ended? >>
     
  5. KnightReaper Traverse Town Homebody

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    The theme is endings, so it can be about anything.
     
  6. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    hmm... okay... thanks :D
     
  7. Destined Working for WDW

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    Congratulations Knight, well done.
     
  8. KnightReaper Traverse Town Homebody

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    Okay, I called my friend's girlfriend, and she sent me all of my poems that mention ends, so after an hour of deciding, this is the one I've chosen.

    The End

    This is the end
    You've had enough
    No one said this
    Wouldn't be tough

    It took awhile
    For this to sink in
    What was now
    Is now then

    I wondered what happened
    And if you even know
    But now its time to part
    For new love to grow

    But we will still be friends
    Like we said before
    The more you say you're sorry
    I miss you even more

    I wish we could go back
    And fix whatever went wrong
    But no matter what happens
    My feelings are still strong

    Well this is the end
    Time for a new start
    My mind is clear
    But not my heart
     
  9. sweet_and_silent Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Clever idea hide the word in a poem I like it anyway my poem this is probably my best one yet and its another improvisation I should start just writing poetry I like poetry


    The End
    Endings are bad yet endings are good.
    You end one thing it means you can begin another.
    Endings are new things waiting to happen.
    End a good book begin a brilliant book
    End a snack begin a banquet.
    Endings begin so many new things but it doesn't aways work out.
    After you end the brilliant book you may begin a rubbish book.
    After your banquet you may have to run to the loo and wish you'd never eaten the snack.
    Endings are good and bad all in one.
    Yet still when it comes we can all cry out happily.
    "The End."
     
  10. Peace and War Bianca, you minx!

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    School Days/Too The Future

    By my watch, time's up,
    End of an era, end of the day,
    Time to pack up and hit the hay,
    Going too rest for weeks too come,
    Though it's Summer's work for some,

    In September, I won't have anywhere to go,
    I'll still be here, head, down on my pillow,
    Bored of life without my school,
    My friends I made there, friends who stayed there,
    Like a river through my mind, the memories flow back,
    My first kiss with her and than lucky Jack, ha

    Thanks to the smiles they would send,
    I'll remember it all, till the very end.​
     
  11. Sumi suicidé

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    Congrats KnightReaper!
    Here's my poem this time

    I see

    I see the end of the tunnel
    I see the knife run through
    I see my life's begining
    I see my end and you

    I see the train rush closer
    I see the man who knew
    I see his life's begining
    I see my end and you

    I see the men's swords
    I see the things that they'll do
    I see your life's begining
    I see my end and you

    I saw the end of the tunnel
    I saw the knife run through
    I saw the train rush closer
    I saw the man who knew
    I saw the men's swords
    I saw the things that they'll do

    And only now I see
    That the man that knew
    (Though it breaks my heart to say so)
    That the man was you​
     
  12. T3F Chaser

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    WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can I change mine?

    Endings, you think they’re bad
    Not all endings are sad
    Devistated for something to end is a lie
    In fact, an ending is a new beginning sometimes
    Never under estimate the happiness of an end
    Give hope to the world, and the end will be your friend

    Ever wondered If its bad
    Never coping with something shouldn’t make you mad
    Dreading an end, you shouldn’t be sad

    The end is here, don’t have fear.


    BTW-did you notice how the firstletters of each line (except the last one) all spelt ENDING and END
     
  13. amythest Traverse Town Homebody

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    i have never submitted one of my poems in a contest before... is this okay?

    Lost tears roll down my cheek
    And my heart is filled with sorrow
    This pain... is it reality
    Or is this an illusion that traps me in tomorrow?

    You said love is an adventure
    Each new day is part of the plot
    But now you've left me stranded
    With only the chains in which I'm caught

    I believed you when you filled my head with lies
    And I trusted that we would be together
    Why did you leave me here on Earth...
    When you reside in Heaven forever?

    I want to be able to forgive you
    Dying was not your fault
    But why can't I let you go...
    Is this the end to us all?
     
  14. Tora-chan Traverse Town Homebody

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    The ending won't change

    The rain keeps falling
    On this tattered window
    I do nothing but stare out,
    Waiting for change.
    The clouds move quickly
    But never dissipate.
    You could try to catch a glimpse of sun
    But you know we're past 'too late.'
    My tears keep trickling down
    This pale and tired face.
    My heart can't handle anymore,
    Still I long for everything to go back into place
    Is this really the end?
     
  15. SpazticFantaztic >:3 Kingdom Keeper

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    It is the end of the line, I'm afraid, my dear
    but do not worry, you have nothing to fear
    for nothing will hurts us, as long as we are here,
    but I can feel that the end is slowly drawing near
    creeping, crawling, slithering through the night
    oh, how horrid, it gives one a great fright
    but if we stay together, if we stay right here,
    than hopefully the end will dissappear.
    I know it's short, but it's the best I can do.
     
  16. Catch the Rain As the world falls down ♥

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    Poetry Contest: June 2008~

    This month was hella hard, there were a lot of poems that caused debate >.< In the end Amythest was chosen as the winner with this fantastic emotive piece. Honourable mention goes to Peace and War for his own poem which was also of a fantastic quality.


    This months theme:

    the oh so original

    ~Seasons~

    As always 7 lines <3

    Dude Date: June 30th

    Results posted: July 5th

    Good luck loves <3
     
  17. T3F Chaser

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    Congrats Amethyst! Um quick question CtR, I'm on the southern hemisphere, so its winter now. Can I write a poem about winter instead of summer because wintr is all i have on my mind lately.
     
  18. Catch the Rain As the world falls down ♥

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    We already had one about winter a couple of months back love, hmm I'm going to change it to seasons in general.

    Is that better?
     
  19. {Vena_Sera}_ The Anti{Saint} King's Apprentice

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    here is a poem im just writing off the top of my head

    Seasons cross over our beautiful earth
    as waves roll and leaves fly
    we come together for now and forever
    hearts in flight and souls in air
    our lives all stop and relize
    seasons bring beauty and nature brings us
    lying on the ground looking at the sky
    with others in the clouds looking over earth
    seasons, only god can see.
    nature, only we can help
    earth, with winds that help every thing else


    {vindicated}​
     
  20. T3F Chaser

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    Thats ok. Thanks!

    Hang on, wasn't one of your topics already seasons? meh. here's mine:

    Missing Summer

    The wind flows through the air
    And suddenly, I’m full of despair
    About the trees turning bare
    Will summer come again?

    The snow falls on the land
    As I walk through the icy sand
    I snap my elastic band
    Summer was so grand

    Winter has started, but how?
    Because my dad’s starting up the plough
    My dog ends his howl
    And I want summer back NOW!

    And as I lay
    In my bed today
    I hope and pray
    Can I have summer back
    For just…
    One…
    Day???



    NB: Just so people know, when you have a negative thought you’re supposed to snap an elastic band on your wrist.
     
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