Organization XIII's Rivals

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  1. Deathsight44 Kingdom Keeper

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    Max simply stood there. He appeared to be in to much shock to even be willing to move.
     
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    Turning her head, Larxene's frown deepened. Max was definitely not doing a thing, not even moving an inch...
    "Max...what is it?" she asked, turning back to face him. "What did you see...exactly? Or what do you know? And don't tell me you don't know..."
     
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    "I TOLD YOU THAT I DON'T KNOW!" max yelled
     
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    "Then why are you staring out as if you've seen a ghost?!" Larxene shouted back, her hands turning into fists. "Either you know something or you're just compltely shocked about all of this, which I highly doubt!"
     
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    "All I know is that before axel died, I felt a hint of zexions presence, and that is it" max said.
     
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    "And...why are you so shocked?" Larxene asked, as she grabbed Max's hand, leading him towards the portal. There was no point in standing around when they might as well get moving...
     
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    "NO!" max said, snatching away. "No, I have something that must be done. I need to find some way to figure out for certain if zexion truelly did murder axel, or if it was someone else who murdered him." max said, appearing to get a bit of control back. "Go speak with zexion, and I shall moniter the conversation" max said to Larxene.
     
  8. Nymph of Destiny Chaser

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    "...Very well then," Larxene conceded, reluctantly, as she stepped through the portal, appearing in the Cloaked Schemer's room. Her hands, which were still clenched as fists, relaxed slightly, as she peered about, but the tension still hung thickly in the air.
    Hearing a soft, swooshing sound, she turned, to see Zexion appear.
    "Zexion," she said, walking over to him. "Tell me...did you kill Axel?"


    Zexion tilted his head up, looking at her, surprised. When he found her 'scent' returning, he had gone over to ask her where she had been...but only had her shooting accusations at him. Was everyone going to start blaming him now?
    "No," he said, shaking his head. "I didn't...Larxene...I was just as startled as you to hear the news...do you really think I'd go through the hassle of waking up in the middle of the night, somehow managing to pass Roxas, just to kill Axel? And in a way that would not alarm Roxas? Even though I am the master of illusions, I cannot...and I would have no motive for so. I was with you the entire evening, helping you as you know, and if I wanted to murder Axel...there would be no point to our...deal...so...no...I did not..."


    "...Then who did?" she asked, narrowing her eyes at him. "Who killed Axel? Who tampered with the machine? Who?!"

    "I'm sorry, Larxene...there was no 'scent' I could pick up," Zexion said, looking away from her gaze. "I'm sorry..."

    "That's what everyone tells me," she said, angrily, as she turned away. "No one seems to understand or know what exactly is going on...and everything...everything seems to be...just wrong..."

    OOC: There is no 'scent' Zexy can pick up, right?
     
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    ooc: no scent what-so-ever. Lol. Not one strange scent what so ever >: )
     
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    Raising her hand to open a portal of darkness, Zexion reached out, grabbing her wrist.
    "Larxene...where are you going now?" he asked. "To see...Max? Again? What are you doing? Seeing him?"


    Larxene turned her head to look at him, stiffening. "What are you talking about?" she asked.

    "Do you really think I'm that dense? I can smell his 'scent' on you..." Zexion whispered, leaning in close to her. "He isn't safe...you shouldn't trust him...for all we know, he could be the one...who...made Axel fade..."

    Jerking back from him, Larxene glared at him, retorting, "I really...don't know who to believe anymore...but what I want...what I want to truly know is...who did this...to Axel..."
     
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    Zexion stops moving and Xert apiers next to him. "If you want to know who killed Axle all you have to do is ask the right person." Xert said to Larxene
     
  12. daxma Hei Long: Unrivalled under the Heavens

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    Dramaxus appears from a Dark portal.
    "If you want to know who killed axel your looking
    at the right person".
    Dramaxus smiles.
    "The only real question is can you avenge his death?".
     
  13. OOC: First of all, the Station Of Awakening cannot be reached, because is simply a unknown place or dream, where you start. Nobody can get to it, as it more likely belongs to your mind. Only Roxas and Sora were the ones to have experienced this as fact. Which brings me to this:

    Just because Sora and Roxas (they're connected) can wield the Oblivion, and the other keyblades, doesn't mean you can use it as well, all those keyblades belong to Sora (because they all come out from the keychains that he has), just like Terra's belongs to him. And you can't be a keyblade wielder, since only two (Riku and Sora, I don't count Kairi, but if you wish, do so. Roxas was Sora's Nobody), are in KH2 (and we're kind of following canon here, despite AU), and to have a sudden Nobody that can wield keyblades is out of nowhere and doesn't make sense, so is a good idea if you choose another normal weapon.

    Other than that, you're way, WAY, overpowered, many Oblivion keyblades, like Zexion's lexicon, a mixture of Oblivion and Terra's keyblades? That's power playing, and you didn't even place a element. Plus, every nobody can transport, you don't have to put that in. Try to pick a element, and another type of weapon (it can be dual like Axel's, or just one), and keep the powers to a minimum you know? It isn't fair to the rest.

    And...Axel didn't die by a battle.
     
  14. daxma Hei Long: Unrivalled under the Heavens

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    Name: Dramaxus
    Age: 14
    Appearance: Dark Blue eyes
    Hair: Like Riku's (KH2) hairstyle but in black.
    Skin Colour: White
    Clothes: Black cloak but under the cloak is
    the same as mickeys gear (BBS) except it's
    human sized
    Number: number II
    Element: Air
    Abilities: A giant nobody sign that can turn
    into Dual chain launchers and has Mysterious
    different Powers.
    Title: The Denisen of nothingness
     
  15. OOC: Thank you ^^;, sorry to jump on you that way. Though what type of powers...and element (air, metal, something?)?

    Okay, I guess that works if you want to keep what you can do a secret :P.
     
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    "Dramaxus," Xert started,' don't fill her head with lies. And I told you not to fowllo me." opens portal under Dramaxus he falls through. "sorry about that now as I said all you have to do is ask the right person."

    OOC: I'm number II
     
  17. daxma Hei Long: Unrivalled under the Heavens

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    Dramaxus comes from behind from out of a portal.
    "Xert i killed axel with my own weapon.The reason
    why Zexion couldn't sniff me out was because i used
    my symbol to make a temporary clone to take axel out........".
    Dramaxus smiles."......... and it felt good".
     
  18. OOC: Hopefully, you're still lying....*sharp eye*.
     
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    She took a step back when Larxene appeared.

    .........Max?.........and.....who are the two of you anyway?

    She said to the other two people.

    OOC-....okay....what the h***?.........Axel is Twilight's character if she wants him dead then he's FREAKING DEAD AND YOU DIDN'T KILL HIM!
     
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    "OK. fine you found out i'm lying".
     
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