Oda's Songs

I write alot of songs here is a few of my current pieces Any Crits are welcome

A Darkened Spirit

This world is full of sorrow
Endlessly calling out for tomorrow
Everyone forced to suffer each day
Pain is here to perminatly stay
Why must the darkness spread?
Every soul ends up dead

This world has a shadowed side
This is a fact no one can hide
We all have a blind goal
And an eternal soul
Acting as we see fit
Recieving a Darkened spirit

Many souls are beyond hope
How can we cope?
An unwanted reality
How can this be?
When will the light arrive?
Why must we survive?

This world has a shadowed side
This is a fact no one can hide
We all have a blind goal
And an eternal soul
Acting as we see fit
Recieving a darkened spirit

Why is this world so dark?
Endlessy fearing it like a shark
Will the door open wide?
And stop hiding the dark inside
Give us some light to go on in life
Waiting for death's syythe
Acting like time has split
With a darkened spirit

Emotionaly blind

In this world everyone feels pain
Some live, some die its easy to explain
Time passes by faster than you know
And there are people who want to go
But many suffer in silent ways
And this thought always stays

This world has shown me
Things I don't want to see
Seeing the worst of mankind
Its making me emotionally blind
Never let sorrow get the best of you
Focus on whats good and true

When you see someone in need
You walk away with your own greed
What would you do?
If it was you?
So don't turn away form the poor
Or you will feel a sorrow you can't ignore

This world has shown me
Things I don't want to see
Seeing the worst of mankind
Its making me emotionally blind
Never let sorrow get the best of you
Focus on whats good and true

When you have seen what I've been forced to see
You will end up like me
In this world you never know what you can find
Anything can turn you emotionly blind
so do something to help those in need
And throw away your greed
Use your heart not your mind
Don't become emotionally blind

Eternal regret

I remember those days we spent together
Back when I acted clever
When we smiled everyday
There is still so much I want to say
My heart became so weak
To me you were unique

Until that day you said enough of this
On the day one year after our first kiss
My heart was broken worse than ever before
I thought our love was to pure
You walked away leaving me soaking wet
With an eternal regret

I have never cried since that day
But my love for you never went away
So why can't you see?
without you there is no me
I was dazled by your beutiful smile
I wanted to take you up the aile

Until that day you said enough of this
On the day one year after our first kiss
My heart was broken worse than ever before
I thought our love was to pure
You walked away leaving me soaking wet
With an eternal regret

Come back to me please my dear
Since you left I haven't shed a tear
you have made me so weak hearted
I've felt like this since you parted
My love for you keeps my heart beating
My heart was never this weak before our meeting
As time goes on my heart grows weaker yet
Letting you go is my eternal regret

Loyal

We all start with our emotions out clear
But for some they are buried by fear
One day yours could be free
But the future is what you can't see
All it takes is a dark plan
To cause what anyone can

People start of as friends
But thats not always how it ends
Emotions get buried away
To a place they must stay
Why throw that unwanted soil?
Is anyone really loyal?

If you are told a secret by a friend
And spread it around before the days end
That starts burying your friend's emtions away
Emotions could be gone in a day
But for some they can think of the good things past
To try and make their emotions last

People start of as friends
But thats not always how it ends
Emotions get buried away
To a place they must stay
Why throw that unwanted soil?
Is anyone really loyal?

They hide them in things they make
Acting like a emotionless fake
But each creation shows a feeling deep within
Until thrown away into a bin
To the truth you could be blind
Or just don't want to know deep within your mind
A life is easy to foil
Is anyone really loyal?

Weak hearted

I have a long story to tell
A story where the strong fell
Why did this happen to me
This is the start of my story
They took me down like a fool
They used me like a tool

The way I have been treated in the past
My strength left me so fast
It made me so weak hearted
Where my strength parted
How did I cope?
Losing all my hope

I began to defend harshly to all
Even those who chose to call
I got at everyone near
And created my own fear
Why did I turn this way?
I hate myself thats what I say

The way I have been treated in the past
My strength left me so fast
It made me so weak hearted
Where my strength parted
How did I cope?
Losing all my hope

They all played their hand
And my sorrow was their demand
I was turned into a guy with no cares
Where everyone stares
Time made it worse
A scene I can't Reverse
I got weak hearted
My strength parted
This is what you started

 

It's nice :] Keep up the good work

 

Nice, deep lyricks indeed! You rhyme very well. Try to vary the structure of your songs abit, as you tend to use the same petterns over and over.

 

Here is a new song with a different rhyme scheme enjoy

Be yourself

Wow wow wow yeah
I have something to say
so listen and listen good
Its time to face your judgement day
The choice is your to make
so remember to listen to your heart and mind
Look deep in your heart and soul
and your identity is what you'll find

So stop acting like someone else
and just be yourself
Uncover your face
and put that mask on a shelf
when someone asks you " who are you?"
the answer should me clear
that you are who you are ment to be
and a person without fear

Step out of the shadows left by your past
and focus on the here and now
Leave that opain behind
Its simple to know how
You shouldn't let anyone change you
No matter how many times they try
Never turn away from who you are
Never let them make you cry

So stop acting like someone else
and just be yourself
Uncover your face
and put that mask on a shelf
when someone asks you " who are you?"
the answer should me clear
that you are who you are ment to be
and a person without fear

Sheild yourself from their evil ways
and remain as you are
Never do what they want you to
Remain the same and you will go far
Don't throw away your friends
or lose track of your identity
They accept you as you are
and will help you live happy and free

So stop acting like someone else
and just be yourself
Uncover your face
and put that mask on a shelf
when someone asks you " who are you?"
the answer should me clear
that you are who you are ment to be
and a person without fear

So don't be what your not
Be as you were born to be
Stand tall and live as destiny fortold
Listen to me and be happy
Life doesn't have to be a nightmare
It can just be insane
Its up to you to decide
don't let your tears drip down a drain

So stop acting like someone else
and just be yourself
Uncover your face
and put that mask on a shelf
when someone asks you " who are you?"
the answer should me clear
that you are who you are ment to be
and a person without fear

So unmask your face
don't scream out in shame
Stand tall as yourself
Life is like a game
if you don't take your chance
You can never win
Life is full of risks
Kill your demons within

Just be yourself
Throw your shame away
Don't be no one
But Yourself
So just be
just be yourself
Everyone wants you
to be
You
So be Yourself

 

I love this new lyrick! So true so real so savvy. <3 I hope this gets made into an actual song and put on a video site or musick site. I'd love to hear it. Sounds like it'd be very snappy and upbeat.

 

Pretty cool songs my friend.

Did you play music with these?

I personally liked Loyal.

 

I'm inlove with these lyrics... x]

They're totally awesome, so meaningful... I like the newest one ya posted best >w<
Great job~ =D

Yes, we'd love to hear this x3

 

Here are some more songs

Forgotten Name

As the sun rises and I awake
Theres a story I long to remake
I long for the day I remember it all
The day I can stand tall
Why did this happen to me
I workd hard as can be

I used to know who I am
Back when I wasn't a sham
I live in shame
Over my forgotten name
Please bring back my past
So I can rest at last

My life was going great
Till I toyed with fate
Now my mind has a gap
Hidden under my cap
Bring back my memory
And set my soul free

I used to know who I am
Back when I wasn't a sham
I live in shame
Over my forgotten name
Please bring back my past
So I can rest at last

My mind is Endlessy blank
And I know not who to thank
I wish the paper would fill
So I can finaly pay the bill
Please let me be whole
That is my goal
I know I sound lame
Tell me my Forgotten name

Unwanted Presence

I live in a place
Where no one cares for the human race
They go by not caring at all
When no one will call
No matter where I go
I get thrown away by those I know

Why do I bother coming along
When its clear I don't belong
I live in a blind sorrow
Should I come back tommorrow?
I am just an Unwated presence
Why don't I use common sense?

I will always be cast away
Why do I bother to stay
I get treated like a tool
I am always a fool
I should just leave right now
But its like I don't know how

Why do I bother coming along
When its clear I don't belong
I live in a blind sorrow
Should I come back tommorrow?
I am just an Unwated presence
Why don't I use common sense?

I am the one no one invites along
And Treated like a mong
I do not deserve to be here in your eyes
And all I say is treated like lies
Cast me away because I know you will
Used as a joke till you've had your fill
Why do I end up in suspence
Because I am an unwanted presence

Sea of blood

Every time eyes close they never open again
Denying this would be insane
Endlessy wondering how long is left for me
Pain anyone can have or see
A world of danger and chaos for all
Never being allowed to fall

Everyday spilling more blood than anyone should
Always swimming in a sea of blood
Hunted everywhere I've stepped
This is a sorrow I've kept
Hatred of me spreads everywhere
Why doesn't anyone care

A monster in the world's eyes
The stories about me are always lies
Everyone wants me dead
Many times failing to fall on my deathbed
Life is for me to ignore never standing tall
I want to fall

Everyday spilling more blood than anyone should
Always swimming in a sea of blood
Hunted everywhere I've stepped
This is a sorrow I've kept
Hatred of me spreads everywhere
Why doesn't anyone care

All the time I want to die
And I will never cry
Everytime I try to die it ends in failure
Death is what I want for sure
I always survive
I don't want to stay alive
I am hated more than anyone could
Swimimming in a sea of blood
What is left to say
Please let me die today
And top this sea
Of Blood
Its not good

Silent Dreamer

This world is so loud
And full of those Proud
But all dream louder than a lions roar
This is something no one can ignore
Thankfully there is a silent place
And someone we all Chase

For the one we all dislike
Riding a hate me bike
Because he is a silent Dreamer
Maing us all an evil schemer
Silence fills his home
Where noise can't roam

Let the world follow his path
Lets all do the math
Over time the worlld will be at peace
If the noise will cease
Or will we all lose our ability to hear
Which is his worst Fear

For the one we all dislike
Riding a hate me bike
Because he is a silent Dreamer
Maing us all an evil schemer
Silence fills his home
Where noise can't roam

Join him or hate him
Don't let peace be so dim
And I tell you this beacuse
I do not want your applause
I dislike to much noise
Only to the limit everyone enjoys
I hate the screamer
I am the silent Dreamer

 

LOVE!

I love how your lyricks are straightforward and simple yet convey so much emotion. I really love Sea Of Blood, man. Great job! Keep it up.

You should get someone to do the musick for you.

 

whoa-whoa-whoa..
pretty cool man..
i like the "Eternal Regret" and "Silent Dreamer"
can i have the lyrics..?

Cool..
thanks again pal'^^

 

Two new songs

Lonely kid

I can't believe this has happened
I've been left alone
And no ones there
To hear me wisper and moan
So will someone
Come to me
I can't wait
To know who it will be

So will someone please
Come and let me
Have some fun
And speak freely
Cause I'm a
Lonely kid
And this is a fact
That can't be hid

Will someone please
Come to me
I need to have fun
Its clear as can be
I can't bear this
Silent chat
So someone please
Come here you can give me that

So will someone please
Come and let me
Have some fun
And speak freely
Cause I'm a
Lonely kid
And this is a fact
That can't be hid

I can't bear to be alone
And I always am left behind
Freedom and friends
Are hard to find
So I beg of you
Free me from this pain
And let my friends
come here and always remain
So stop keeping it hid
Cause I'm a Lonely Kid
Just a lonely kid

Untold

We are here now
To explore the past
But will the things we find
Gives us answers at last
I'm nothing much
Just someone
Whit alot of questions
But the answers are gone

We are looking
Into the past
but our searches
End so fast
We have a story
That has been left untold
We don't know
If its is really old

Well the story of us
End in the same way?
We will never know
Till our dieing day
So will our live forever
Or has it got the same fate
As the one we are looking for
For these answers we can't wait

We are looking
Into the past
but our searches
End so fast
We have a story
That has been left untold
We don't know
If its is really old

I'm unsure what we will see
Or what we will learn
But soon we will know
What our testing will return
So be aware
We are near the end
But succes is something
Which we can't comprehend

So its Untold
Is it old
Will it remain
Untold

 

I asked if I could before I made this post and was told I could so here enjoy some new songs by me
I think I'll start with a parody song I wrote after I heard that Card games on motorcycles joke while being Rickrolled
Card games on motorcycles

We're no strangers to duels
You know the rules and so do I
A true challenge is what I'm thinking off
You would get this from every guy

I just wanna show you
How I play my duels

Never gonna give it up
Never gonna let them down
Never gonna stand around and duel you
Never not gonna make you cry
Never play standing still
Card games on motorcycles always WILL!

We've been dueling for so long
Your legs are stone
But we can fix that
Card games on motorcycles
We know the game and we're gonna play it

And if you duel me any time at all
Don't tell me to stand still

Never gonna give it up
Never gonna let them down
Never gonna stand around and duel you
Never not gonna make you cry
Never play standing still
Card games on motorcycles always WILL!

Never gonna give it up
Never gonna let them down
Never gonna stand around and duel you
Never not gonna make you cry
Never play standing still
Card games on motorcycles always WILL!

Give it up, give it up
Give it up, give it up
Never gonna stop,
Never gonna stop, give it up
Never gonna stop,
Never gonna stop, give it up
Never gonna stop,
Never gonna stop, give it up
Never gonna stop,
Never gonna stop, give it up


I just wanna duel you
with friction on my face

Never gonna give it up
Never gonna let them down
Never gonna stand around and duel you
Never not gonna make you cry
Never play standing still
Card games on motorcycles always WILL!

Never gonna give it up
Never gonna let them down
Never gonna stand around and duel you
Never not gonna make you cry
Never play standing still
Card games on motorcycles always WILL!

Never gonna give it up
Never gonna let them down
Never gonna stand around and duel you
Never not gonna make you cry
Never play standing still
Card games on motorcycles always WILL!

Second up I wrote about a group of my other friends (Be nice to me and You may get a mention in one of my future lyrics)
Don't forget me

Listen up or rather read clearly
This is a new lyric by me
I have stood strong
Creating a new song
I used to be an emo fool
I even started to act cruel
But despite that fact
I have found what I lacked

So I'm asking no telling you
That stupidity is through
I can't prove my words are real
And I can't know how you feel
But I can simply state this
I have family I won't dismiss
Time has flown by fast and free
Please Don't forget me

I am ODA Indeed
But I ignored my own Plead
"Rewrite your main few"
I now know I needed to
I've given them all a new life
I have abandoned all their old strife
But some things remain
Their hands still bear that blood stain

Oda's words are as below
"I'm a guy no one will know"
Minerat will say this
"I'm a guy no one will miss"
Orgat will change belief
"I will kill Mankind's thief"
As for mine here you see
Please Don't forget me

My thought will now flow
To the new family I know
There is the Faithful one at lead
A warrior who no one can exceed
The one who uses the flowing red
The controller of the dead
A killer from the north or south
And the next verse is from their mouth

Hmm forced to speak yet again
In my life he is just a pain
I have failed to protect many before
Yet you said there is no one you can count on more
Why did you ask me to protect
No matter if I object
The last things heard when his soul was set free
"Crimson pal Don't forget me"

Next up we have the walking shield
Though once we have shared a battlefield
I still don't know much about their past
We became friends very fast
A new world traveled every day
A dimension hero in every way
Always making the right choice
Now listen to their voice

I prefer to keep my distance
But he would never let me have that chance
He has never made his intentions clear
But I always knew when he was near
He could have betrayed me many times
And he would even had committed crimes
Though three words were always a guarantee
They were "Don't forget me"

Next up is someone I've failed before
I was once the one to ignore
The Guy to be hated
Was this fated
But that didn't last long
And our friendship is now strong
We may be of similar age
It is time for them to take the stage

I once battle with and against him
And I have often thought his wits were dim
I once thought He I could overcome
But in time that thought was dumb
He called me his honorable friend
And his help he would always lend
His last words was more than three
"Crystal buddy Don't forget me"

Well that is three down three to go
And those three may not know
The one I try to protect is number four
But I don't think my protection is needed anymore
Many are there to lend a hand
And each of them will make a stand
But I will still have their back
Hoping they stay on the right track
Now it is time for them to go
There the next singer of this show

I was once young and seen as weak
That diagnosis was bleak
Yet so few believed it was right
I even took part in a fight
He lent me a helping hand
Then chose to no longer take a stand
Then he simply said "Little buddy
Please don't forget me"

That is four two people are left to do
And I am wondering if you know it is you
Anyhow now on the the saved life
The assassin with the deathly knife
That's right I see you as family
I doubt you feel the same way about me
Though I can say that I don't care
But it is your time to step up there

I once gave my respect and even looked up to you
But those days soon were through
You changed into a emo a stupid fool
You became a complete moronic tool
I won't ever count on you to change
With every return you become more strange
I've accepted who you became to be
But still you said "Don't forget me"

One person left to speak
And they are the Godly freak
Yeah that's right I mean you
Your in my family too
The white materia named one
The person with all their sanity gone
The one who would scare a hawk
Living oblivion time to talk

Haha the Mr Prideful Number two
I can't believe this came from you
I always make the impossible
And I can say my work is never dull
Yet you always seem to stay away
You only joined one to this day
And you vanished very quickly
And said "Don't forget me"

That was some of my family
There is more people to see
I don't know what they would say
There are more than those mentioned today
There is even a twin for myself left out
But you better not cry or shout
I shall soon give you a mention
So I hope I have your attention

There is my prideful twin
And the Cat with the weird grin
The rugby player who's seen my face
And there creator of this place
The one who would always back down
Lets not forget the one who once wore the A Crown
The Aussie fool I dragged into a dispute
Those clues may not compute

That leaves me with this to say
That is all my family to this day
Knowing my clue about you is quite likely
But please Don't forget me

And finally the lyric I am most proud of since It came from my heart here enjoy(I actually have a tune in mind for this one)
My heart is talking

I've been walking alone
Down a long street
Not knowing where it goes
Or if I can rest my feet
I've passed many towns along the way
Never finding a place to stay
The people I meet
Tell me to walk away

I know my heart is talking
But I can't hear a word
When I look for help
I sound completely absurd
Every time I walk away
The words stay the same
Am I part of
An endless game

I have walked so far
Without a clue
Of where I'm going
Wanting to start anew
Though I've walked so far
The end never gets any nearer
Will my heart's words
Ever get any clearer?

My heart is talking
In a silent Voice
I often wonder if
Walking away is the right choice
When I walk away
My heart is broken
And the words
Are once again spoken

Every time I make new friends
They tell me to walk away
They always tell me
I've got no reason to stay
Why is my heart
Always torn apart
I try so hard
But fail to be smart

My heart is talking
Without making a sound
It's like on in a cycle
Being thrown around and around
I never knew
How hard it could be
Till everyone I knew
Turned their back on me

I tried so hard
To understand
My heart's words
Without a helping hand
I try each time
Only to fail
Now my life tastes
Bitter and stale

My Heart is talking
So Quietly
But it only speaks
When I'm so unhappy
Leaving me to wonder
Within a deep despair
My broken heart suffers each day
Is this really fair?

My feet have walked
A million steps over and over again
While my heart suffers
A never ending pain
Everyone turns away from me
Eventually
Has the cursed devil
Set his sights on me?

My heart is talking
But I can't hear it speak
It's always so low
A voice that is very weak
A great darkness
Fills my mind
An answer
Is what I must find

Every town I reach
Turn their backs on me
But listen to a
Bitter Irony
I've never
Turned away
I'm still your friend
To this very day

Cause I know
My heart is talking
But I can't
Hear a single thing
The words are lower
Than a whisper far away
I want to hear
What my heart has to say
I know my heart is
Talking

 

Interesting works. At one point in reading through I thought I was getting rick rolled, but I got duel tolled instead lol

Your rhyming methods and format are interesting. You should keep writing, hope to hear more soon ^_^

 

Well I will post up some more in time but I just had to write this.
It is a tribute kind of thing for a character I respect yet the title already would show that.
The hero I respect

These words aren't very clear
But I've a story to tell here
The story of a hero so true
Though he may be hated by you
Now I'll start to tell his tale
Which started when the air went stale
A war was raging in which someone was lost
And the poor boy paid a heartbreaking cost

But a familiar voice called out to him
And his future seemed less dim
He turned away from all he knew
Following the path he thought was true
He doubted the highest command
And he claimed records by hand
Training by night through his precious object
That was the first step to becoming The hero I respect

Over time his old home snatched from within
But yet he already knew this was comin'
He was emotionally prepared
Not once did he feel scared
Trained to act within the shade
He continued on the path he made
Until the day command was given away
And a new mission was given that day

He formed a new group
Using soldier from an old troop
The soldier from beneath the earth
Soon did they prove their worth
One future day changed his way
The child of command was met that day
Thus introduced before a bang effect
There was the hero I respect

Over time he helped in her cause
And evil's antics he helped pause
Many time did he and the main
cause each other a bit of pain
Always to be stopped by the reason
He even once was accused of treason
And on the night before the reclaim
His actions from then on were not the same

A new order formed from the victory
He took action upon this opportunity
A simple tamper worked quite well
But still his secret he chose not to tell
Yet he still had the same belief
And would give the power to his chief
The one who spoke though the object
Was free now thanks to the Hero I respect

In time his group all grew old
And he did as Command told
He gathered a brand new crew
Who each had a dark secret too
They trained together as a team
But was things really as the seem
Command tasked with finding the young child
And wife lost upon the island drifting so wild

This task was done quite well
And he had a good story to tell
Yet a new evil came to take his home
And an ally could no longer roam
His team had been lost
And his hope was the cost
His heart chose marriage at the point of a vile object
He is the married hero I respect

In time the two lived free
And they were happy as can be
Many missions did they complete
And always were they discreet
Until one day he failed to hear
From the girl he held dear
He searched but she was gone
Leaving him to restore his mighty one

His master took command by people's will
And that day did his heart fill
Yet sanity left his master's mind
and then the truth he did find
So he planed to betray
But he failed that day
An vile mind chose to infect
The body of the hero I respect

So I do not expect
You all to name the hero I respect
But if you can I will say
I will defer to you this day.

 

I must say this was an excellent poem, however. In this line above, the word "comin'" just doesn't seem to fit with the rest of poem. It sort of breaks the combo meter if you catch my drift. There is a simple way to fix it though . . .

In this way the flow is corrected and the same point comes across. However, this is your work after all and should you choose to leave it the same I would still like the poem. Just some friendly advice from your neighborhood . . . um . . . friend. ^.^

 

Damn if we got this person to do a song with us Nights it would be pretty sick.

Also here I've noticed this a lot in your style

My heart is talking
In a silent Voice
I often wonder if
Walking away is the right choice
When I walk away
My heart is broken
And the words
Are once again spoken

Every time I make new friends
They tell me to walk away
They always tell me
I've got no reason to stay
Why is my heart
Always torn apart
I try so hard
But fail to be smart

Like where you say
In a silent voice
I often wonder if
Walking away is the right choice

Why not just combine why not combine I often wonder if walking away is the right choice
I do see where the flow was going but its kinda like a break or pause in the middle of the actual bar itself
Nothing wrong if you like to do that just thought I could throw something out there.

 

Nasirich Nights and I are friends and if you wanted my help with writing a song I'd gladly assist.
And as for My heart is talking
When I wrote that I had the feeling I didn't know where I belonged.
And the friends I make notice I'm not happy where I am and tell me to go and find the place I will be happy.
Think about that when reading it and maybe you will understand it.

As for the way I set it up, my intention was to set it like a song and put a breathing gap mid sentance kind of thing. On the example you used my original set up was
"I often Wonder, if walking away is the right choice"
By doing it the way I have it makes the lyrics appear longer when in reality it would be equal to about a two minute song.

 

Ok ok I feel you on that and its not really writing a song. Its just dumping in hard verses into a single song. So it is helping writing, but its just your part.

I still did enjoy both of your crazy songs good job

 

A group I call my friends

I now have more people to talk about
Yet I don't need to shout
because they can hear me
The know who they might be
There is so many to say
But I guess I'll start with Jay
Mr Yuki yes it is you
You are the one who got me back It's true

Are you my best friend? That depends
But I will say your parts of A group I call my friends
Fearless is the next in line
And Rex who has moved on fine.
Then we have Little Joe and Mr Red
So many more friends who will stay in my head
Next up is easy to tell
Terra, Fred and of course Reinzel

All found through the arena of yu gi oh
But now on to the show
I met the the other guy with a poetic mind
Nights is a friend I didn't expect to find
For the first time in history
Someone who thinks just like me
Next I met through him is Nas
But the rapper soon showed his class

A hand of friendship I chose to extend
Your in a group I call my friends
I have mentioned so many here but I'm not done
The is next the Timely Heroic one
that is right I mean you
And there is Cloud too
Of course I can't forget that Mr annoying
Star the guy who drove me to sing

If I failed to mention you time
Maybe you will get better luck next rhyme
For I have no more time to spend
Welcome to a group I call my friends

 

Nice piece. Great shout out to your friends. Thanks. And you missed an "a" in the last verse "filed" should be "failed"

But good work, can't wait to hear more.