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    The Way [Rap]

    Once upon a time
    I drew inside the lines
    to find another way
    was completely out of mind

    The truths that we hold dear
    but not another word
    is to enter for we fear
    freedom is so absurd

    So one day I found out
    that life will hit you hard
    the way that it comes at you
    is like a deck of cards

    You can play em all day long
    you can leave em with a song
    you can beat em cause you're strong
    you can cheat em no it's wrong

    So I turned away
    from the me I used to be
    life became more simple
    its clear so now you see

    I am not the greatest man
    that you can find upon this earth
    I keep on moving on
    try to find my re-rebirth

    For I fear if I don't change
    things will fall apart around me
    I leave the center stage
    but then I go another round see

    I keep looking for the way
    then once I found it clear
    she's leading me astray
    back to the me I am in here

    For they say that only men
    can repeat the same mistakes
    they say that only women
    can teach them to relate

    All the issues that surround
    them all they try to do
    is to teach you wrong from right
    and so i'm born anew

    So now i've found my way
    the one that I must pray
    will never turn from me
    my heart would then decay

    I know now for my love
    there's anything i'd do
    to keep that smile smiling
    I must say I love you

    ~~I don't know Rap/Hip-Hop ??? Doesn't matter, lyrics is lyrics, the beat is the beat, and so I hope that you, have enjoyed this little treat.
     
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    Avert Your Eyes Away

    Thank you RS4E ^_^ makes me glad that people like my pieces.

    I said it once
    I said it twice
    I don't care if
    your evil or nice

    Just for once
    i'd like to say
    i'd rather you
    avert your eyes away

    In the darkness
    I reside
    try my best I
    cannot hide

    These evil thoughts of mine
    crawl through my mind
    they call and haunt me
    terrorize

    All I see
    is your face in the mirror
    all I hear
    is no please my dear

    Why can't you
    just stay away
    i'd rather you
    avert your eyes away

    Please now don't
    look upon my soul
    what you'll see
    is nothing at all

    Now I know
    just how it feels
    the pain inside
    it never heals

    Try my best
    I cannot hide
    they call and haunt me
    terrorize

    I look upon
    your face so clear
    I cry as you now
    shed a tear

    Please don't cry
    it's all over now
    the pain is gone
    still I don't know how

    I see you looking
    in the mirror
    please don't show
    me that fear

    Forever more
    and all the days
    i'd rather you
    avert your eyes away

    Please don't cry
    it's over now
    the pain is gone
    I don't know how

    I see you looking
    in the mirror
    please don't show
    me that fear

    Forever more
    and all the days
    you will now
    avert your eyes away

    This is a poem/rock song that just helps to relieve some stress. I find it soothing if I put emotions into literary pieces rather than try and convey them in a sociable mannerism. I wish I could actually record this one, it is the piece that haunts me most yet also the piece I could never give up. The key to life, is not knowing; the key to life IS not knowing.

    It means that you do not need to know to live your life. You simply need not to know. Life is random in many ways, in fact in every way. So one could say your essence is randomly comprised of atoms and electrical surges. In this way, LIFE IS SIMPLY NOT KNOWING. And if it doesn't make sense then GTFO you must open your eyes wider.
     
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    These are amazing.

    I love the first and eighth lines the best. I can kind of relate to this one a bit, as well. Nice work.


    These are amazing.

    I love the first and eighth lines the best. I can kind of relate to this one a bit, as well. Nice work.
     
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    The reason I love your poetry so much is because, some of them are mysterious. Very powerful and meaningful...
    I always look forward to your poetry because you always give such great detail and above all feeling!
    Keep up the great work. :D
     
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    Thank you all for your comments ^_^ they are much appreciated. Now to up the beat (haven't posted in a while I know, sorry) here is a song for all of you.

    I was living my life
    like any other
    till I met my wife
    she's a mother
    of a little girl
    only three years old
    I faced a choice
    that would change my world . . .

    Now i'm a dad
    now i'm a dad
    living the life
    that I never had
    now some may think
    i'm a little crazy
    well you may be right
    it's still a little hazy

    Raising a family
    i'm still raising myself
    what have I got into
    though there's no one else
    who would step in
    and be a figure
    in her life
    now I got the picture . . .

    Cause i'm a dad
    i'm a dad
    living the life
    that I never had
    Can't believe
    that you think it's sad
    cause it's so great
    just to be a dad

    Her first day
    on her way
    she stops
    to say . . .

    Hey there dad
    don't look so sad
    you see there's
    something I have had
    for a while
    to tell you
    then she smiled
    and said I love you . . .

    Cause you're my dad
    yes you're my dad
    and there's no other
    that I've ever had
    so won't you please
    just smile for me
    I'll be home
    bout 2:15 . . .

    I smiled and waved
    as she said goodbye
    my little angel
    how she rules my life
    and I can't imagine
    what it would be like
    if I could go back
    and change my mind . . .

    Cause i'm a dad
    yea i'm a dad
    this is the best
    life I have ever had

    If you don't
    believe me
    I have just one
    thing to say . . .

    I'm a dad
    yea i'm a dad
    and between us
    I can't be sad
    when I see
    her smiling
    it's almost like
    i'm just free falling . . .

    I'm a dad
    i'm a dad
    i'm a dad
    i'm . . . a . . . da-----d

    Okay this is a song inspired by a friend of mine. Hope you all like it.
    Just in case you were wondering, the title of this song is Freedom Fighters . . . no not really. It's called I'm A Dad not that you should be able to guess or anything.
     
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    Independence

    (Thank you R&S4E)

    I once had a dream
    like Martin Luther King
    a dream full of hope
    for every living thing

    As far as you can see
    lies peace and prosperity
    as far as you can hear
    laughter ringing merrily

    I look at this world
    in which we live now
    and see that my dreams
    have all been shot down

    Independence
    what a laughable word
    independence
    a word so absurd
    to the public
    is a natural thing
    to the people
    let freedom ring

    There once was a time
    when the world was so free
    a place so sublime
    a haven to me

    That is all gone now
    for now you must see
    what really is going on
    in this reality

    Crimes are all peaking
    the highest they've been
    your minds are all weakening
    not so very keen
    lies and such deceit
    our government must lean
    to rectify the evil
    the worst I have seen

    Independence
    what a laughable word
    independence
    a word so absurd
    to the public
    is a natural thing
    to the people
    let freedom ring

    Now they are saying
    it's all shutting down
    over one stupid bill
    they are pushing around

    If we'd come together
    and speak truthfully
    I think that we may
    just begin to see
    the world we are seeking
    of peace and of love
    a world powered by us
    no help from above

    Independence
    now I have heard
    independence
    not so absurd
    to the people
    we shall let freedom ring
    but only if
    we start listening
    INDEPENDENCE

    ***Okay, this is a song of . . . well you probably already know.
    [MARQUEE]Warning: If you click this button V below then you will have your mind blown, I repeat have your mind blown. . . . also you will have a very long rant to look at.[/MARQUEE]
    Anyway, in the second to last verse last line, help from above refers to the help from the government. I seek a world in which we could truly be independent even from the government. The people are who brought this nation together and the people are what we need to keep it running. The higher ups have forgotten about that little tid-bit and tossed us aside to line there own pockets. I say let the government shut down for a while, toss everyone out, then flip the entire political stand. I want people's choice first, government second. Not government first and us never. We gave them too many second chances, enough is enough. I say we take things over again. Be honest with yourselves, who runs the whole thing? Police=Us Firemen=Us Farmers=Us Factory Workers=Us Do I need to go on? We run all the important stuff, the government does what, takes care of the money. If you started a business, would you let the people you hire take care of all your money? No because they would steal it, duh. So why should we let the same thing happen any longer. Thank you if you actually read this entire rant, and if it has opened your eyes at all then I have done my job. "Voice of survival, out." -Infamous
     
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    A Riddle

    What is life?
    What is existence?
    What is the definition of how to base your life within this existence?
    What is . . .

    Things happen
    we all listen
    we aren't hearing
    the truth

    You see that
    things are
    in many ways different
    from me and you

    That doesn't
    mean that
    we can
    go judging

    So what does
    this mean
    that we
    stop loving

    The things that
    we care
    the most
    for in life

    We must
    realize
    the truth
    before it dies

    Life is just
    a riddle
    an ordinary
    simple thing
    we cannot
    realize
    the answer
    lies so deep inside
    ourselves as though
    we must hide it
    realize it
    it's a riddle
    with no rhyme
    and it appears we are
    out of time

    That is all
    so long for now
    just remember
    who what why when where how . . .

    ~~Hope you enjoyed this, it is more of an original style. A riddle, a question, or a mystery. All answers start with the one of the words from the last line, because you can't answer a question without asking one yourself.
     
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    Self Reflection

    I look in a mirror
    now what do I see
    some f'd up guy
    staring back at me

    That is not I
    who I used to be
    you can take it away
    you can have it for free

    I do not like
    who I see in the mirror
    it fills me with fright
    terror and fear

    Though he moves as I
    I know it's a lie
    so I have decided that
    he must now die

    I shatter the mirror
    with one solid punch
    then I get sick
    and throw up my lunch

    I look at the pieces
    a million there are
    all scattered about
    some near and some far

    A million new pieces
    for his stupid face
    a million new portals
    that I must erase

    I pick up the pieces
    and throw them away
    I go now outside
    and enjoy the day

    I return now at night
    and what do I find?
    the pieces still waiting
    what I left behind

    I retake the pieces
    from there "trashy" demise
    oh how the pieces
    I truly despise

    But oh once more
    I find myself then
    putting those pieces
    together again

    Piece by piece
    and shard by shard
    I put them together
    in my backyard

    Finally finished
    now back it goes
    to its cozy surrounding
    that it only knows

    With the mirror back together
    and all pieced in right
    I take just one more glance
    and again say goodnight

    ~~In a world full of faces, you're only but one. In a world full of greatness, you may have none. In a world full of hatred, you may have some. In a world of my friends, you're welcome to come.
     
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    True Hearts Lie

    I met a girl
    one afternoon
    and she had
    made me smile

    I was so happy
    that we met
    I had to
    stay a while

    Time went by
    and a girl came along
    she tried
    to be her friend

    I saw right through
    her heart so true
    she was evil
    in the end

    I must protect her
    forever more
    her feelings must
    not be played

    And so I
    became the one
    who was evil
    who betrayed

    I must not see her
    anymore
    until she comes
    to see me

    I awaited for
    that day so long
    I just couldn't
    believe

    Again the girl
    had made a friend
    again she had
    been betrayed

    I told the friend
    to go away
    and that
    she must obey

    The girl showed up
    and once again
    I lied to
    save her pain

    The truth came out
    and in the end
    she didn't cry at all
    perhaps I should have
    told her then
    and saved myself the fall

    If I must simply take the blame
    to keep her smiling on
    I would do it over and over again
    even if it may be wrong

    I would like to say this only
    for if tomorrow I would die
    that if you have a true heart
    you know that you must lie

    ~~ This is a poem about Yohiro Saiga, a character off of the anime Special A. True Hearts Lie is the title because a true heart will lie to protect the ones they love, even though sometimes it isn't needed.
     
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    Have I ever told you,
    things just aren't the same.
    We keep on working on,
    trying to play the game.

    Life is not, what it used to be,
    with you and me, together!
    Life is more than an old dime store,
    it's you and me forever!

    Go on! We will survive.
    Live on! We must realize,
    the things we can't believe . . .
    the things we cannot see!
    We must look beyond,
    to find our destiny!

    It's here, me and you,
    no more fear, will get through.
    Together I can do,
    most anything with you!

    The time has come,
    the time is now,
    to stand together
    we won't back down!

    Love is a powerful thing,
    and love will pull us through again!!

    ~~ Based on the group the gods of KH between a couple. There names are Aku and Akaya.
     
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    Man Named Blue

    I once knew
    a man named blue
    and he had once told me,
    you can't get far
    by northern star
    if you cannot see.

    I asked him why
    did he try
    to tell me this and he said,
    if I could see
    then I would be
    home right now in my bed.

    Sleeping, sleeping,
    counting the sheep one by one.
    Sleeping, sleeping,
    it would let me know my day was done.

    I once had a dream
    blue continued on,
    about a red queen
    who I tried to con.

    She started yelling
    she said off with his head,
    surely I thought
    that I soon would be dead.

    I kept on running
    till a quarter past three
    and woke up to find that
    I no longer could see.

    The beautiful colors
    like blue and like green,
    I could no longer
    have beautiful dreams.

    I told him that maybe
    he wasn't so blind,
    in his dreams he only
    left a small piece behind

    ~~ A lullaby piece I made in a group, deemed it worthy of posting here.
     
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    Makes Me Glad

    Everything will be better
    at the break of dawn,
    no one truly knows
    just how far we've gone,
    to be here together
    was a true miracle,
    if you think about it
    kinda hysterical.

    I can't even breath when your not there,
    I cannot think when we both stare-at each other.
    Cause when I look in your eyes all the things I've been through, don't seem so bad . . .
    cause when I look in your eyes I just want to hold you, and it makes me glad.

    As long as we're together,
    I'd face any kind of weather.
    Cause when I look in your eyes all the things I've been through, don't seem so bad . . .
    cause when I look in your eyes all my dreams come true, and it makes me makes me very glad.

    I just want you to know,
    one thing that I do,
    and that one thing is . . . .
    loving you.

    Cause it makes me glad!
    Cause it makes me glad!
    Cause it makes me glad!
    Cause it makes . . . me . . . glad.

    ~~Another song ^_^ this one is kind of up-beat. Hope you all like it!
     
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    Near Death Experience

    There once was a hole that I fell down
    and it was oh so deep
    my mind just could not wrap around
    to where this hole may lead

    I kept falling on and on
    until I reached the end
    from there I started traveling on
    a path leading back again

    I tried and tried for oh so long
    but it was just to far
    I finally stopped along the path
    to look up at the stars

    There so pretty so I thought
    I found myself asleep
    dreaming of a little child
    alone oh did she weep

    Crying crying for so long
    I tried to comfort her
    she turned and then she took my arm
    and held up a razor

    Just before the blade had reached
    its touch upon my skin
    I woke up and so from there
    I started traveling again

    On and on and on I walked
    never reaching an end
    I felt as though I may be stalked
    oh who could it be then

    I turned around to see them there
    standing one by one
    a million who looked just like me
    waiting to travel on

    What are you doing standing there
    I asked them and they said
    we'd like to ask you the same thing
    you see truth is your dead

    No no no I then replied
    this just cannot be
    I just simply could not die
    for I am here you see

    Turn around then they told me
    you will see the truth
    I did and then I fearfully
    looked upon my youth

    It was there before my eyes
    every moment past
    it seems as though I truly died
    that moment was my last

    Falling down the hole so deep
    wondering where it would lead
    I soon found exactly where
    my death it caused indeed

    So this is how it ended then
    oh no how could this be
    I heard a very loud yelling
    and it was telling me

    Come on now you must come back
    don't you dare die on me
    I then awoke very distraught
    I could just barely see

    Two pairs of arms wrapped round my neck
    you silly silly boy
    I can't believe after the wreck
    you choked upon a toy

    So then it was all just a dream
    the hole and then the path
    then seeing all that everything
    all of my own past

    Well this is how my story ends
    this is how it shall be
    and so I must say bye my friends
    till next time I see thee
     
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    Note by Note

    bro·ken
    [broh-kuhn]

    –adjective
    2.
    reduced to fragments; fragmented.
    3.
    ruptured; torn; fractured.
    4.
    not functioning properly; out of working order.

    It seems as though
    my heart let go
    of all things
    I used to know

    Then one day
    she came along
    and played my heart
    just like a song

    Note by note
    beat by beat
    piece by piece
    like a symphony
    I could see
    everything
    as long as she
    was there with me

    It was perfect
    her and me
    life together
    simplicity

    All the while
    she pulled the strings
    I lost sight
    of what was happening

    She left me
    all alone
    once again
    here stuck at home

    I'm left without a clue
    just as to who
    it was I fell in love with
    well I guess it was you

    Note by note
    beat by beat
    piece by piece
    like a symphony
    I guess I couldn't see
    anything truly
    it was all a lie
    now you want set free

    Now i'm left here broken
    hearted and alone
    there's nothing left to do
    but just put down this phone

    A million different thoughts
    are rushing through my mind
    before I even met you
    that happened all the time

    I have nothing left to take
    my mind off all the things
    that I can't stand within this world
    finally I hear the ring

    I put the phone up to my ear
    and this is what I hear
    i'm sorry but it isn't you
    that's all that I could bear

    I dropped the phone
    ran to the door
    started the car
    pedal to the floor

    Twenty thirty, miles an hour
    man can you hear that horse power
    oh looks like my stops coming up
    believe me it'll be abrupt . . .

    Note by note
    beat by beat
    piece by piece
    like a symphony
    once again now
    I can see
    everything
    so perfectly

    I close my eyes
    just one last time
    then I slammed the brakes
    but I was past that line

    What if you could see me now
    I highly doubt that you'd be proud
    I hope this isn't really loud
    if I could change it all, but how

    note by note
    beat by beat
    all my options
    seem to repeat
    floating around
    all in my head
    i'm truly sorry
    looks like i'm . . .

    ~~Just wrote this to relieve some stress . . . helps a lot :sweatdrop:
     
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    I thought I replied to this yesterday. ;_;

    Anyway, I've only read the last song you wrote so far, but I really like what you have. o:
    I thought you captured the narrator's stress about the girl abandoning him well, epecially when you repeated these two lines

    it gave a sense of dissonance to the reader, and added to the growing tone of loss that the narrator is experiencing within himself.

    Great job c:
     
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    Call

    Thank you ^_^ much appreciated. I have found that great pieces come from some of the most terrible moments of your life (well not that bad but you know what I mean) I like the feedback and so here is another . . . poem/song/rhythmic tune???

    I've been thinking
    and thinking
    bout what the
    future holds

    Just staring
    and blinking
    at what just
    may unfold

    So many things
    I could do
    the phone starts to ring
    somehow I kind of knew

    I got the Call
    I got it today
    pack up my bags
    i'm going away
    protecting the people
    of my dearest home
    I know when I get there
    I won't be alone

    I know it may be hard
    when i'm starting out
    but i'll gain a big part
    of what life is all about

    You serve for your country
    and never look back
    a great hardened melody
    the greatest i'll have

    The lessons i'll learn
    the memories i'll make
    and when I return
    there will be better days

    I got the Call
    I got it today
    pack up my bags
    i'm going away
    protecting the people
    of my dearest home
    I know when I get there
    I won't be alone

    And if by some strange chance
    I wasn't to return
    i'd send back a letter
    with one lesson that I learned

    If you get the Call
    please don't delay
    pack up your bags
    and don't run away
    protecting the people
    of our dearest home
    just know when you get there
    you won't be alone

    Just know when you get there
    you won't . . . be . . . alone

    ~~~ (May have ripped off a line from a comic by Jay Naylor but here is credit to him^_^)
     
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    Encounter

    There once was a girl who walked alone
    a lonely path indeed
    she left a crimson path behind
    fore she had felt the need

    To stain her blade with many souls
    no one could get away
    she is still walking alone
    right to this very day

    But this day ends and so it seems
    this girl is left alone
    stuck in a cavern cursed and now
    she must call this her home

    Until the years go passing by
    and another girl comes along
    now this young girl is tricked by her
    shes asked to right a wrong

    The innocent girl willingly
    helps the other out
    for they had shared there names you see
    friends they were no doubt

    The wicked one now wears a smile
    a smile worn so falsely
    the innocent young girl will find
    the truth soon hopefully

    If in the end she was to fall
    into the wicked ones arms
    it would mean the end of all
    set off the alarms

    Though only time will tell you see
    and now we must find out
    how this all will come to be
    what will it be about?
     
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    Dearly Departed (Apartment)

    From birth you rose
    and then you grew
    somehow I
    sort of really knew

    You would make it
    in this world
    almost like
    it's fate unfurled

    You grew and grew
    and grew until
    a dream was finally
    made real

    You raised so many
    family's too
    from happy faces
    to those who're blue

    So many people
    you have met
    keeping them
    from getting wet

    When winter came
    you kept them warm
    and never have you
    gave way to storm

    So many years
    I've watched you now
    it seems to short
    just to allow

    These thugs to come
    and end your time
    for me no reason
    or a rhyme

    Could ever replace
    how you made me feel
    this feeling of hope
    was so unreal

    Their yellow neon
    jackets glow
    they flip the switch
    as I pleaded no

    They left me here
    again alone
    no more place
    to call my own

    For you were more
    than just a home
    you were my friend
    until then end

    I wait until
    the thugs all leave
    I run to you
    begin to heave

    I grab you now
    and start to place
    you back together
    piece by piece

    Why won't you stay
    together anymore
    your charred remains
    and broken floor

    I dig a hole
    that's six feet deep
    and it is there
    I lay you to sleep

    Now that I look back
    I should have really known
    my Dearly Departed friend
    my Dearly Departed home

    ~~Just a poem to characterize ones love with the environment they were raised in.

    Why should we
    the people be
    so hard to see

    Why our voices are not heard
    is it truly that absurd
    what used to be the freedom bird

    Try, try, try as we may
    no matter what the people say
    they will always get there way

    Reign down all supreme
    let out all your steam
    forget all your regime

    Drink the crimson down
    run about the town
    tell them all right now

    The truth has finally come
    I will not even run
    I know what I have done

    Sentenced to death
    my final breath
    as they inject

    I die for you
    don't look so blue
    just check your shoe

    Contingency's I had plenty
    more than five at least twenty
    that is why I had sent for thee

    Hear that ticking
    then the clicking
    feel the licking

    Bright and red
    crazy that's what you said
    well now look who's dead

    I can see the light
    it's oh so bright
    now I take flight

    Wait, why am I falling
    what is that calling
    guess no more stalling

    As a hero I fell
    my story please tell
    as I travel through ****

    ~~I'm not really sure myself . . . oh well.
     
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    Just another poem

    I'd like to take the time to say
    does anyone know the time of day
    it would help if I knew the way

    Walking through all of the doors
    I won't stop at all anymore
    not even if I hit the floor

    Though as I run I understand
    just what it is to be a man
    takes more than a helping hand

    Give me time to think it over
    if I go to fast it'll get me nowhere
    can't stop to think, I have to go there

    Places keep going in my mind
    in fact they do it all the time
    that's why it is hard to find

    I'm lost without a key
    for if you look at me
    I am just simply

    A boy with lot's of friends
    a boy who just so tends
    to try and make amends

    Just look at the core of
    my soul and you'll see more of
    me, my name is Sora
     
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    Rap Attack!!

    First off i'd like to say welcome and have a happy day
    why yall lookin at me like that, like you're up on the attack
    I'll take yall back to back, just please don't talk any smack
    rhyming words is what I do, I rhyme so fast up on you
    you don't know how to react, boy if you're not just a hack
    I could kick without hesitation, make you lose your respiration
    but see i'm not that kind of guy, yall best know that I
    am simply a grander poet, than back when I first wrote it
    back in the beginning I started out, not knowing a thing about
    how things worked now here I am, I have got a better plan
    knock the crap out of the chorus, if not for you then do it for us
    anyway I end it here, i'm sick and tired of showing fear
    no more will I run away, i'll stand here while you try to play
    play your little games you think i'll fall over off the brink
    well i'm gone, been long gone for a while, bet you didn't know but I like to smile
    when you tell me that i'm not as good as I could be
    you think you're saying something smart and you would be
    if I didn't already know, that's how it now must go
    starting to break the flow, look time to end the show
    I know that i'll never be, as great as I could be
    cause you know there's always room for improvement
    come on now with me, we gon' start a movement
    movement of the masses we raise our glasses high
    cheers to the victors and the losers, hey at least you tried
    but you know it's not as great, as first place
    second is a disgrace to you, bet you already knew that
    but don't get discouraged just take the time to word it
    all out in your mind, then you'll start to bust the rhymes
    you know you could but you couldn't before
    you get motivated and your feet hit the floor
    hope we all start hearing even more
    Poetry in the Creativ-Cor