Naruto Shippuden: The Neo Akatsuki (Spoilers! Some dead characters are revealed!)

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  1. Asterisk NO WONT LET YOU

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    "..No..we had a head start, and she was still eating.The chances of her beating us, especially on a full stomach, are unlikely." Takashi replied as he shut his eyes and re-opened them in one second."Byakugan!" he activated his bloodline limit and narrowed his eyes, trying to find the target throughout the forest.The more he looked, the more he came to realize that he wasn't locking on to the right area..this guy was hiding his presence pretty well now, but he was detected easily only seconds ago!

    Was he screwing with them?


    Suddenly, a figure shrouded in red with black spots leaped out of the forest area behind hem, blade aimed for Masami's back, looking to slice her spine and take her out of the fight permanently.She'd be in critical condition, sure..but she'd live..hopefully.After all, she had something that his organization needed before she could be allowed to die.

    "Masami!" Takashi shouted, already realizing what was happening, but knew it was too late to counter the attack.He looked around, seeing what was happening and how it would end up..
     
  2. Singstar Traverse Town Homebody

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    Masami realized what was happening and quickly jumped away from him, onto a tree. He's fast. she said to herself and looked around. Water. she said as her eyes aimed at the body of water. She looked around, making sure she wasn't being followed, and dived into the pond. She did an immediate hand sign and gasped. She was breathing underwater. She looked up at the surface, knowing that Takashi could handle himself. She then began to do hand sign and hand sign.
     
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    OOC: I stated a while ago that the cloak they wear is the opposide of the regular Akatsuki. It's Red with Black clouds.
     
  4. Asterisk NO WONT LET YOU

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    OOC: all right, all right, no big deal..I'll fix it..

    The figure abandoned Masami as a target and instead took aim at Takashi, the blade of his sword sparkling with electricity.He wore a black blindfold over his eyes and attacked as if he didn't have it on.He had his targets, and all he had to do was get them.

    Knowing that Masami got away uninjured made things easier for Takashi, and once she got away he wasted no time pulling a kunai from his holster and twirling it for a moment.He raised it and countered the attacker blow for blow, sparks flying from the clash."Who are you!?" he questioned, not bothering to stop defending himself as he asked the question.It didn't look like the attacker would be stopping on a whim anyway.Hand to hand was his advantage, but it was risky for now, and he had to know if Masami was making plans or not.He couldn't wait forever.
     
  5. Sir Charles of Monocles The Fault in Our Stars

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    Taka looked up from his training. He could tell there was a battle going on somewhere near." Byakugan." he muttered, activating his bloodline limit. He noticed his 2nd cousin Takashi fighting someone nearby. "Should we go see what's happening Sichi-chan?" Do whatever you want. the demon panther said, barely hiding her excitement. Taka took off in the direction of his cousin.
     
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    Masami ended her with the ox sign and pointed her hands to the surface of the water. A rumble from the water was heard, and a wave of water burst out of the pond, shaped as a dragon, and zoomed down toward Takashi and the cloaked man. I hope he has sense to move. she thought to herself, as she did another set of hand signs and another water-dragon erected from the water and zoomed down to the cloaked man.
     
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    As soon as the dragon popped out of the water, Takashi knew he had to get out of the way.Easier said than done.After parrying just a few more blows from the man in the red cloak, Takashi leaped back a good distance away and threw his kunai at the same time.It was deflected with ease by the man, and Takashi had not expected it to work, but to only keep him there a little longer to lower the chance of dodging.

    Now in safe distance from any more melee attacks, Takashi rested down on a tree to see the results.


    Just as soon as Takashi withdrew from the confrontation, the man placed his blade back in his backside holster and faced the raging dragons heading for him.He brought his hands together, realizing that he could paralyze this one easily.She sealed her fate on this one.He was blind..but not stupid, as he knew water was rushing toward him.He formed a string of handsigns at an unreadable speed."..Lightning Style..Lightning Shield Jutsu." he mumbled, barely above a whisper.He then brought his hands to his side as they cackled with lightning, and soon enough the lightning spread around him, forming a sphere of it.

    The dragon collided with it, and the man was unharmed, and things weren't over just yet.The lightning used to form the shield was now using the water channel to travel back to Masami, and it soon reached her, zapping her with a massive amount of force and causing her water dragons to disperse and turn into nothing but puddles on the ground.(Talked about it with her..don't complain >.>)
     
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    She used to much chakara, and she was steadily loosing her ability to breath underwater. She looked up, hoping that it worked, then began to swim to the surface. Just as she began to swim, a stream of electricity zoomed toward her. Before she could react, she was hit with the electricity, feeling like a thousand knives stabbing her. She fell on the pond floor hard, and past out.
     
  9. Sir Charles of Monocles The Fault in Our Stars

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    Taka at the edge of the woods. Heds. "Itoko-sama!" Taka spoke, searching for his cousin. "Byakugan"

    OOC: Itoko-sama means older second cousin
     
  10. Asterisk NO WONT LET YOU

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    "Masami!" Takashi shouted as he rushed toward the pond, knowing she couldn't have avoided that.However, that same man landed in his way, not giving him the chance to help her.This foe was beyond any he had ever faced, and he knew he wouldn't survive this as he was now.He'd save Masami, or die trying to.It came as quite the surprise as soon as the figure was knocked out of the way with an invisible force.

    "Takashi, save her!" shouted Neji Hyuuga, palm outstretched as he just finished throwing an Air Palm.It worked by expelling chakra and sending it toward his opponent, knocking them away.His Byakugan activated, Neji leaped forward and engaged the figure, continuing his Air Palm ability.

    "Right!" Takashi nodded and quickly leaped into the pond, and was glad that it wasn't too deep down.Seeing Masami floating near the bottom, nearly lifeless, he scooped her up in his arms and kicked off the pond floor, quickly arriving back up at the surface."Masami, say something!" he urged her as he breathed deeply, getting himself out of the pond and setting her down on the soft, wet grass.Meanwhile, Neji was still keeping the attacker back with his skills.

    Hearing the call of his cousin, Taka, Neji looked off in his direction.Tell him to stay away, or tell him to hurry his butt over?"Over here!" he shouted, because you'd never know when you need help, and he did need someone to carry Masami if she had to go to the hospital.
     
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    She was out, not answering to Takashi's call. From the lack of chakra in his lungs, and the lack of air, and the lightning shock made her go out cold. She wasn't responding, but she was alive, she was a strong girl.
     
  12. Sir Charles of Monocles The Fault in Our Stars

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    Taka quickly ran over to help his father and cousin. Naturally, being a Hyuuga, he went into the Gentle Fist Stance.Don't let this guy have a chakra affinity of lightning. Taka thought. "Doton: Domu no Jutsu." He slammed his heel on the ground, making an earth spear appear.
     
  13. daxma Hei Long: Unrivalled under the Heavens

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    OOC: I'm going to have to do a little flash back for a moment. Another long post because i haven't been able to get on lately.

    7 days earlier...As Kimirasu did research on his father he found something very interesting.He was walking along reading recent leaf village history books to discover a grey area.As his father went to orochimaru the sixth lord hokage went after him and thats all it says.He needed to know what happened.He travelled to the sixth hokages home and knocked on the door."Hokage uzamaki(wrong spelling) i would like to know about what happened after you went after my father when he defected" and he lead kimirasu in.
    "Kimirasu, i assume your father won't tell you what happened then and i should respect his wish..." he said as kimirasu interupted.
    "...It isn't that he won't tell me, it's just whenever they mention your rivalry that battle is always left out and he doesn't like the reality of knowing that he defected.Please, hokage tell me, i need to know......" and the hokage told him of it....the intensity, the power, the emotion, and the fierocity and most importantly the end of the battle...." the battle ended when we used super enhanced versions of rasengan and chidori...i used vermilion or kyuubi rasengan and he used chidori lament...my attack enhanced by the nine tailed fox and his attack enhanced by his curse mark..." he said looking to an old picture of team 7 with the late kakashi hatake."We passed on our techniques to you and my daughter kinen..."


    Today..."That was a bit cold takashi but then again your moms side of the family and i'm dads" he said as he used body flicker jutsu to take off.He took out a hand book on all hand signs written by orochimaru.He went to the forest for training to practise his technique.He focused on the giant tree in front of him.He jumped back and slid as he put his hand to his ground as he did 22 hands signs but was abruptly interrupted with the sound of exclaimations of his uncle in the village.he used body flicker to appear alongside takashi." I just heard neji exclaiming to protect Masami.I saw lightning also, have you got a cloud ninja attacking?" he asked.

    Sikomaru appeared opposite to the side of tien."Crystal Release: Crystal Infection" he whispered and targeted at taka hyuuga to crystalise his chkra and control it.
     
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    OOC:...okay..the idea here was that Tien does this alone..no partner >.>

    "Use your eyes!" Takashi quickly told Kiri as he picked Masami up in his arms and ran off toward Konoha, unable to check on her closely due to he not being a medical ninja.

    Tien surrounded his blade with lightning and threw it at Takashi's back, not wanting his targets to escape so easily.

    "Heavenly Spin!" shouted a full grown Hanabi as she leaped behind her son and spun around, barely deflecting the sword in time.She stopped spinning and glared at Tien.Anyone who hurt her family would pay the price.

    "Fire Style, Mythical Fire Phoenix!" Sasuke landed just beside his wife, firing fireballs from his mouth and sending them flying toward Tien.

    Now things were getting out of hand for him.While he could easily take each of them, he needed to re-think his strategy first.Just before the fire balls crashed into him, he disappeared just like that.

    Hanabi, nodding toward Sasuke, ran after Takashi to make sure both he and the girl were okay.She kept the secret for too long..and if this was anything like the group from before, he should know the truth.

    OOC: Gerd uh..I'm not gonna necessarily leave you alone so I'll keep Neji and Sasuke there, but they won't do all the work :P
     
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    OOC: You can't control the parents, just your Team Leader and your characters. Also, all Neo Akatsuki are paired in twos, like the old Akatsuki was. Since they are the first two that were added, they are paired together.

    BIC: Churo was passing the training area, sulking. Then he heard a battle going on and went to see what was up.
     
  16. Asterisk NO WONT LET YOU

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    OOC:..Dude..Fishy used Sakura and Daxma used Naruto in his flashback.Their my characters parents so why the heck not?...ugh forget it.
     
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    OOC: Those where minor things, it's not like they had them fighting.
     
  18. Asterisk NO WONT LET YOU

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    Then you should've said something earlier..pretend Sasuke is gone then..

    Anyway one final OC.

    Username: Gatekeeper
    Name: Kaori Uchiha
    Age: 16
    Gender: Female
    Bijuu: None for now.
    Starting element: Fire
    Specialty Jutsu (only two to start with. Eye techniques like the Sharingan are counted as one):Fireball Jutsu.Mythical Fire Phoenix.
    Parents: Sasuke Uchiha and Hanabi Hyuuga
    Appearance: [​IMG]
    Preferable weapons: Shuriken, Windmill Shuriken (When trained)
    Other: Quiet and often hostile towards anyone outside of herself, her brother(Takashi), mother and father.Swore to beat Takashi and the Hokage's daughter one day, and trains hard to accomplish that dream.
     
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    oc: wahhhhh!! D; i couldn't get on the computer for 2 days.. but im back, then ill be gone again... kinda... :D but, only until things get stable on this end. D:

    bic:Kinen looked to see that Takashi had left. Must've gotten bored with me.... "Ai" decided to make herself known. Aww! He's probably just making sure Masami isn't offended, or something. Benefit of the doubt, remember. Kinen nodded to herself. Kinen got up, payed for the meal, and headed towards the forest. (not the one of the training grounds.) Kinen saw a flash of red and black run past her, and she shook it off. I'll have to tell Dad about that later.....
     
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    "I'll take her from here, go home, now!" Hanabi told Takashi as they both stopped.Takashi hesitated before handing Masami to his mother, and then watched as she sped off toward the hospital.She'd warn the Hokage of this attack once the girl was in the hospital.

    Takashi followed, stopping only when he saw Kinen ahead.He landed in front of her, arms spread out."Don't go, it isn't safe!" he warned her.
     
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