Naruto Shippuden: The Neo Akatsuki (Spoilers! Some dead characters are revealed!)

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  1. Asterisk NO WONT LET YOU

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    "What are you talking about?I did nothing but walk away..you make it sound like I spit in her face." Takashi said as he headed out toward the courtyard of his home...but oh how he wished he could spit on her.Wasn't like she was worth a dime anyway.She was nothing more than Konoha's little jewel, and that was all she'd ever be.Nothing more..much less.
     
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    OOC: That's going too far.
     
  3. Asterisk NO WONT LET YOU

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    OOC: Wasn't a personal attack but my bad dude.
     
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    Kinen felt pain. Pain, anger, and depression. She shook it out of her head by training some more. Yahhhhhh!!! Kinen's cry echoed out as she sliced the head off of her last clone, and it poofed away. Kinen called forth many more clones, and fought with them, too. She felt sort of angsty. Her bare hands broke her katana's. Am i really that mad? Kinen felt animalistic. "Ai" paniced. Kinen! Kinen! Calm down!! Kinen couldn't stop herself. She fought her clones one upon one. She made them dissappear. Her ager barely reduced. I. Don't. CARE. Kinen ran out of clones, so she made some more. She desroyed trees, and her clones alike. Her clones seemed shocked when she destroyed them.

    ooc: didn't know that. see? katana's go bye-bye. no worries! :)
     
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    OOC: It's okay, but really, your character is a big hypocrate. He doesn't just want to be known for his heritage, and yet he judges her as the Hokage's daughter, and not as herself.

    Churo stepped in and used the Shadow Possesion Jutsu on her, his shadow reaching her. "Kinen, calm down!" he said to her.
     
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    Masami closed her eyes, and followed Takashi too the courtyard. "But still.." she said, trying so hard for him to understand. "She's trying to be nice to you, she wants to be friends," she said and sighed. "She can be annoying, as I saw today, but all in all she's a pretty nice girl.' she said, trying hard for him to see. Then she closed her mouth, and held her head. "I'm not asking you to apologize to her, you have your reasons. Just, don't be harsh." And with that, she turned around and walked back inside.
     
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    Kinen couldn't calm down. She wanted to punch something. Hard. Kinen thrashed violently against the shadow. She felt as if she had lost control. Is that me? "Ai" seemed scared. Kinen, what's wrong with you?! Shut up, Ai. I don't want to hear ANYTHING from you. Kinen kept trying to move. She was pissed, furious. She couldn't stand how badly Takashi seemed to always treat her..... Like sh*t.
     
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    Churo walked towards her until they were face to face, the shadow possesion still in effect. "Kinen, please, this isn't the real you. Calm down." he said, putting his arms around her and hugging her.
     
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    OOC: I don't remember the part about 'not wanting to be known for his heritage'..probably because this has been nonstop..but basically he's going to work hard and be the best regardless of anyone thinking he already is due to his parents.It's hard to explain so I'm gonna leave it.

    Takashi sat down on the edge of the wooden floor and listened to Masami try to be a good person or whatever.Perhaps he was wrong in putting his respect with her..but either way, he wasn't going to apologize and change his ways on a whim.He shut his eyes and layed back, taking a well deserved rest.
     
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    Kinen felt an anima;'s growl escape from her throat. She bit down on her lip, trying to regain control. She felt a bit of blood come out of her lip, and Kinen calmed a bit. She was still struggling against the hold the shadow had against her. She felt like a little gir again, when her Daddy would hug her, when she cried because the kids in village were bullying her, or throwing rocks. She frowned, and she felt a single tear escape from her eye. "You're weak."hissed a voice in her head. " Once you become strong, I'll make you even stronger.." It....hissed? Kinen reopened her eyes to see the worried face of her friend, Churo.
     
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    "A-are you okay?" Churo asked her.
     
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    Kinen looked away from Churo, and at her feet. He was only trying to be a good guy. I'm fine. Kinen felt herself mumble. "Ai" hadn't been talking for a while. I'm going home, Churo-kun. I'll see you tomorrow.
     
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    "I'll walk you home." he said, releasing her from the jutsu and kissing her forehead.
     
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    Kinen didn't look at him. Do what you want. Kinen walked far ahead of Churo, not bothering to look back. I hate Takashi "Ai" finally spoke up. No, ya don't qut being stuborn! You just hate him NOW. What difference does it make. Kinen walked the streets farther ahead of Churo.
     
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    Churo sighed, catching up with her. I wish she'd pay more attention to me, and stop worrying about that a**hole Takashi. he thought.
     
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    Kinen fell into a mental depression. Blah, I hate Takashi. Blah, the world sucks. Blah, I hate my life. Kinen suddenly decided that she wouldn't care. Awww. Don't be like that. Ai sighed You SHOULD care about some things...like the fact that you're Mom will kill you if she's sees you come home late WITH A BOY. Kinen stopped, and turned to Churo. I'll walk by myself from here. I don't want YOU to get in trouble too. And with that, Kinen ran back to her own house, and she went inside, to a VERY angry Mom.
     
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    He sighed again and went home. "I think I see what my dad meant about women." he said to himself. "But I can't stop loving her."
     
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    Kinen sighed and apologized t her Mom, and Dad. Her Dad didn't seem that made about it, but mom hit him in the head for that. Poor dad. wonder why he bothered arrying mom. I mean, I love her, but shes kinda bossey. Kinen went up stairs, locked her door and windows, and went to sleep. Knowing that she was gonna sleep dreamlessly.
     
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    He lay outside and looked up at the stars, drifting off to sleep.
     
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    Kinen woke at 4am the next morning. She packed only water, and her kunai/shuriken. She jumped out her window, and headed out to the training grounds, for training. She called many shadow clones, and paired them each. She was in control, now. Kinen fought her clones relentlessly, aiming for strength, and not for anger. She threw kunai atthe clone she was currently fighting, and it threw some back. She dodged, and kicked it in the face before fighting another clone.
     
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