Chapter 1 - The begining "Okay" I said to myself looking in the mirror. Eyes - Both light brown mixed with green. Hair - Brown as always. School uniform - New and good looking. Honey - Looks fine and is just a human. I ate breakfast but still had too much time, so, I tidied the already spotless house. After a while there was nothing I could do so I left and took a walk in the forest. It was a nice sunny day for it. "I'm perfectly normal, I just moved to a normal town with normal people and a normal school." That's what I'd liked to have said and it was a few short hours of freedom. I saw her after about 10 minutes of walking in the forest. She was a blur then she stopped and stared for a few seonds, then, was just a blur again. She was beautiful, no, not beautiful...Perfect fit more nicely. The next day I went to the same spot again and wandered around for a few hours looking for her when I realized I had ten minutes left 'till school. "What the duck?!" I screamed at some invisible person. I ran as fast as I could before I saw her again on a swing. "I think you should skip today" She said "I have superb hearing and a couple of boys are waiting for you. Something about flushing your head down a toilet, if I remember rightly." She said in a very musical voice. A little high pitched but still, music to my ears. I sighed then I was confused "Sorry but...Do I know you?" I asked nervously. She just swang higher and higher and jumped off at the highest point reachable (Just before the swing went of the bar) I just stood open mouthed. She cussed then murmered about pretending it didn't happen "No you don't Honey. I'm Alice. now you do." She giggled to herself "But why are you calling me Honey you don't even know -" She put a finger to my lips so quickly I didn't see it happen. "I didn't mean it the way that girls say it to everyone they know. I eant you name. Honey...Honey Dracula. People wander around with garlic to annoy you." Alice Stated. "But of course thats just myth. A real vampire wouldn't be affected by garlic or crucifix's they just pretended to do so to make people leave them alone. Turning into bat's though...God knows who started that about us." Alice rambled on "Us?" I asked. Alice cussed again "Now you have to come home with me or I have to drink your blood. Your lucky I love you." She said "Super...I only meant don't you mean them not us but now I get to stay in vampire-ville" I said. "Yay! Your coming with me!" She danced around for a while and then picked me up and ran...Very fast. And before I knew it I was outside an extremely white mansion. I read the sign out loud "Fox residence." "Oh thats my parents names...They aren't my birth parents. I never did remember my last name." Alice thought for a minute. "Listen Alice! Right now I'm not sure weather I'd prefer death to living under the same roof as you. I do not feel like dressing up doll's and drinking blood!" I shouted at her. Her bottom lip started quivering. "I was going to give you whatever you wanted food-wise and my parents have plenty of money to get you whatever entertainment you desire! And-and-and...." She ran inside to cry her heart out. "Me and my big mouth" I muttered and walked inside. The walls were white, the floor was white, he furniture was white, alot of decorations were white. "My favourite colour" I murmered and started searching for Alice. I finally saw her in the last room I checked. She was crying in the corner. I began to sneak up on her in hop of cheering her up. "Go away...I smell your blood I know your there." Alice murmered through her tears. "Oh come on. You make a slip and give me the option of dying or staying in your house forever. How were you expecting me to react?" I asked walking closer. "I won't be killing you mum and dad will probably kill me for letting the secret out and then kill you." She mumbled "Just run away and they might not bother tracking you down." I stepped closer and when I was in range. "Just one thing I want to know before I make any decisions." I grinned. "Do vampires get ticklish?" She looked at me. "Ooooohhhhh no" She said and for another hour the tickle monster did it's work. "So you'll stay?" She asked, she looked really nervous. "Yes I think I will...But only if you get me human food...Not essential human fluids. Unless...Your not turning me into a vampire...Are you?" I asked. "Done! And of course not...unless thats what you want" She said and skipped outside with a load of money hanging out of her pocket. I explored my new home while she was out. I finally knew my way perfectly. I was in a bedroom when I suddenly felt breathing on the back of my neck. Goose bumps rose and a shiver came down my spine. I turned around slowly and saw Alice taking steps towards me with a strange look in her eye. "Pay back time." She announced then pounced and pinned me to the bed. I closed my eyes not wishing it to end this way. The next second I burst out laughing. I opened my eyes to see Alice tickling me. She kept going until I fainted from lack of breath. I woke up some time later I felt somebody cradling me. My vision was still a blur "Hello? Who's there?"I asked. I heardd an excited sqeak and then m,y breath left my body again. "Can't...breath" I murmered. The grip instantly loosened "Sorry! I'm so sorry. I didn't mean to. I forgot you needed to breath!" "Heeeeeeeeeyyyyyy hey hey hey. Cool it. I'm fine now just a bit exaughsted. Its not your fault. But you do need to learn to play gentle. If you go crazy I could die." I told her this then gave her a huge hug as hard as I could. She just laughed. "Don't waste your energy hun. You aint sqeezing me to nothingness just yet." She laughed and set me down. Well you need more rest as do I. And yes vampires sleep...Just not in coffins. Tomorrows a new day. Good night!" She said and sung a few lullabys ignoring my protests then ended up singing herself to sleep. I sighed and allowed myself some sleep. "A new day" I murmered. I woke up the next day only to find myself confused. "Where am I again?" I asked myself and heard a snore from the corner of the room. I looked and saw a girl. "Alice." I murmered. I got up and decided to see if she had brought some food yet. Yes. I found a bowl, some coco pops and some milk. I sat at the table and ate quickly. I was now eager to do something more. "I know I'll go for a walk...Except of course I'm not aloud outside the house. I paced outside the front door for a while and pondered what to do. The front door started to open. Since Alice was asleep still I ran into a cupboard and closed the door but only so much that I could still see. Two very pale people walked in. They looked very pretty apart from what they were wearing... Blood stained clothes...And they were laughing. My heart started racing. I felt dizzy they were pretty. Both had black hair and a kind of gold coloured eyes. The woman sniffed at something "Do you smell that dear?" She asked the man. The man sniffed aswell "Why yes it appears dear old Alice left us a snack." The man sniffed and using his nose made his way towards the kitchen then back out. "I'd assume the snack's in here." The man announced opening the door revealing me. "Wait! Alice brought me here! She said I was lucky she loved me or she'd have to suck my blood. I SWEAR she was worried when I fainted she apparently never left my side." I explained. "Oh really?" The woman said "ALICE!" She shouted. "Alice is sleeping. I'll take you to her." I said and ran to the room in which we had slept. The man and the woman stepped in right behind me. The woman looked like she was getting ready to shout again. I put my hand over her mouth. "Its not polite to wake somebody like that" I murmered and walked over to Alice and shook her gently and and whispered her name. She slowly opened her eyes. slowly "Hey Honey" She muttered "Um Alice I was trying to let you sleep but a man and a woman seem to think you invited me here as a snack." I explained to her. He was out of the chair so quickly I didn't see it again. She was standing between me and her parents. "What were you saying about treating the residents of this house with respect?" she asked then surprised me by kissing me. "I love Honey and I beleive you two know what happens when a vampire falls in love?" Alice asked "Th-they love them for eternity and not even the strongest power can break that?" The woman said nervously. "That's right. Remember Honey is here because I love him not because I thought you'd be hungry after a week long hunting trip." Alice said and gave an additional snarl and left the room. The man and woman stood perfectly still for a few minutes then advanced upon me...Again. "I'm sorry Honey but...Our hunting trip didn't go so well...I just hope that we survive after this" The man sighed. "Ahah!" Alice re-entered grinning. "I knew you two would do this. I don't hurt people as you know...But I can't let my own parents eat my boyfriend sooooooo...I'm afraid either you two go to the holiday island or we will." Alice said. "Fair fair enough...Pack your bags hun. You may come back when he's either dead, a vampire or unless we say otherwise." The woman said as Alice turned "Oh and Alice...We'd prefer it if we didn't wait a hundred or so years." Alice just muttered something inaudible under her breath and left the room and reurned with two suitcases. "The clothes for us and your food." She explained and turned a computer on. She searched some websites and finally found a cheap boat and brought it. The next day the boat arrived. "It might be a long trip hunny" Alice said and made the finishing touches to the boat to make it transportable. I just yawned and got in the car "Maybe I'll sleep through the car trip and find something to keep me entertained on the boat." "Not happening...Vampire or not roing is a two man job" She grinned. "I love rowing" I said to make her happy. I'd tried it before and hated it. But if Alice cried again her parents may use it to their advantage. She got in and started driving. The trip was just begining. I'm not totally DONE with this chapter but I just want to know what you guys think so far. I wanna know what could use editing.
Well... I did see some grammar errors and spelling errors... To me, it seemed like the intro went by too fast. Liiiiiike... so is the main character a vampire as well as Alice? Maybe decribe more of your character so we get a basic drift of what he's like. Hm... it seems like you have it under control on what you're going to write about, so no more comments here. Peace. ^^
Thanks. Just that chapter took me three days. I'm editing the gramma and spelling after I finish editing each chapter. I do see what you mean about Honey. No he's not a vampire like Alice. I'm just letting my imagination shape the story so I have no idea what happens nexct 'till I write iot...Anyway thanks for the comments I'll work on that thanks. ^_^
Thanks...I'm just excited as you are. The story is happening itself...And this started with nothing better to do and abit of spare time.
I read too much. I practically devour words. In fact I started this story completely differently and was trying to force the words together but it didn't work so I just let it write itself. It's no where near gonna good enough to even try to publish. EDIT: I have extended the first chapter a bit I'll post it in the first post. I'll do this all the time so check back regularly if you like it and wanna know ahts gonna happen next
