Traditional Art my hand drawn riku pic

its kindof messed up but its the best i could do and yes ppl i drew this i hope you like it show you own riku pics too

 

You are awesome. Just work on the face and make the neck shorter next time. Other then that, I love it.​

 

The different style you used makes it look sorta wrong at first but I think the attention to detail and overall construction is pretty good. Worlds beyond me, big worlds.

 

Neck is too long, and he seems a little too lanky in general.

Overall though, not too bad at all.

 

Make him a little more muscular and his neck shorter.

Other than that, it was pretty awesome.

 

The face needs some work

 

Yes, this is an amzaing peice of art <3

But as mentioned, the neck is too long. Actually, sometimes I don't mind long necks cause it's part of the style sometimes. It's the face that puts me off, the structure doesn't seem... well right. But that's fine. He also seems a little skinny.

Honestly though, I like it. Just some of those things but I say [for short] just work on the face a bit and the picture would be fine. I love everything else <3
Amazing art~

 

umm twilight heart if your going to be negative about my work then stfu your negative comments aren't welcome with me

 

He wasn't being negative, he was telling you what you could do better, because no artist is godly enough to deserve no critique.

The neck is really awkward looking and quite long. Also, His eye should be down a bit, along with his nose just a tad, to give him more of forehead. The body should be less skinny and more muscular. Along with that, the position you have him sitting in is also awkward since his face and legs are in profile, but his torso is opened up a bit far. It looks a bit strange. Nice colouring I have to say, his hair looks great.