Marluxia's New Member Chaos

okay, that was a bit confusing

luck isn't my strong suit. I like strategy better

 

ahhhhh i liked it
little five-year-old Namine`
cute:p
im liking marly in this story, a lot of the times he's just a plain jerk, no backround, but this is awesome. i cant wait for the next ch!:D

 

I never thought of Marly as a jerk! I think Marly is nice when he was younger! But I will sadly have to make him evil because I can't change the game. So he will become evil

yes little Namine is cute! *hugs*

 

yea, i never thought marly was mean either
he just had a lets-take-over-the-world streak in him once!
meh, what do i know? i just thought he was even awesiomer in this fan-fic:p

 

I forgot this till now but why are they so young? I mean you said Zexion was what twelve? Is this some past thing I'm not noticing? Please someone tell me I'm confused.

 

:) thanks! If I had a choice I would keep him nice but I have to go along with the game and make him evil by the end

zexion is 11
demyx is 10
namine is 5
axel, saix, marluxia are 15

the others aren't important really

no offense but duh it's in the past! this is when marluxia first entered the organization! (I decided he can be 15)

 

Coolio! :D

I likie this chapter :D

Hmm...sorta stinks that in the future Marly's gonna be like totally evil and force her to do evil things (aka destroy Sora's memories)

Keep it up!

And you DEFINATELY have talent! :D

 

you should be talking! *pokes millions of talent that fg owns*

Yay! I don't want to make him evil but I have too :(

and towards Namine too!

new chapter in about 16ish hours?

 

Your timeline is different from mine. I was aware of the pastness but I had no idea it was like 8 years in the past. You can tell my math sucks.

 

give or take.

I guessed relative ages

 

For Chapter Five: Just asilly error of "here" instead of "hear" (hehehe, I'm probably coming off as an **** prude or something by now). I thought DiZ wouldn't do anything to help them, or was that merely an excuse from Xemnas?

Hmm, it should be entertaining when Larxene comes in. >8]

 

opps sorry *goes to fix*

Larxene's coming? I didn't know that!

 

YAY!! New chapy!!!! :)
Awwww...So Naminé was the baby...soooo cute!!! :3
I really loved this chapter!! Please keep on writting!!!
Oh!! You already know...PM ME!!! xDDD

 

yeah, I liked this chapter too

new chapter in less then 4 hours hopefully, I'll start writing once I wake up, (I just woke up)

I feel bad that Marluxia will be evil and makes Namine be evil too and try to kill them and it's sad!

I am posting this on fanfiction, the name's Xedarlesfangirl

 

NOOOOOOO!!! Marly's mean!! xD
You're posting this on fanfiction.net? OMG!! I'm going to review it!! :)

 

In the game he is and I can't change how it must turn out

Chapter one is up, I'll upload the rest later.

I completly forgot to start on chapter 6, so I am starting on it now, in less then 2 hours it should be out but I forgot, sorry it will be out soon

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Sorry it's late. I was having a life. Surprising as it is, I have one! But here is the chapter.


Chapter Six


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And that was how the next few weeks went by. There were no big events, troubles, or anything. Life in the organization was actually boring. Every day he would play with Naminé and that was about it. He had been in the organization for a month when things changed again.

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It was Axel’s birthday, or at least that was what he said. Marluxia wasn’t sure if nobodies could have birthdays even. If something didn’t exist, then how could it get older? They must be able to get older though because in the last month in the organization, Demyx had grown and he was a nobody. But never the less, Axel wanted a party in honor of his birthday.

Marluxia and Zexion volunteered to bake the cake. Where ever Marluxia went, Naminé would follow so she was helping too. Zexion might have only been eleven but he was very good at baking. Marluxia watched as he cracked open an egg with one hand and gently mixed the batter together. Marluxia didn’t do much beside help put the cake in the oven, time it, and get materials. Naminé helped to decorate the cake with her artistic abilities. She drew Axel on there with frosting and wrote ‘Happy 16th Birthday’ as well.

At the party, there was eating of birthday cake and pizza and a little dancing Not much was going on. Demyx volunteered to help out with the music. For one song, as a joke, Demyx started to play a slow song and said. “Would all of the couples come out onto the dance floor?â€

Every one laughed. Many members jokingly pushed out some of the guys together but no one really danced on the song besides Naminé and Marluxia. Marluxia danced with her because Naminé was so little and cute and she wanted to dance with some one.

At the end of the party Axel thanked every one and then slowly members left the room and went to bed.

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Naminé was still very hyper due to all of the festivities and didn’t want to go to sleep. Marluxia let her dance around for about half an hour until she was tired and feel right to sleep. Marluxia carefully put her into pajamas and put her into her bed. Naminé was always innocent but she looked even more innocent when she was sleeping, the way that she smiled in her sleep was adorable. If Naminé was his age, he would probably like her. Not that it was possible or anything but she was so adorable in a little kid sort of way.

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Marluxia was tired and instantly fell asleep when he got back to his own room. Naminé had grown so much in the last month. She no longer seemed so tiny at all. She was still small but not as much. That was something that Marluxia missed in the organization, girls. Being a fifteen year old boy pretty much made him think about girls a lot. There were never any around besides Naminé. Hopefully soon there would be new additions to the organization of the female gender.

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The next day, Xemnas woke them up early to tell them that a new recruit would be coming into the organization. Her name was Renale but in the organization she would be referred to as Larxene. Xemnas sent Axel and me to go find her because she is sixteen and he wanted kids close to her age to get her.

Axel and I opened a corridor to darkness to her home town. We searched for her. After looking in many places, we found a girl the pretty much fit the one that Xemnas had given us. She was about an inch shorter then Axel with straight blonde hair the reached to her shoulders and bright green eyes. She was wearing dark blue flared jeans and a long light green tank top.

“Axel, you should turn the charm on her to try to get her back with us. She doesn’t look like it should be too much trouble to convince. I’ll come for back up if it’s needed.†Marluxia said.

Axel just nodded and headed towards where Renale was sitting and reading. Marluxia couldn’t hear what Axel was saying but watched as he waved and put his arm around her like old friends. Renale struggled to stay sitting down and get Axel away from her. When he didn’t budge, she slapped him. Axel cringed and walked back towards Marluxia.

“That didn’t work. Do you have another plan?†Axel asked.

Marluxia nodded and walked towards her. “Renale?â€

The girl looked up. “How do you know my name?â€

“I’m a friend of a friend. Sorry about my friend, it was dare for him to try to get a girl to kiss him. He lost the dare. No one thought that he could do it any way. He’s very sorry for anything that he might have done. Why don’t you come with me so that he can apologize?â€

Hesitantly, Renale got up and came with them. Marluxia took her hand. He had missed girls and might as well make a move, right? Axel opened up a corridor to darkness after looking both ways and Marluxia lead her through it.

Xemnas was waiting for them when they got back. “Welcome Renale, welcome to Organization XII.†They went through the same talk and conversation that Marluxia had gotten just a month before when he had entered the organization.

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After Larxene had left, Xemnas went to talk to them. “I want you two to date Larxene.â€

“Us, why?†Marluxia asked.

“I want you three to be good friends. I want you both to date her, at different times of course.â€

“What do we get out of it?†Axel asked.

“Who ever is dating her has no chores and the other only has to take care of Naminé.â€

“Won’t it hurt her feelings?†Marluxia asked.

“None of you have feelings.†Xemnas said. “Now go, those are your orders.â€

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End of chapter. Larxene is here and Axel is older. The chapter was weird and random but it was a good length. Larxene isn't mean because as a kid I don't think any of them were that mean.

 

ahhahahaha
larxene slapped axel, ah ha ha ha
ahhh poor axel *hands axel an icepack* *continues to laugh*
ooooooooo are we gonna see some romance in these next few chapters?
oooooooooooo *winks at axel and marly*

 

yes. there will be Larxel and MarluxiaXlarxene (I forgot what it's called)

but NO Axel Marluxia because I like to avoid flames

yeah Larxene hits hard!

Axel: Larxene why did you slap me?
Larxene: Dance wrote it
Axel: Dance....!!!
Me: Should I run?

 

XD Aren't we clever?

As for this chapter, this was one of the "needed transitions" wasn't it? No worries.

I think there was a set of quotes missing for when Axel and Marluxia were reporting to Xemnas about Larxene.

This prospect of dating should be interesting... I'd like to bet that they might seek some 'dating advice' from the others whether they really want the advice or not. XD

 

Yeah, I couldn't have it take 100 chapters so some times there will be jumps

sorry about that?

Yeah I was deciding whether to put in Larxene or not in this chapter when I read your post and I had no better ideas.