Marluxia's New Member Chaos

I really don't know. I just needed to make him a nobody. So sure they were heartless, why not.

 

Meh... Whatev...

I'd like to see a bit more description in this story, but whatever - you don't have to listen to me. >.>;

 

I will try to add more description into the next chapter

 

meh, i think it rox
poor marly, i always thought of him as a sweety...who happened to have a random world domination-ness streak in him one wek, causing him to..um...die...^^'

anyway, cant wait for the next ch

ps. i always pictured him as being around 23-ish

 

Off-topic: Will Specter be included in this?

 

thanks!

woot one hour!

*gets to works*

Who?

(I might know, I just forgot)

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Woot, chapter three is out. All 1,079 words of it are done and it is about 27 hours after the last update. Hope you like it!



Chapter Three


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Marluxia walked down to the kitchen. No one had taught him how to do the cool thing where they disappeared into darkness yet, so he walked. All of the members were sitting around eating. Marluxia looked around and sat down next to Zexion after grabbing a muffin. He silently sat eating until he saw Xemnas stand up. He went around the table handing out papers. Marluxia looked down at his:

#X1 Marluxia

Training at 10 am

Dish duty for all meals

It seamed like an okay schedule and the task didn’t seam so complicated. He looked at his watch, it read 9:00. He had an hour to do the dishes and get to training. He just sat until every member was done.

He saw Demyx and Axel whispering and looking at him. They got up and walked over to him. “Is it true you like flowers and your favorite color is pink?†Demyx asked.

“Yeah, why?†Marluxia asked with a confused look on his face.

“No reason.†Axel said before the two put their plates in the sink and ran off laughing. Marluxia was still confused but got up to do the dishes. There were a lot of dishes but he did them by the time he needed to be at training.

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Marluxia sat in the training room wondering who his trainer would be today. He wasn’t early, in fact he was actually two minutes late. He waited for about ten more minutes until he watched Demyx walk into the room. Demyx was younger then he was.

“Sorry I was late. I was swimming.†Demyx said. “Today we will find your element, continue to train you on fighting, teach you basic skills, and help you with you weapon control.â€

Marluxia couldn’t help but laugh at the last one. He had seen Xigbar at breakfast with an eye patch. “So what are we doing first?â€

“Basic skills.†Marluxia watched as Demyx opened up a corridor to darkness and listened as he explained it. “So now you try.â€

“Okay.†Marluxia said. He opened up his hand as instructed and waited. He tried a second time still with no luck. On the eleventh time he finally got it.

“Very good, moving on the weapon control. Now don’t go poking with your weapon. Also, don’t take it out when not necessary. Understood?†Marluxia nodded. “Now for an element, what do you like?â€

“I like flowers.â€

“Then that’s your element.â€

“How is flower an element?†Marluxia asked questioningly.

Demyx laughed. “You’ll see. Now just we are going to practice fighting. You will practice fighting with Axel, I will be coaching you.†Demyx went into a corridor to darkness and pulled Axel out through it.

Axel grinned and pulled out his chakram. He threw one at Marluxia. “Block it with the scythe.†Demyx instructed him. Marluxia blocked it and sent it back at Axel. Axel caught it and threw fire at Marluxia. Not knowing how to block it, Marluxia ducked. “Use your element.†Demyx shouted.

“How do I do that?†He seriously wondered. How was he supposed to hurt someone with a flower?

“It’s different for every one.â€

Marluxia looked at him, confused and randomly swung his scythe. After a couple of tries, he sent a lot of flower pedals towards Axel. They cut up Axel badly.

“Okay you two can stop now. Good job Marly.â€

Marluxia watched as Axel and Demyx left through a corridor to darkness. Marly, he liked the name. Marluxia felt strange. It was a good strange though. He liked the feeling that he had felt when he had hurt Axel. He thought it was cool that he was fighting. He normally would have been terrified but for some reason, it felt, well, great.

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He went down for lunch. It was Zexion’s turn to cook. He had made every one hot dogs. Marluxia watched as each member put different things on the hot dogs. Marluxia sat next to Vexen who had put some unidentifiable substance on his. Marluxia stuck to relish. There wasn’t much clean up but Marluxia did what there was easily. In the afternoon, he played war with Axel for a while. It was fun and they played for a while. They actually got along very well. There was only on argument.

“My ace takes the king!†Marluxia shouted.

“No, aces are low.†Axel said.

After some back and fourth bickering, they decided that aces would be high. It really wasn’t a big deal at all.

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For the rest of the afternoon, Marluxia worked on the flowers. He believed that there weren’t nearly enough flowers at the castle that never was. He planted flowers out side, but some in each room, and cared for the ones in his room. Being surrounding by flowers always had made him feel better.

Surprisingly enough, none of other members made fun of him or anything, they actually were happy about the flowers being there. Sure he liked planting flowers and all, but when others enjoy it too, the feeling is better then it had been.

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At dinner, Marluxia sat with Zexion. Zexion made some sort of fish with potatoes for dinner. Every one looked down at the fish because no one knew what it was. The sauce was good, he didn’t know what it was, but it tasted good. Marluxia was hungry so he ate the weird fish any way. After Marluxia said it was good, every one picked it up and ate it as well.

Demyx was on the other side of Zexion. “What kind of fish is this any way?†Demyx asked.

“It’s squid.†Zexion said as if it was no big deal.

One by one each member looked up and stared at Zexion. A few members spit out the food. Most looked down at their half empty plates and just put them in the sink, no one wanted to eat any more.

There were a lot of dishes. Marluxia sighed and did them. It took a long time but after a lot of dumping, scrubbing, and drying, he was finally done. By the time he was done, it was very late. Marluxia made a corridor to darkness to his room. He was tired and climbed into bed after changing into his pajamas and brushing his teeth. He quickly feel asleep. After some point hours later in the night, he heard some one out side his door. Marluxia ignored it and went back to sleep.

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End of chapter!

Hope you liked it. Don't kill me, I'm not good at fighting scenes. Also, don't forget that he heard some one out side his door.

Next Chapter in 24 hours (give or take)

 

lol SQUID!!!

That was a good chapter :)

And you just HAD to add the whole 'Ace and King' thing, didn't cha? lol :)

Aces pwn us all :D

 

You know I did, I like to add jokes that only you understand and no one else would even gets as a joke

XED OWNS ME? *hugs xed* YAY

thanks

 

LOOOOL xD Marluxia is swinging is scythe randomly at Axel!! xD That's what I would do If Axel throwed fire at me! xDD
SQUID!! Ewwww xDD

I Loved it!!! Please PM me again when chapter 4 is up ok? :)
I can't wait to read the next part!!

 

okay. *adds nexit@h XIV to the pm with new chapter list*

thanks!

in about 22.5 hours

 

You're welcome!!
Woot!!!:D *waits*:) .......................................<.<...............>.>...........Time passes reaaaaaaaally slow.....xDDD

 

ehh not so slow when your typing a story.

they will come out quicker in a few days. I only have two more days of school and then I'll have much more typing time, aka quicker and longer chapters

 

One more time...SCHOOL IS BORING!!!! xDDD I am already on my summer vacations...but...there are the exams...seeing the things like this...I'm not really on my summer vacations...xDD

TWO MORE DAYS AND YOU'RE FREE!!! xD

 

YAY!

22 hours until chapter 4

*starts brainstorming*

 

It's weird that they're all so young. If Marly was 15, that would make Zexion REALLY young, wouldn't it? Zexion seems to be the 2nd youngest in the Organization, beside Roxas. But, no worries. Ages don't really matter. Except the whole maturity issue.

I personally think that Nobodies can still develop character as Nobodies. If not, Axel wouldn't have been sad in KH2 when he didn't get to see Roxas. I think you're right on. Maybe Marly didn't become a homocidal guy until he got the power rush from being in charge of Castle Oblivion. Who knows? I personally always saw Marluxia as a nice person. But, that's just my weird mind.

 

I thought that like it was Roxas, Demyx, Zexion for like age order. They are all younger, except vexen, xigbar, and xemnas, they are younger but still old. And then baby namine- *puts tape over mouth* I've said too much.

Marly got his first evilness in this chapter right after he hurt Axel, the evil will get bigger as the story progesses. I always think Marluxia is nice but then I remember what he did.

The story doesn't take you all the way up to chain of memories. It's only 11 chapters long because Marluxia is number 11. It's only like the first few days that Marluxia had in the organization.

But thanks!

 

Specter is (supposively) the name of the gigantic Nobody that fights alongside him in KH:CoM/Re:CoM. In Re:CoM it's the somewhat angelic looking Nobody that wields his scythe.....you know, that thing?

I heard it was called Specter...so meh.

As for the latest chapter, for some reason the feeling didn't seem very well-described. Maybe you should add in more? It seemed kind of sudden...

 

Right, I know what that is, I just didn't know that's what it's called.

Next chapter there should be more detail hopefully

Okay it's short but too bad. I put in description but not much really happens in this chapter.

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Chapter Four


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Marluxia slowly opened his eyes and looked over to his clock. It was already nine-thirty! Marluxia pulled on a clean robe and opened up a corridor to darkness. He didn't even bother to look in the mirror. He entered the kitchen and grabbed some toast. After that, he sat down next to Demyx for break fast.He started to spread butter onto the toast. Out of nowhere, he heard laughing. He ignored it for a while as he started to eat his toast.

The laughing continued all throughout break fast. Marluxia was pretty sure that the laughing was in his direction. He wiped his face with a napkin to see if that was the problem, it wasn’t. After Marluxia was finished with his breakfast, Xemnas came in. Xemnas looked around the room. When he was looking at Marluxia, he paused, made an odd face, and continued looking around. It was a Saturday so there were no chores.

Demyx and Axel scurried out of the room as soon as they were done eating. Xemnas stopped over to talk to Marluxia. “Marluxia, did you look in the mirror this morning?” Xemnas asked with a concerned look on his face. Marluxia just shook his head with a confused look on his face. “I suggest you do so.”

Marluxia walked out of the kitchen and into one of the bathrooms. He didn’t have any food in his teeth or on his face, he didn’t need to shave (he never had), and there wasn’t anything on his coat. He looked up to see if his hair was messy. It wasn’t. Then he stopped. His hair was pink. It was no longer the pretty brown shade that it had been, but a very light pink.

He screamed. Then he ran out of the room and back into the kitchen. “Who did this?” He said. No one in the room made the slightest noise but Marluxia could tell that many were trying to hold in their laughter. He heard snickering outside the room. “Demyx! Axel!” He turned around to see the young blonde and red head running away.

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He made a corridor to darkness to his room. When he got there, he went straight to the bath room. The first thing he did was take a shower in attempt to get out the color. He washed his hair three times and scrubbed it extra hard. After he was done, he got out, dried off, and got dressed. He looked back into the mirror, his hair was still that pink. He stared at it for a few minutes. It really wasn’t all that bad. He actually liked pink and this wasn’t a bad shade. It actually looked pretty good on him. He went to go find the two so he could know what color they used to dye his hair.

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He created a corridor to darkness to Demyx’s room. He knocked on the door. Hesitantly, Demyx opened it. Demyx’s room was the same white as all of the others. He had put music posters on his walls. His sheets had musical notes all over them. On his book shelf were mostly music books, sheet music, and some short stories. Demyx was really young, probably about the same age if not younger then Zexion. Zexion was eleven years old. Axel was sitting in there too. He was probably about the same age as Marluxia.

“Demyx, two questions: One, how old are you? Two, what color did you use for my hair.”

“I’m about ten. I don’t remember what we used.” Marluxia watched as he ran into the bathroom. After a few minutes, Demyx came out with a box and handed it to Marluxia. “Why, do you actually like it?”

“Yeah I do thanks!” Marluxia said before he ran back into his room.

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He sat in his room looking into the mirror, the pink really did look good but it was just missing something. His hair had grown since the beginning of all of this. His hair always had grown very quickly. His hair was really long, it reached half way down his back. Maybe I should give myself a hair cut, he thought. He grabbed a pair of scissors and held it up to his hair. Was he really going to do this? He slowly made a snip and watched as a lot of pink hair fell to the floor. He evened it out so that it was about two inches below his shoulders all the way around. Next he cut in bangs. He stopped them at about his eye lids and randomly cut more of it out. He then randomly shortened his at places around his head so that pieces stuck out.

He looked in the mirror wondering what he had just done. He must admit that he looked different, he wasn’t sure if it was a good or bad different though. He shrugged and went down to see what every one thought of it.

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He wanted to watch television with most of the other members. He sat down on one of the chairs. Marluxia hardly cared what they were watching. He just wanted to be where most of them were to see if anyone noticed. Apparently, no one did. After a while of waiting and such, Marluxia went back up stairs to his room. As he closed the door, he wasn’t sure if it was just his imagination, but he thought he heard a baby crying.

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End of chapter. Now we know about how his hair came to be. Who is that baby?

Next chapter won't be tomorrow, I don't know when it will be on the next day though.

 

YAY
i was hoping to find out how his hair turned pink
i luffels his hair *pokes marly's hair*:D
cant wait for the next ch!:p

 

yeah, that's the best thing I could think of besides him being born with it and that would have been no fun.

thanks!

next chapter not tomorrow but some random time the next day