Marluxia's New Member Chaos

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Thank you!

Marluxia: I have fans?
Me: No but your life does.

 

ooo love it love it, great story, i hope theres going to be other stories like this hehe *waits for next chapter*

 

I don't know yet.

There might be but not for a long time

 

ahhhhh
poor marly *hugs marly*
ha ha he poked out xiggy's eye. poor xiggy
poke. poke.pokepokepoke *coughsorryabouthtatcough*
anyway, great job, cant wait for the next ch!:D

 

in about 23 hours!

Thanks!

*joins in poking*

 

YAY POKING
*poke* *poke* *poke* *poke*:D

 

I think this has been enough poking.... for now

*starts to type chapter*

YAY! three words, only about 997 more to go!

This chapter was long, it was 1059 words!

 

wow, thats a lot of words! but i like long stories/chapters:D
*wiats excitedly for next chapter*

 

Squeee! I like this story! Aww, poor Marly, lol :)

 

It's really not a lot at all.

Lol, thanks

21 hours

 

Not many people really write about the OrgXIII pasts, so that in on itself I'll give you props..... However this doesn't seem very Marluxia-y...but that is just opinion; I'm interested in seeing how he'll become a villainous character by the end of this.

Aside from this, just fix those little silly errors and you're fine, bring on more update when you can. :]

 

Don't worry. He gets evil. Remember, this is the little 15 year old Marluxia.

 

I remember that all right, but realistically, personalities take time to change and without much motivation from emotions (and the lack thereof at an age defined by radical/emerging emotions).....yeah.....I'm probably being too nit-picky. :\

 

I don't mind. Critism (sp) is important.

I just realized why he was so sad this morning when I was writing, all of the songs that I was listening to were sad. While I type now I'm using more angry songs so hopefully it will make it better.

But I have it all planned already

 

Hahaha, sorry, just a bad habit of mine. I keep on comparing certain writers' Marluxias to other Marluxias..... That probably comes off as a bad judgement from me, but its lamely true. >_<

 

It doesn't bother me. The Marluxia I'm using is NOTHING like fg's evil Namine killing Marluxia though.

Woot 229 words, only 671 to go!

By the way: How old do you think Marluxia is in the game?

 

Hahaha true true, I have a weird semi-sociopathic, multi-frustrated and (royally) morally screwed up Marluxia so there's uh, uhm..... a descrepency! Yes let's go with that......

In my opinion, Marluxia would probably be in his mid to late twenties....probably 28 though (imo though! c_c).

Side-Note: Write with license not with limits or quotas. XD

 

I don't get it... When did he get turned into a Heartless?! >.<;

 

I know

That's about what I would think.

I didn't describe it much. No you don't find out who they are, it is of no importance

 

What?! O.o;

Those two guys were Heartless? Or... Do you not to be Heartless to make people loose their hearts...?

*brain goes essplody* X.x;

Somebody explaaaaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiin....! DX