hm. honestly, its alright. the blurrings good. little too sharp though on some areas (arms, little extension thing the text lays on). Change the hue of the bg, just a tiny bit, so the blue thing from her eye seems a bit more..like. unique. iunno. something like that. Work on the text too, please. (: that's it bro. goodjob.
Hm... I'm not feelin' the text on this one. I think it's because it's just too far away from your focal's face, that in the end it just becomes distracting. So as far as text goes, I say just work on placement. Black and White for me. It could use some burning and dodging, to maybe give it some extra contrast. Otherwise, it has good depth, and the effects are pretty cool. =)
