" Alina!" "What?" "We need to get out of here, for real." " Anna, we cant were stuck!" Lauryn said grabbing Anna's shoulders. We heard someone knocking on the door, but didn't say anything until they said, " Alina, Anna, Lauryn! Its Jacob and Keith" " Keith???" I said loloking at Anna, Knowing I had to talk to him about last year. Most know I haven't talked to Keith in a long time, but for you guys that don't know the story here. A year ago I found out that me and my best friends Anna, Lauryn, and Yuki all had super powers like, Earth, Fire, Wind, and Water. Well about seven weeks later a girl named Victoria, asked Keith if he still loved her and guess what he said," YES!!!" and thats that. As the door unlocked I saw VICTORIA!!! " What the hell is she doing here!" Anna started to yell at Fang, Keith, Craig, and Jacob. " She doesn't want to be the princess of darkness anymore." Craig said " ANYMORE!!! she still will be FOREVER!!!!" all us girls yelled. Anna smacked all the boys across their faces. As Lauryn and I begun laughing, we all and I mean all fell down a TRAP DOOR!!!" " THIS WILL BE COUNTIUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!" AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! Lol this is sooo funny
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ok and i know " Alina, Wake up!!!" " ALINA!!!" As I opened my eyes, I noticed Keith and Anna were leaning over me. " What just happened?" I asked, trying to sit up. " We fell down some trap door." Thats right, and Victoria and Fang where here to. Knowing I had no choice, and I had to work with Keith and, Victoria. " Oh, I remember everything now!" I yelled jumping on my feet. " It's about time! I thought we would have to cut your head off." Anna started to laugh. " Thats not even funny! ANNA!!!" I yelled " Well it is to me. HAHAHA!" Anna kept laughing. She laught so hard she almost wet herself. " So what are we suppose to do!" Lauryn started going crazy. Anna slapped Lauryn across her face. Also saying," Get ahold of yourself!!!!" We heard the door open seeing Yuki! "YUKI!!!!!!!!!" All us girls yelled at the same time. I jumped first running torwards Yuki. I hugged her so tight she turned purple. "ok Let go please!!!!" Yuki said trying to get air. " SORRY" I laughed " You guys look different." Yuki smiled " Well....... Its been a year." Fang said giving Yuki a big hug.
