Kingdom Hearts: Apocalypse ~ Volume 1 - Space (Chapter 13)

I'm in stupid mode right now...therefore I don't get it....*Get's smacked by Misa*

 

Using the same logic...

the names of the other homunculus would be:

Edwin Nvy

Lana Ust

George Luttony

Phillip Ride

Whitney Rath

Gregory Reed

Samantha Loth

:p

 

Meh, sweet!! Anyways, I can't wait to read your next chapter!!

 

Well, hopefully, that'll be soon.

 

Kingdom Hearts: Apocalypse ~ Volume 1 - Space (Chapter 19)

Chapter 19 - The Last Homunculus - Contact from Within

Regret found himself in an abyss, the vacuum which was created when he was born. This space was where a soul was to be placed. "Heh, one day, maybe I'll get a soul..."

"You little punk!" cried one of the souls trapped in a red-crystal prison. "Drawing energy from us, eh? You're nothing without us!"

"And I just lost the intention of ever freeing you of my body." Regret threatened.

That soul shut up, then the rest did the same. "Sorry, sir, you're in charge." apologized the soul.

"Thought so, now, why might I be here?" Regret asked.

"You're asleep, my creation, you've been shot by tranquilizer darts." Tucker responded.

"Creation? I was born! You dare destroy my life by taking a human child, killing it, turning it into homunculus, then deaging your own body and aging mine?!" Regret shouted in defense. "I never had a name because I never lived!"

"Haha, it was all for little Nina..." Tucker answered.

"You're despicable, Shou Tucker." Regret cemented that into him mind. "You will never know how we feel, alchemist, you're just as bad as homunculi!"

Regret suddenly opens his eyes in the real world, in the military's hospital wearing patient clothing. "Wha, where am I?"

Chapter 19 - Kira Investigation Alchemists & Nobodies - Xell and L

The Traverse Town main entrance swings open for Xell, Kixur, Roxas, and Namine to walk in. They all came with a cart full of sea-salt ice cream. "Mmmmmm, this is tasty." Xell commented. "I can't wait for the next bite."

"Yeah, but don't eat too much." Roxas warned. "You’ll get fat."

"If you use your head, you won't get fat." Xell responded.

"Are you calling me stupid?!" Roxas asked angrily.

"No, but I remember me saying that to....." Xell spots the people sleeping in the alleyway. "Ms. Misa Amane."

"You know them?" Kixur asked. "Wait, that one over there looks exactly like you!"

"Hey, you're right! Even the sugar addiction matches!" Namine points out, looking at the big sugar cookie the sleeping L was eating.

Ryuk and Rem slaps everyone with their Death Notes, but Xell manages to block Rem's notebook slap with his weapon, a pen. "Nice to see you again, Rem."

Mustang wakes up to see the shinigami and two Ls. "Ahh! Demons!" He looked closer to Xell. "Hey, you look like that guy."

Hawkeye tried shooting Ryuk, but the bullets go through him. "Uhh, who is this?" she asked nervously.

Armstrong wasn't even phased by this. "Hm, were those other children talking to you two earlier?"

Ryuk nodded. "Yeah, you have to have touched the Death Note to see us."

Rem stared at Xell. "How did you block my slap?"

"I've seen you around, Rem." Xell answered.

"Hey, what are you guys doing here?!" Light asked Xell, Roxas, Kixur, and Namine with scythe in hand.

"Light, relax! They just found us!" Misa replied to Light.

"Hm, hello, might you four be able to help us?" L asked with a puppy-eyed face.

"How can we refuse?" answered Namine.

"Hey, Namine, you don't even know these people!" Roxas warned carefully.

"Wait, why should we trust you? We were attacked by black creatures..." Mello asked.

"Oh, you mean heartless. They appear all around." Kixur answered.

"Have you all forgotten about us?" Ed asked with annoyance.

"Oh, sorry, shortie." Kixur responded.

Ed punched Kixur with his automail arm. "Who are you calling shortie, you disrespectful youth?!"

Al held Ed down before he could get another punch in. "Stop, brother, they're trying to help!"

Kixur gets up. "Heh, sorry, old man."

Ed struggles to punch Kixur even more. "Old man, eh, little brat!"

"Anyway, we can handle introductions later, let's just get out of here!" Namine suggested.

"I agree with her," Near suggested. "Maybe we should just trust them for now."

Chapter 19 - The Heroes of Space - The Welcoming Party

When the group of fourteen arrived at The World That Never Was, it was like a ghost town. "This isn't how I let this place." Roxas commented on the (more so) emptiness of the city.

"Hm, feels as though someone was anticipating this." Ed commented.

"There goes brother again, minor technobabble." Al commented as well.

"This is an exiting place, isn't it?" Mello said sarcastically.

"Mello, don't insult other people's homes." Near advised Mello.

"Hm, look at that moon." L pointed up into the sky at the heart moon, almost complete again.

"Yeah, it's beautiful, kinda like Misa." Light purposely thought out loud.

"Aww, Light!" Misa responded to the tease.

"Heh, I wish that the Light and Misa I knew were like that." Xell whispered to himself, unable to keep it in his mind.

Rem explored the area, but kept bumping into barriers. "There are force fields keeping us out of some places."

Ryuk double-checked for Rem. "Yeah, Rem is right, there are barriers keeping even shinigami out."

"Say, Hawkeye, there's no one to disapprove of a military-within-military relationship." Mustang implied.

"Don't count on it, sir." Hawkeye ruthlessly declined.

"Haha, young love." Armstrong commented.

They are led to a vast, dark room. "Hello, anyone here?" asked Kixur, hearing the echo of his voice.

"SUPRISE!" the entire room shouted, the lights turning on to see tons of people dressed in fine clothing welcoming all fourteen people.

"Kixur, Xell, and guests, welcome to The Kixur and Xell welcoming party!" Sora announced with a megaphone.

The entire room cheered, everyone was there. The Olympian gods, some missing people (Ed and Al reunited with Winry there), even the people who had reason to hate Organization XIII were all there.

Xemnas walked up to Vexen. "Do you have any idea of what caused those creatures earlier to appear?"

Vexen covered his mouth so no one could read his lips. "I have one idea... it has to do with the Dimension Shifter and Maleficent."

 

Yet another awesome chapter!! Damn...that room must have been crowded. lol.

 

Kingdom Hearts: Apocalypse ~ Volume 1 - Space (Chapter 20)

Chapter 20 - The Last Homunculus - Hospitals

A nurse came in here. "Oh, you're awake, Mr. Egret." she welcomed politely. "This is the hospital, some bandits tried to raid Central's Artillery Arsenal. Thankfully, they were apprehended by the authorities and found you alive."

"Oh, I see, just call me Ron." Regret digested the idea of being almost discovered. "Did anyone ever come into this room alone?"

"No, not to my knowledge, Ron." the nurse answered.

"Alright, thank you Miss...... Jones." Regret looked at her nametag. "Say, are you busy tomorrow night?"

The nurse blushed a little. "Uhh, no, no thank you." she declined.

"Alright, I understand." Regret replied, grinning. Anyone listening will be completely thrown off by this.

The Tringham Brothers rushed in the room just as the nurse left. "Oh, I'm so glad to see you alive, Ron!" yelled Russell.

"Those bandits were persistent, we beat them good before the police showed." Fletcher bragged.

"Alright, settle down, I'm ok now." Regret calmed down. It doesn't seem anyone but the one who changed me into these clothes saw my tattoo.

Chapter 20 - The Heroes of Space - The Meeting Between Heroes

After the party, Xemnas assembled the guests from other dimensions, the ones who saved the universe last time, and the rest of the Organization XV. "Everyone here? Alright, let us discuss the situation, Vexen?" Xemnas asked.

Vexen pulled out his report. "So, my theory is that it's Maleficent's fault that all this is happening. A while ago, when Roxas was still with us, I invented a machine called the Dimension Shifter. It could directly transport objects from other dimensions to ours." Vexen pointed at the orb in Maleficent's staff. "I think she hid some of her memories in there."

On that note, Zexion grabbed the staff and smashed the green orb, releasing the hidden memories. "Fool of a witch, she cast the Dimension Shifter into the darkness itself!"

"Ah, yes, that makes sense." Vexen concluded. "The darkness in our universe is spreading to other dimensions via the machine, the darkness also sucks up enough energy to power it up!"

"So, what you're saying is that the darkness is causing all of this using a little machine?" Ed asked.

"Who knew that a little toy would cause so much damage, eh, brother?" Al asked.

"It's not just a box, Fullmetal." Mustang replied. "That'd be obvious if you really looked."

"So, what's with those heartless things appearing in my dimension?" Light asked Vexen.

"Well, heartless pop up anywhere darkness is." Vexen simply replied.

"So that's another version of me?" L asked, pointing at Xell.

"Half correct, that is a nobody of a version of you." Vexen answers.

"What's a nobody?" Misa asked.

"A nobody is the body and soul left behind when a person becomes a heartless." Luxord answered.

"What's a heartless, really?" Mello asked while munching on chocolate.

"A heartless is the manifestation of darkness within a heart." Sora answered.

"Wow, Sora, that's the smartest thing you said all week!" teased Kairi.

Riku joined in with teasing. "I think the last one was 'supercalifragilisticexpialidocious' or something." Riku and Kairi laughed, Sora was pouting.

"Why does Vexen, Marluxia, and Mello look so alike?" Near asked, snickering.

"Because they're all butt ugly...." screamed Axel.

"Not to mention having girly hair!" added Demyx.

"Hey!" the three yelled simultaneously, which only added to the hilarity.

Kixur was sitting on his new throne, swinging his legs. "Anyhow, the darkness has to get the energy from somewhere in the our realm, right? We just need to find where it's drawing in the power, then we can locate the device." Kixur suggested.

"Hey, that's a good idea!" Xigbar got off his chair. "Well, call me when you've got a plan."

"Stop, Freeshoter, get back to your seat." ordered Xemnas.

"Aww, I hate ramblin'!" Xigbar whined before he got back in his throne.

Xell, by nature, examined everyone from his throne very closely. "I think that Namine has an idea." the nobody pointed out.

"Uh, well, we should split up in teams of three to track the source down!" Namine suggested.

"Great idea, but one problem. There's a vast area covered by such a small number of teams. It'd take quite a while to track down." Mickey pointed out.

"Well, ask everyone we know to report any strange activity and search other worlds that we don't know of for the source." Xemnas responded to the difficult question.

"Alright, let's get quakkin'!" Donald shouted out.

"Yup, teams of three! Gawrsh, you'd think a machine wouldn't be this dangerous." Goofy wondered.

"Ok, let's start picking teams now. Time is of the essence." Xaldin confirmed.

"Affirmative, we'll pick starting with the most compatible." Lexeaus added.

"Don't stick me with any of the girly men!" Larxene cried out.

"Hmph, remind me to reload my gun once in a while. I'd probably be too busy shooting to remember." Hawkeye whispered to Mustang.

"So, shall we save the universe?" Armstrong asked, everyone nodded yes to that. "Very well, may we meet again after this!"

Xemnas typed out this list:

The Keybladers of Destiny
Sora, Riku, Kairi

The Mickey Mouse Club
Mickey, Donald, Goofy (Pluto)

The Kira Investigation Team
Light Yagami, L Lawliet, Misa Amane, (Ryuk & Rem)

The Wammy's House Team
Xell, Mello, Near

The Organization Misfits
Zexion, Axel, Demyx

The Nobody Party
Roxas, Kixur, Namine

The Ed, Al, and Winry Adventurers
Edward Elric, Alphonse Elric, Winry Rockbell (Schrödinger)

The Dogs of the Military
Roy Mustang, Riza Hawkeye, Alex Louis Armstrong (Black Hayate)

The Master, Commander, and Soldier
Xemnas, Saix, Xaldin

Oblivion Conspiracy
Marluxia, Vexen, Larxene

Dudes' Night Out
Lexeaus, Xigbar, Luxord​

"The one whose name comes first after the group name is leader of the three. No complaining," Xemnas specifically addressed Marluxia and Larxene. "Get going, we have gummi ships for you waiting in the docking bay."

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Please notify me of any characters left out, my mind's scrambled and quite possibly overloading. This is the longest chapter I've typed up so far......

 

Sweet!! So...this is going to be longer now, considering you have a lot of teams, eh? And I noticed you took my family forum name..cool. Anyways, nice!! Now I really want to read the next one!

 

My god, *groan* did I miss anyone?

 

I don't think you missed anyone. I have this really annoying feeling like you did though....*shruggs*

 

I'm gonna go check......... read all twenty chapters, again. *groan* the worst nightmare for a writer.

 

*Pats shoulder* Dude, I feel your pain. I have to check back ALL THE TIME, trying to make sure I didn't skip anything, see where someone is, yada yada, all that stuff. It is hell....

 

Anyway, I'll check back after I'm done..... T_T

 

Alright. See ya later Zexy. *Runs off to put up new story*

 

Gah! What happened to the rest of the story?! NOOOOOOO!!!!!! I'll retype it. T_T

 

Why?!! What happened??!!!

 

A huge chunk of the text was gone, luckily, I typed this out last night and saved a copy on my computer. I'll remember to save backups from now on. :)

 

Good, I'm glad you saved it. That would suck to loose it, so I'm glad you didn't!

 

The only thing I added was the cat Ed gave Al, and I typed Armstrong's name wrong. I put Axel instead of Alex.

 

Well, there's another good point about it. At least you didn't have to type out 5 paragraphs or anything. That's what I thought you ment at first..*bricked for stupidity*