Kingdom Hearts' All-girls School...or not

"He was saying something," Chi said. "And then you said 'Don't you even think about it.' Why did you say that?"

Yumiko looked at the scene in amazement. A smile crept onto her lips. She was amazed and surprised. "Kite..." She mumbled. "This place is beautiful."

 

"its nuthin just forget about it" Yelnxats said then says " where's everyone else?" trying to change the subject

 

Kite nodded''but it doesnt compare to you..'''he said,then walked through the now seperated bushes,he walked up to the edge of this river and jumped across a few stones,avoiding falling in,he made it to the other side''your turn!''he said happily

 

Chi shrugged. "I've been focused on you. I'm not sure where everybody is."

Yumiko smiled. She held out her arms to her sides. And walked jumped across the stones. When she made it to the other side she put her arns down and tried to stand straight. "This place," She said smiling at Kite. "It makes me feel so peaceful."

 

"heh " Yelnxats said then looked at the sky

Senix walks around looking for yelnxats

 

''Good,you can come here after a hard day''Kite said smiling,then started walking around the Sakura Tree's,Admiring them

 

aly looked around for someone

 

Yumiko smiled. "Thank you, Kite," she said. "For taking me her. I can only think of one thing to make this more perfect."

Chi smiled. "I never got to meet my parents," she said looking at the sky. "I'm sure if I even have any."

 

Yelnxats looks at chi and says " im sure their out there sumwhere"

Senix finds yelnxats with chi and says " hey yelnxats"

Yelnxats turns around to his father and thinks ahhhh great

 

Dark Samus and the Emperor were in the dark world "Muahahahaha, you are such a genius, using that boy to hatch a Metroid Prime, the most powerful life form" The Emperor said, they looked at a cocoon "Very soon he will be out of the crysalis (SP?)" Dark Samus said.

 

Kite looked back at Yumiko''what's that?''he asked

 

Chi smiled at Senix. "Hello, sir."

"If you kissed me," Yumiko smiled.

 

The cocoon breaked.

"Is coming" The Emperor said.

Four giant black crab-like legs comed out of the cocoon.

 

Yelnxats said " hey dad" under his breath but loud enough so he can hear

Senix looks at chi and says " hello" then looks at yelnxats walks over and says in his ear " quit a catch"

Yelnxats looks at his and and says "WAT?!?!" his face turned warm and says " dad just leave"

OOC: im bored rite now so lol

 

aly sighed and walked up to the roof

 

Kite smiled and pulled her gently to him,wrapping his arms around her waist and leaned closer to her face''Now it's perfect..''he mumbled,then kissed Yumiko sweetly

OOC:I love my new sig,simple but who cares I love it,yippee! lol

 

Chi looked at Senix and then Yelxnats in confusion. "Am I missing something?"

Yumiko kissed Kite back. "Yeah..Perfect."

 

OOC: I would say is a 5/10, Gatekeeper, the pictures are bad rendered and the background is plain and simple, I think it would look better if you cut better the renders and add a light spot, plus make smaller the text and maybe add a border.

BIC: A giant shell-like monster pooped up from the cocoon.

"The Metroid Prime!" The Emperor and Dark Samus said at the same time.

 

OOC: It's still good though...Just have to work harder I guess. All that matters is that I like it :D

 

Senix says "ahahahaha" in yelnxats' ear and

Yelnxats says " stop it!"

Senix says " i think u like her"

Yelnxats snapped" DAD STOP!!!!" his face getting warmer

OOC: i like it gate and chaser stop critizising ppl -.- u critized mine too -.-