KH-Vids Royale

Alright, I'm a huge Battle Royale fan and I have a few icks and bumps with this story;

1. You completely ripped off BR2, which was awful, although, I have to admit, this is better XD.

2. What is up with this Rem girl? Seems like a bad cliche plot line.

3. The name "crum" for a small boy makes me a bit scared. But, y'know, I guess it works well.

Things I liked:

1. Despite Wild Seven being a highly-trained super violent terrorist group, at heart they are still just kids. I really felt that when they were laughing at Monkey in the room.

2. When Rem turned on Darkandroid, I seriously felt pain. It hurt to see such a betrayal.

3. "Flower of flesh and blood" was used to describe Zel's death. Isn't that from the cult Guinea Pig series? If that's the reference you're making, I love it. Such intense movies, you're probably the only one here who can stomach them (judging by this story).

Anyway, great job, and I am awaiting chapter 10.

 

Kay guys, chapter 3 is up for your enjoyment.

 

Wow, wonderful chapters Cinny.
You write so very detailed.
Great job =D

 

The entire series KHVR series is based off of BR obviously. I like this version better though...

Rem is cool! XD

Crum...

Yes. The Wild Seven are really just a bunch of kids that beat "The Game"... I feel sorry for THEM. Not the government... The government in this story can burn for all I care. They killed me!

Lol. I laughed at the whole Double Agent thing.

Really!? o.o

CHAPTER 10 PLEASE! AND STICKY!

 

Good chapter, keep up the good work.

 

I think Roxas got banned.. no more khvr2.... :(:(:(:(:(:(:(

People say YOU are Roxas, which would seem kinda weird cuz ur judging ur own story..... ........... ......

 

That's kind of the point. XD

 

Oh I get it, even while having the 6 word post rule floating in my head.

 

lol Roxas, way to judge your own story.

 

Since hes back, I think we'll get the new chaps (hoping he did more than pendragon in his absence)

 

This extremely awesome story belongs on the first page.
~~~
Will the next chapter be coming out soon?

 

Yeah, sorry, I've been lazy. It'll be up by tomorrow.

 

Lawl...
Anywas thanks for telling me. I'm looking foward to reading it.
=D

 

Yes, this one will focus on Xaldin, and maybe a bit of Alice.

 

Sound's like it will one interesting chapter! Yet again... can't wait!

 

Wow. I'm going (even though I already said this >.>) try to read it this summer. It seems good. Great Job Roxas! =D

 

My thoughts exactly!
(no Axel quote really intended)

The new chapter's still not up. D=

 

This story roocks.
Can't wait for more.

 

Errr...Roxas is banned again... -_- So we won't see the rest of the story...
There wasn't a real reason to bump this thread ya know.
*sigh* oh well

Edit:
Hold on, forget about what I said >.>

 

Its been a LOT longer than tomorrow.......