KH 2-3: Shards of Broken Destiny (Story Chapters)

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  1. RikuisthehottestdudeinKH2 Destiny Islands Resident

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    Wow! such drama...... very good, good job......... good job...........................................
     
  2. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Hehe...the next chapter is soon :)

    And his name is Xoras. XD

    Hmm...I already started it, but ima have to go somewhere soon...

    maybe tonight, or tomorrow morning :)

    :D thanks!
     
  3. JapAnimeFanatic Twilight Town Denizen

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    this is really good! i just finished reading all of the chapters and i have to say its AWSOME!!!! i would like if you continue!
     
  4. Viroxor Traverse Town Homebody

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    At first I was afraid it was gonna be a Xemnas/Xedramon double battle, which would be insane. And dang it, you got me excited about XH Ansem being back again!

    Oh well, sounds like Xed is finally going down. Hehe, as if.

    Xaldin: Wait, who's gonna kill me? Where are they? Why don't I know about this? Somebody tell me some thing, please!
     
  5. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    *Gags and shoots Xaldin*

    LOL


    COME OUT NEW CHAPTER!!!


    PLEASE!!

    I really hope that this is in the past, before TFK and BMA. If it isn't, I REALLYY hope nothing happens to Roxed. They're sooo cute together...XD
     
  6. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    :D Thank you! I hope to continue, and I will continue, unless like, a big meteor crashes into the earth or something :) hehe, like that would happen...

    *somewhere in space*

    Big meteor: Muahaha...*evil smile*

    Oh trust me, as a bit of a spoiler, there IS NOT going to be a Xed/Xemnas battle. Now THAT would be insane! But there will be enough fights though, so don't worry about it.

    As for Xaldin, XIII kills you.

    BUT THINGS AREN'T WHAT THEY SEEM!!!!

    Remember that :)

    lol!

    I'm not saying anything

    *keeps typing chapter 10*
     
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    You better not forget about this story A's#1FG....
     
  8. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    I think it is before.

    Becuase that would make sense about my prediction that it is Kuxir at the end of BMA, becuase he controls dreams.

    How did I predict him before this story even started?

    XD

    I'm just that cool.


    -JKJK-

     
  9. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Sorry for not reading in so long!

    Is the Xed in bmtl the same xed as the xed in the fourteenth key?

    Do you enjoy confusing us?

    Awesome story! great job!

    When do you expect the next chapter?
     
  10. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Heya! *waves* Hope you had fun at camp! :D

    Yes, she is the same Xed in The 14th Key, and in Bad Moon Arising.

    And yes, I do enjoy confusing all my readers :P XD

    Thank ya!
     
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    Great, awsome fantastic and out of this world!!! Mind you, it's very hard to say that after reading the final Harry Potter book.(YAY!!! It was sooo good!)
     
  12. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    lol, thanks! :D

    Chapter 10 at last!

    Me: Sry people, I've been busy.
    Axel: Doing what?
    Me: None of your beeze-wax.
    Axel: o_0?
    Me: Okay! As promised, the surprise is coming out with this chapter!
    Everyone: YAY!!!
    Demyx: What is it?
    Me: It's announced at the end of the chapter.
    Hexon: Then let's start the movie already!
    Everyone: YEAH!

    (Everyone shuts up and movie starts)

    ~Chapter 10~

    "Huh?" Sora asked. Xed smirked.
    "You heard me!" she said, "If you want them dead, you're gonna have to kill me first!" She crossed her arms. Sora then narrowed his eyes, and gripped his Keyblade tighter.
    "Alright, fine!" he shouted, charging at her. With one mighty swing, he slashed through the torso of the still-shocked Nobody. Xed collasped to to her knees, clutching her stomach, which was on fire with pain.
    "S-S-Sora..." she stuttered weakly, not believing he had actually attacked her. With one last, shaking breath, she whispered the only thing that kept running in her mind:

    "Riku..."

    ~~~~~~

    Everyone: WHAT THE?!?!?!!?!?
    Larxene: SHE DIES!?!? This is awesome!!!
    Sora: I-I killed her?
    Xed: *face is white*
    Me: *laughs hysterically* GOTCHA!!!
    Xaldin: Huh?
    Nixon: What's going on?
    Me: That's not what really happens. I made up that to see if you'd all fall for it. And you all did!!!
    Marluxia: So she doesn't die! Aww man!!! *pouts*
    Xoras: Can you show the real Chapter 10, please?
    Me: Oh fine. *chuckles* Here it is:

    ~Chapter 10~ (The real one)

    “WHAT?!!?†The trio chorused simultaneously. Xed smiled slyly and crossed her arms.
    “Did I stutter?†She questioned snidely. “I said, if you are going to kill the Organization, I want to be first.â€

    The three were speechless.

    “But…but we can’t!†Sora said, letting his Keyblade rest at his side.
    “And why not?†She asked.
    “Because Riku would kill us!â€
    “But I’m a Nobody.†Xed said, putting on a fake expression of sympathy. “I thought us Nobodies weren’t worth protecting…at least…that’s what you said…†Sora frowned.
    “Well, yeah, but…†He was at a loss for words. He looked up at her, with a pleading look in his eyes. “They’re the Organization! They’re evil, terrible—“
    “And I am one of them.†Xed interrupted, her voice impassive, yet strong. An uncomfortable silence filled the air, before Xemnas smirked slightly, and cleared his throat.
    “Xedramon, I have some business to have taken care of, so I must be off.†Xed turned her head to look over at him. She nodded.
    “Okay.â€
    “I’ll have someone come pick you up later.†She nodded again, and Xemnas vanished through a dark portal. Goofy looked over at the female Keyblader.
    “Xed…but…but why? Why are you one of them?†He asked, almost pleading. Xed smiled softly, looking down at the ground.
    “Because…I wanted to be.†She said simply. “It wasn’t like I had the choice to join or not, but I liked the Organization once I became a part of it.†She turned her head towards the ground as she twirled a piece of her long hair in her fingers.

    “They’re family to me.â€

    Sora, Donald, and Goofy were surprised at this.

    “Family?†Donald quacked, his confusion apparent. Xed nodded, shyly looking up at the party.
    “Yea…†she added softly, smiling inwardly. She then turned her head up, and gave the three a hard look. “So I want you all to leave them alone, got it?†Goofy narrowed his eyes in thought.
    “We can’t do that, Xed.†He stated. “Master Yen Sid said that the Organization XIII is planning something big, something that will hurt all of the worlds!†Donald nodded.
    “So we have to destroy Organization XIII!!†he piped in. Xed shook her head, an amused smile on her face.
    “Don’t worry about it guys.†She assured them. “I’m in the Organization, and I haven’t heard about any big evil plan or whatnot. And if there’s something going on, I’ll get Xemnas to stop it. But you all have to leave the Organization alone. No hurting them, no killing them. Alright?†Sora raised an eyebrow and crossed his arms, leaning back slightly.
    “Are you sure that you can do that?†he asked.
    “Of course.†Xed said with a smile. She then placed a hand over where her heart would be. “You have my word.†Sora nodded, and placed a hand over his own heart.

    “And you have ours.â€

    000000

    Once arriving back in the Castle That Never Was, Xemnas arranged for an immediate meeting with all of the members, save for Xed.

    The woman with the blonde hair and sea-green eyes leaned back in her chair, an impatient and cruel frown set deep upon her face.
    “Xemnas, what’s the deal?†She demanded, snapping at her Superior. Xemnas looked down at the woman, his eyes narrowed.
    “Watch your tone, Number XII.†He warned. She responded by rolling her eyes and mumbling something under her breath. His expression then relaxed as he looked up at the rest of the Nobodies in the room. He cleared his throat, and began to speak.

    “Everyone, I called you here for a meeting of utmost importance.†He announced. Xemnas then took a quick glance around the room.

    “But first, has anyone seen Xaldin?â€

    Everyone shook his or her heads. Xemnas sighed impatiently, but with slight curiosity.

    This is odd…it’s unlike Number III to miss meetings…but no matter.

    “Never mind that then. As for the meeting; it’s about Sora and his friends, and with Xedramon knowing about them.†A few concerned murmurs echoed across the room, and Xemnas waited patiently for them to pass before he spoke again.
    “From what it seems, they have not yet told her about the Keyblade, and the job of Keyblade Masters.â€
    “So, she doesn’t know?†Interrupted one of the other figures, one with mauve-colored hair and piercing blue eyes, both insightful and manipulative. Xemnas shook his head.
    “No, it doesn’t seem so.â€
    “But we still have a problem.†Zexion from before commented, rubbing his chin thoughtfully. “Sora and his friends will still be after us, and will further hinder our plans. After all,†he looked up at Xemnas, “our plan at Castle Oblivion didn’t work.â€
    “And you really thought that would work?†The man with the fiery red hair from before scoffed. He leaned back in his chair and crossed his arms, a smug grin on his face. “Zexy, your plan of putting illusions in that castle to try to lure Sora into our grasp was doomed from the start.†The man with the rose-tinted hair laughed.
    “Axel, maybe that’s because your illusion had to turn on us, and ruin our plans.†Axel smiled proudly.
    “Well, what’d ya expect from me?†He joked. Xemnas rolled his eyes, becoming impatient. The orange-haired man from before frowned.
    “Regardless, Zexion is right.†He said, crossing his arms. “We have a problem. Sora now has a direct connection to the Organization.†He looked up at Xemnas with serious eyes. “We’re at a greater threat now.†Xemnas shook his head, sitting up straighter in his chair.
    “Actually, that isn’t the case.†He stated. “We’re now greater protected.†Vexen raised an eyebrow, surprised.
    “How so?†The Scientist inquired. The Superior glanced over at him for a second, before looking out at everyone else.
    “I had a run-in with the Keyblade Master and his friends. Just now, actually.†He said. “And by chance, Xedramon just walked in. So, I let Sora attack me.â€

    Everyone gasped slightly in surprise.

    “B-but Xemnas! You’re still here!†A member who was noticeably younger than the others with dirty blonde hair styled into a cross mullet-mohawk, and jade green eyes that reflected immaturity, yet kindness, said aloud. The man with the British-like accent leaned forward in his chair, and looked up towards his Superior.
    “Yes, if you were attacked, why are you still alive?†He questioned. Xemnas smirked slightly.
    “He attempted to attack me, but his attack was blocked…†he said, pausing at the end. Saix raised an eyebrow.
    “By what? Whom?â€

    “By Number XIII herself.â€

    The room filled with a fascinated and surprised silence.

    “You see, Xedramon then proceeded to explain to Sora and his friends that they were not to harm the Organization, or they’d have to harm her as well.†Xemnas continued.

    Vexen’s eyes widened slightly at the words ‘harm her’. He dared to look up towards the direction of the Nobody with the mullet-mohawk hair to see the young man sink slightly into his chair, his expression reflecting worry too.

    “By their expressions,†Xemnas said, crossing his arms, “they didn’t want to hurt her.†Vexen breathed out slightly in relief. Saix crossed his arms and looked down at the ground so far away.
    “I don’t see your point, Xemnas.†He stated bluntly. “How does this work to our advantage?â€

    Xemnas chuckled slightly, leaning back in his chair.

    “As long as Xedramon is around…â€

    A cruel smile slithered upon the Superior’s face.

    “…We can’t be touched.â€

    +++

    “So, why did you want us to come here?â€

    Sora asked, as Xed led the trio back to her Workshop. Xed looked over her shoulder and continued walking.
    “I didn’t get to finish telling you everything.†She admitted, smiling slightly. “Saix interrupted us before I could.†Goofy nodded, but then scratched his head.
    “None of this is making sense.†He said simply. “Master Yen Sid said nothing about—“
    “Don’t worry.†Xed said, cutting him off. “After this, everything will make sense.â€

    As they approached the Workshop, Xed summoned her Keyblade and pointed it at the door. Sora crossed his arms.
    “What are you doing that for?†he asked.
    “I set the door up so that only my Keyblade can open it, to prevent people who aren’t supposed to be in here from coming in.†she explained.
    “Ohh…†the party chorused, as the door clicked and swung open. Xed stepped to the side and allowed the three to walk in.

    “Hey guys!â€

    The four looked up to see Riku and the King running towards them, their expressions clear that there is something urgent that they need to say.
    “Riku!†Xed called, smiling.
    “Your majesty!†The trio shouted, excited to see him. They reached where everyone else was.
    “We’ve got important news, fellas!†The King announced. Donald nodded.
    “And we’ve got lots of questions!†he said. Xed glanced around.
    “Can we please talk inside?†she asked, bringing the volume of her voice down. “I’m not really supposed to be hanging around you guys, and I’ll get in trouble with Xemnas if someone catches me.†Everyone else nodded, and they all filtered into the Workshop, where they could talk in private.

    +++

    “So, you’re saying that everything in this place we were at, called Castle Oblivion, was all an illusion? It wasn’t real?†Sora asked, trying to make sense of the vague information Riku and the King had just supplied. The duo nodded, and the trio sighed deeply.
    “I don’t remember a Castle Oblivion.†Donald said, looking over at Sora and Goofy. “Do you?â€

    “Nope.â€
    “Nuh-uh.â€

    “The Organization tried to use Sora as their puppet?†Xed asked, disbelief and horror faint in her eyes. The King nodded. She bit her lip softly and looked down at the ground.

    That’s not true…it can’t be! They’d never do something like that…

    Would they?

    “Oh, Xedramon.†King Mickey said. “You had some things to tell us?â€
    “Yes.†She said, springing up from her seat.
    “Wait, I just have one question for Xed before she starts.†Sora said, looking over at her.
    “Yea?â€
    “Well, it makes sense, somewhat, that I have a Heartless, since I lost my Heart once.†He said, blinking slowly. “And it also makes sense that Riku has a Heartless, because he temporarily got it taken by Ansem.†Everyone nodded.
    “So what’s you point?†Donald asked, his tone reflecting confusion.
    “Well, I’m just saying that…Kuxir and Xoras, our Heartless, are part of the Disorganization.†The female Keybladist nodded, cocking her head slightly.
    “Yes. And that means…what?†Sora crossed his arms, and looked up at the ceiling above, which still had the large hole in it from when the party fell through.
    “If our Heartless are there…and if you’re a Nobody…†Xed nodded at his words. Sora looked over at her, a question in his eyes.

    “Where is your Heartless?â€

    A slight shiver went down Xed’s spine as he asked her the question. She immediately looked down at the ground, avoiding everyone’s curious gazes.
    “Uhh…†she started, clearly uncomfortable with the question. “Well…I…um…†she sighed, bringing up her hands and placing them behind her head. She blinked twice slowly, before looking back up at everyone.

    “My Heartless…is part of the White Disorder.â€

    No one seemed shocked. Xed swallowed nervously, beforeontinuing.

    “Her name…her name is Xradenom.â€

    Everyone nodded, taking all of this in. The Keyblader closed her eyes for a second, before reopening them.

    “And she…she is the leader…of the Disorganization.â€

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    Bring Me To Life Chapter 5: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3608249/5/Bring_Me_To_Life

    Xigbar: That's better.
    Me: As promised, I shall now reveal the surprise! Drum roll, please.

    (A drum rolls across the movie theater floor)

    Everyone: o_0?
    Me: Eh, close enough. The big surprise is...


    A FORUM FAMILY!!!

    Everyone: OOO!!!
    Me: Yes, It will be called 'The White Disorder', and you can choose between the Disorder's members, or, you could choose to be one of the Organization members.
    Luxord: Sweet! When is it coming out?
    Me: Later on tonight. I'll PM people when it comes out.
     
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    AWESOME!!!!!!

    I'm confused but this is awesome!!!!
     
  14. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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  15. JapAnimeFanatic Twilight Town Denizen

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    that was a good chapter =3 i liked how you put in the drum xP *drum rolls across the floor* classic
     
  16. RikuStalker Destiny Islands Resident

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    WHEEEEEEE.

    I'm still hooked on this story, and I'm on my way to read BMTL right now:D
     
  17. Hell Kaiser Ryo Kingdom Keeper

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    Well, finally, you actually took it longer han expected, AF...
     
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    This is getting highly interesting.
     
  19. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    :D thanks!

    Thanks! Glad to hear it :)
     
  20. Desmonic Kingdom Keeper

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    Nice chapter!! And I loved that joke chapter! I didn't noticed the real one below, and actually thought it was the real one!!
    Hmm..... I wonder what would happen if the Withe Disorder and Organization XIII started a war between them.... Wich side would Sora pick?
    It would be really awsome if something like that happened!
    Anyway, can't wait for your next chapter!!
     
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