Kairi tribute: the Ocean

Chorus:
How far does this ocean go?
How far will it's currents take us?

How far will this go?
How far will a silly raft take us?

Chorus

How far to the worlds?
How far will they take us?

Chorus

How far does his heart stretch?
How far can it take us?

Chorus

How far away can he get?
How far will this key take us?

Chorus

How far will a bottle reach?
How far will it's message take us?

 

This was excellent. I love how you chose to stick with a rythum but also found the right words to make out the story line of kingdom hearts. There definitely needs to be more Kingdom Hearts songs/poetry/haikus out there. Keep up the excellent work. There it is, I enjoyed it :)

 

realy? It just kinda came to me, and here is a poem about Sora, Riku, and The Keyblade:

This Key?
Why me?
It choose me?
Not him for the Key?​

Arn't I?
The weak one?
Why isn't this one?
For him not I?​

 

This one was nice, but I kinda don't get it. That's okay though, I am kind of a . . . can't really find the right word but I don't understand everything you know. keep up the good work. There it is, I enjoyed it :)

 

It is about how Riku was supposed to get Sora's Keyblade, but sora got it instead, and it is about sora doubting whether or not he can use it right.
and as for this, it isn't a song, it is a poem with a simple A,B,B,A, C,D,D,C ryme sceame.

 

Vexen

They say I don't have a heart
and that I am just an old fart,

and for that their gonna pay
some day,

cause they don't know
that I can control snow,

and that I have a sheild
that will make them want to yeild,

and they will then know that this Vexen
isn't some weak old hen!

Sorry about that, It was the best I could do, I got stuck thinking about Vexen for awhile, and this just sorta came into my head.

 

Thats okay this IS your thread after all. This is where you are supposed to come to get ideas off your mind, otherwise they are stuck in your mind and can interfere with any other threads you have. There it is, I enjoyed it :) oh and btw it wasn't that bad. The first part was funny but you had an idea and stuck with it. :roar: don't know why just felt like roaring :)

 

Demyx's world is going red

here's a new song!

I got a tune stuck in my head
and all the world is going red
I hear them cry:
Demyx, do you work!
So then I try
But is is all to no avail
all goes unheard
Laxerine, she likes to shock me
then Siax will lock me
in my room
and why?
because they don't like me
they say I'm a slacker
but they never told me
how to fight
look at Roxas
he hacks away
with that silly little key
and they say he is better?
than poor old Demyx?
just cause he's got that keyblade?
I can sing water to dance
I can play my sitar at every chance
but when it comes down to things
I try my best
even when I don't get rest
but they don't give me a chance
if they taught me
then I would know
but not even Vexen
master of snow
can sympathize
So I say I got this tune stuck in my head
and that my world is goin' red!​

 

Nice

Nice, it is about Demyx being jealous of Roxas right, at least that is how i interpreted it but only you know how it is truely interpreted right. There it is, I enjoyed it :)

 

uh oh, you just awakened my poem loving mind!

Space, Space
What a helpful place
it runs throughout
the universe like trout
in a lake
everyone has seen it's wake
and everyplace has a veiw
of the stars not few
the brightness
it is filled with lightness
so this wonderful place
should be called space!​

pick up your heart
When tough times call
and your heart takes a fall
just get up again
cause our hearts don't stain
with a single drop of blood
no it will take a flood
to uproot our heart
because it is an art
to stop one life
when thousands hold off the strife
if you run in with rage
then your heart will weaken with age
but if you keep up the clarity of thought
then there will be no calamity of drought​

 

Wow impressive, I must hand it to you. I am going to make a first here, please except my compliment *bows*. I have never bowed to anyone before. Anyway loved the poems, especially second one. Keep up the excellent work. There it is, I enjoyed it :)

 

We Fight!

In the euphoria of battle,
we fight!
With grace and power,
we fight!

We fight, we fight,
through day and night!

In endless strugle,
our blades, they clash!
With killing intention,
our blades, they clash!

They clash, they clash,
through day and night!

All loyalty,
abondons itself!
All honor,
abandons itself!

Loyalty, Honor, abandoned,
through day and night!​

 

Would it be bad to say this stinks . . . of pure awsomeness. This was pretty amazing I would love to see more. There it is, I enjoyed it :)

 

My home, it fell to darkness it did,
all I can do now is go along for the ride,
his heart is strong enough to complete the journey,
for that I am shure, all I can do is give him my love,
my love, my power, I must give it all, the key he wields,
is so important, as long as I am with him, I know I am safe,
for his heart is strong, and it carries my weight,
though he doesn't know it, I am with him always,
I sing him to sleep every night, though he doesn't hear me,
I watch his struggles to find me, unaware that I am here,
his heart can bear the weight of both our souls,
our lives are intertwined, as none have been before,
I see every moment of his day, I know his love for me,
never goes astray, he fights many battles, so that one day,
he can see me again.


You walk the path of light,
you never falter, never detour,
you never stray from the path,
you always stay in the light,
in the light you always walk,
in the light you always are,
you are the champion of light,
vanquisher of shadows,
you never walk away from the light,
and so my heart goes with you.​

 

I really like this one, it is from Kairis perspective talking about Sora right? Anyway I liked how you stuck to the point and didn't stray off to something else. The spelling was good, I didn't notice any mistakes but then again I am not a computer. Keep up the good work. There it is, I enjoyed it :)

 

My heart, it goes with you,
on your grand journey,
with all the strength, and all the power,
of that simple key,
if you are mine, and I am yours,
then all my wishes are true,
if you would just come home,
and smell the ocean blue.
​

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They say we don't have hearts
They say we can't appreciate the arts
But then
(pause)
Why do I have these crayons?
Why do I have this book?
So then
(pause)
[chorus]
I must be different, but how?
I am special, but why?
All I ever do is this, but why?
(pause)
A diferent place
A different time
(pause)
Is there someone else
Looking through my eyes?
So then
(pause)
[Chorus]
(long note held at end, as music fades out)



In a secret place
Alone in your embrace
The world is falling apart
But I would give my heart
To stay with you
And say I do
Our hearts intertwined
So that we never have to find
our love again
forever I am your freind​

 

I liked your last two posts and i thought the last one was absolutely lovely. *A single tear drop* i got something in my eye. But seriously though i really loved it keep up the awsome work. There it is, I enjoyed it :)

 

Roxas? Namine?
Why do these names sound like they
Belong with us? Like they have been?
When only Sora and I have ever been
With us?
Sometimes I feel like this aurdurus
journey must have it's end.
before our hearts do rend.
from the stress and the pain
yet we get up again and again
Why not just lay down
and let the heartless take the crown?
How much longer can we go?
Before our hearts are lost in snow?
and yet our hearts don't break,
my sister I never had will take
us to a safe place
even in these lost realms of space.​

 

I really enjoyed this one, keep up the excellent work. There it is, I enjoyed it :)

 

not from KH this time, sorry

I once, was in a world of my own,
not of this world's stone,
but now, all I am,
is just one part of the great I am,
now I know, not to take things for chance,
and that things are not from chance,
I know now,
oh now I know how,
my maker made my soul,
it is not fashioned from stone,
but from life,
life itself, in the great I am.​