Is This Real? Or Not?

Overmy break I decided to write some ^_^ Enjoy =D




Chapter 5

What was happening? Something was there, keeping me awake, but motionless. I could hear everything.

“Axel!†I heard Xigbar yell out, from out in the hallway. I heard footsteps and running. I wanted to wake up.

“Someone help me! I can’t wake up!†I tried to say, but it was all in my mind.

“What did you do to her!?†Axel yelled, as I heard him right outside the door. I heard footsteps come to my side, as I felt someone’s arms pull me up into the air. I was halfway slung over their shoulder, and my legs were wrapped around their waste.

“Go get Zexion,†I heard Axel say as he was the one holding me. I heard more running. I wanted to badly to speak.

“A-Axel,†I said. I could feel the words pass through my lips. It wasn’t in my mind anymore, but why was my eyes closed?

“It’s okay Rhaxas… Zexion will help you,†he said. I felt warm tears fill my eyes, and they soon ran down my cheeks. I wanted to move, and speak more, but I couldn’t. Whatever it was wouldn’t let me.

I heard more footsteps.

“What happened?†I heard Zexion ask. Axel started to pat my back and it felt nice. I felt warmth come into my body from the coldness I felt when I wasn’t myself.

“Saix, Roxas, and I came up with a joke for her just to fool around and try to get to know her, but I guess that I must’ve triggered something and she seemed possessed,†Xigbar said. That word, possessed, as Xigbar has said, ‘triggered’, me again. I felt useless now. My eyes were open now and they felt different. My arm rose up and I saw that it was demonic. My nails grew, and my fingers were hunched together. I brought it down, slashing Axel’s arm. He let out a yell, and dropped me, running over to Zexion. Their eyes were full of worry and shock. I managed to turn my head and look in the mirror. My eyes were dark red with oval black slits, with a white slit inside the black one. I had an evil grin, and it seemed as if I had… fangs! My shoulders were hunches and I looked quickly to attack. My hair color changed to pure black. My head turned back at Zexion as he already grabbed my book. He got his out and started reading aloud from the book. It was more Latin, but in this state I didn’t understand. All I knew was that it was burning me, from the inside. I growled and tried to run up to Zexion. But something grabbed my arm and threw me on my bed. I jumped back up and I saw it was Axel.

“Axel?†I said, but my voice still wasn’t able to speak out,. Just growls and snarls from this demon cast inside me. I jumped off the bed, but Axel slammed me back down.

“Axel, go get the rope out that I set in her closet. I was afraid something like this would happen. I looked over at my closet and ran towards it, but Axel rammed into me again, making me bust across the desk. I let out a painful yell, and I heard it pass my lips. I heard the door open, but my body didn’t move. I heard some rustling around and my body sat up, shrugging off some of the pain I felt.

“Careless foolsâ€â€¦ Whoa!? Did THAT pass through my lips? It sounded so… dark and demonic.

“You think you’re helping her… But she doesn’t need your help,†it, or more than likely I said. I was trying to break out. I couldn’t, it was too much.

“You may think that hurting this figure hurts me… The sad truth is, I feel nothing! The little girl you guys befriended is the one suffering from the pain,â€

“Stop your lies!†Zexion yelled out with one book opened up in his hand. He raised his arm forward, his last three fingers pointing down, while his thumb and index finger stood across.

“I demand to know your name demon!†he shouted out.

“Demand!?†I shouted back at him. It sounded frightening and I wanted to cry so much.

“You do NOT demand me, nor do you dare speak to me in a demanding tone!†I shouted back once more. My tone seemed strong.

“Axel now!†Zexion shouted. It was a trap. I was happy but my body didn’t feel like it. Axel tackled me and I felt every ounce of pressure just ram into me. I was back on the bed, and I felt something tighten around one of my wrists, and another on my ankle. I looked down and they were tying me onto the bed. I smiled on the inside, but the outside just resisted. Once strapped down, my body just tried to rip free from them, but Zexion wouldn’t let it happen. He tied a few more ropes around just for security reasons.

“Demon, release yourself out of this child!†Zexion yelled.

“You want the child back?†I spoke out feeling a smile on my face as my eye brow turned it into a smirk

“No… don’t!†I tried to speak out. I didn’t want to come back so that they could just worry about me. I wanted this thing out and I wanted it out now! I just didn’t want to come back, but ifelt something just force me back to where I got back in control. It was like lockdown, and I was being thrown around everywhere.

“Stop!†I shouted, but I heard it come from my lips again. It was my voice and it was normal. My face turned wet and my nose started to stuff up. I felt myself crying and sobbing.

“Don’t let it take me,†I said, quivering. I didn’t want to say that. I WANTED it to. Was the demon still controlling me?
Axel ripped off the ropes and hugged me, not letting go. I couldn’t breathe at all the way he hugged me so tightly. I could feel it, wanting to come back. I was shivering. Staying in that form, took every ounce of heat out of my body.

 

~Bumpage~

Hey guys i need some CnC before my next chapter

please help a girl out ;)

 

rockin dude

 

thanks! :D

I'll be working on the next chapter tomorrow :3

 

...........what does CnC mean?.....and this chapter was way good....:D....

 

aw, come on, its like awsome, I wants more!!! PLZ!! :D PLEASE!! i'll cry *~* if you don't make more. :'(

 

Comments-n-Criticism

Don't worry the next chapter is in the works =)

Chapter 6



“What is going on with her!†Axel yelled questionably, as he rose up, leaving me on the bed. He looked closely at Zexion as he walked closer to me. Zexion stopped in front of my bed, putting his index finger under my chin. He tilted my face up to view his eyes. His seemed alarmed and tainted.

“It’s a trick, her eyes are still red,†he said as he reached for the rope on the bed. My hand snatched his wrist and I felt the sudden deep growling voice just lunge at my throat. A rasp yell passed through my dispersed lips and I no longer had control of my body.

“Vestri Deus cannot servo vos anymore quam is can servo is puella!†I shouted aloud. I felt, angry as I shoved Zexion back to the ground. My body stood up onto my bed as my arms extended out to fight myself. My nails grew long and sharp enough to seriously hurt someone.

“What did she say?†Axel asked as he helped Zexion up. Zexion took a few more breaths until he felt tired out.

“She said, ‘Your God cannot save you anymore than he can save this girl’†he said. Axel looked over at me, his eyes full of sadness. He held his hand out, as my body backed up to the cold wall. I threw my arms in front of myself, slashing at Axel. He backed up once my hand rose up to my neck. I cold feel the tingly feeling as the tips of my nails traced along the center of my neck. I could feel tears dwelling up in my eyes, but they were forced back.

“Iterum , quod poena ero suus nex!†shouted from my lips once more. Axel turned and looked at Zexion. My eyes wandered over to his and more worry came into his. He huffed a few breaths then looked over at Axel. He was a little shocked to actually hear the words I yelled out.

“’Once more, and the penalty will be her death’,†he said softly as he felt himself embrace for an attack. My body then lunged forward at Zexion.

‘Stop it!†I shouted out, actually hearing my own voice. My body screeched to a halt as I battled with my own form to take control. My arms were locked in place, and I was shaking, fighting it!
“Get the ropes!†I shouted out, still hearing my voice. I could see clearly and my body heat felt cold, dispersed throughout.
“Don’t you dare,†the snarling deep voice growled, ripping from my throat.
“Do it now!†I shouted, still hearing my own voice. Zexion looked confused, but I could hear Axel rummaging around behind me. I felt something tight go around my arms as then I felt Zexion’s body crash into mine as he held me down.

“Evado , adepto absentis!†I shouted. I understood it now. I could understand what the words meant! It was all clear and just there! He shouted to get off, and thankfully Zexion just kept me down.

“Release your hold girl, or you will regret it,†he said to me in my mind.
“No!†I shouted aloud. I knew they could hear it, and so could he. He was angry, and didn’t want to fool around with me. I lost control of my right arm and it grabbed Axel by the neck. He made a loud choking sound as I could feel him attempting to breathe through the palm of my hand. Zexion backed up, afraid to hurt Axel.

“Release your hold!†he shouted at me through my mind. I wanted to cry. I wanted to stop!

“No!†I shouted aloud again. I tried hard to let go of Axel, but it just made him furious. I kept thinking, if he got madder, he got stronger, but I can’t let him take me now. My hand tightened around Axel’s neck, and both his arms suppressed my own arm, but he couldn’t get it apart.

“Suus consensio est valde penuriosus , quod eventus est nex ut quispiam is blandior pro!†I shouted aloud, my voice demonic again. I felt a blur pass over my eyes as I couldn’t see what was happening now. Everything was black, but I no longer felt Axel in my grip again. He got out thankfully.

“Who ARE you!?†Zexion shouted. I felt a rasp laughter come to my mind.

“Tell them, I am one called, Seth,†he said in a rasp voice in my head. I heard a loud shrieking noise, and light came to view. My body felt normal, and I could move them on my own free will. Zexion looked relieved.

“Your eyes, they’re blue again,†he said softly. I looked over and saw Axel standing against the wall, holding his neck, gasping softly.

“Seth,†I said softly, almost in a whisper. “His name is Seth,†I said explaning in more details.

“Rhaxas… Now is a bad time, and now, I need your help more than ever, if we are going to get this demon out of you,†he said softly.

 

ah! I WANTS MORE! THIS IS GOOD!!! THIS IS REALLYGOOD!!! WOW!! PLZ MAKE MORE!!! (btw, does Axel like your character?)

 

lol

I'm still debating on that

I'm wanting my character to like him, but i'm also debating on whether my character should like Zexion or Axel


I'm already halfway done with the next chapter :D

 

Sounds like a 14th member <_< >_> , it could be...

 

lol


I made a story about that.. Same nobody, but different abilities




7th chapter!!!!












Chapter 7


“What exactly can I do to help?†I asked softly. I felt useless at the moment, and very tired. I was lying down on the bed as Axel stood next to me, patting my shoulder.

“Either the demon in your body leaves, or we will have to force him out through an exorcism†Zexion explained. My hands started shaking.

An exorcism? I didn’t think it would be this serious. Just thinking about it, made goose bumps appear on my arms and made the hair on the back of my neck stand straight up. It was nerve racking.

“What if he won’t go?†I asked softly, still shaking on my own. I sat up, feeling different again, like losing control.

“He’s coming back,†I said quickly before Zexion had time to answer. Axel and him took immediate action and tied ropes around my arms and around both legs.

“This way will be more affective for you and us. If we do each separately, then more than likely, he’ll get out,†Zexion explained to me. I nodded as I stayed sat up on the bed. I felt cold and started shivering. My lips felt frozen and my hair felt like it was freezing.

“Axel…I-I’m cold,†I said, shaking in my voice. I was shivering more and more, as if he were taking away all the warmth in my body. Axel took off his glove and put his hand on my cheek. He immediately pulled back. He looked over at Zexion.

“She’s freezing,†he said then put his glove back on. He sat next to me and put his arms around me. I felt him almost jerk backwards, but he stayed. It was weird, how his body felt like it was feverish. Maybe it was where he could create fire. But whatever it was, I really liked it. I smiled, and looked up with a smile. My lips were still frozen and my hair still felt like it was freezing up.

“Seth is trying to take away her body heat. He needs that heat for power,†he said then opened up his book. He flipped a lot of pages heavily and then turned a few more pages. He smirked and looked down at me, putting his hand on top of my head. He looked over his book. I saw his eyes and lips move as if he were reading silently to himself. He finally looked back at me and said.

“Transporto Apollo's estus ex magnus sol solis , quod restituo Glacius' gelu inside is puella somesâ€

My body felt like it was warming up. The coldness was escaping somewhere and the heat was kicking in.

“What did you say Zexion?†I asked, feeling my lips soft and my hair wavy.

“Send Apollo's heat from the big sun, and replace Glacius' cold inside this girl's body†he said. I looked at him confused. Apollo? Glacius?

Who were those people?

“Zexion,†I said softly then stopped the confused look, “Who is Apollo and Glacius?â€

He looked back at me with a smile and a small laugh.

“Apollo is the Greek god of the sun, and Glacius is the god of snow,†he said closing his book. His smile went away and he looked angry.

“Hold her down!†Zexion yelled at Axel. I felt Axel shove me down on the bed as he kept his weight on me.

“What’s going on?†I tried to ask, but it didn’t pass my lips. He was back. My eyes must’ve turned red, because that and my voice is the only thing physical that could change for them to know it wasn’t I.

Zexion flipped the pages quickly until he found a page that he was looking for, he places his hand on my head again, but I bit him pretty hard. Zexion pulled back, holding his hand close to his chest. His face twisted up in a great deal of pain, but he didn’t stop. He put his hand on my arm instead, whatever part of my body worked for him.

“Tell them to stop now, or you’ll be dead by the end of the exorcism,†he said then let me speak. I looked at Zexion and Axel as tears formed in my eyes.

“Guys…. Whatever I say, don’t stop,†I said softly in a whisper that they could hear. I felt a loud shriek in my head and I felt something just stab me everywhere, in my head, in my stomach, and in my legs. I let out a loud scream as I felt more and more pain. I finally stopped shouting as he took back over, but I was still screaming in my mind

" ego to order vos licentia is puella somes , vel exsisto vis sicco per a valde paciscor of patientia "

Zexion handed Axel his book

“Read that in English, so that Rhaxas may know what we are saying,†he said. Axel looked at the front of the page and nodded. He read aloud.

"I command you leave this girls body, or be forced out with a great deal of suffering."

More words passed through my voice.

" ut ego have said pro , vestri deus cannot succurro vos praeter is can succurro is puella "

Axel looked over a Zexion.

“‘As i have said before, your god cannot help you more than he can help this girl’. Heh, you arrogant demon, we’ll just see about that," Zexion said and looked over at the book in Axel’s hands. He read silently to himself and bobbed his head once understandingly.

"Ego damno thee ut abyssus!" shouted from my lips again. Zexion looked closer at my body, and looked straight into my eyes, or Seth’s eyes actually.

“Heh, you’re very bright are you?†Zexion asked with a laugh.
“You damn ME to hell? Just you wait until the exorcism is over,†he said still chuckling. He looked down at me and shut his eyes slightly. He took a deep breath.

" iacio is unus sicco , iacio him ut depths of abyssus qua is vadum subsisto quod subsisto , causa haud magis moeror , moestitia , poena , cruciatus , quod patientia , huic puella " Zexion said, wind starting to blow in every direction. It was hard to keep my eyes open, but Seth made me.


"Cast this one out, cast him to the depths of hell where he shall remain and stay, causing no more grief, sorrow, pain, torture, and suffering, for this girl" Axel repeated in English. I felt more stabbing and more pain in my body, as I felt a great force lift over me, but it was right at the entrance, ready to come back in.

"licentia iam!" Zexion shouted.

“Leave now!†Axel shouted back.

Then, I felt it. It was all over. No one in my body, and nothing to control it, but me. But why couldn’t I move, speak, or breathe?
Or, a better question..

Why can’t I see!?

 

*gasp* Suspense!....and you're right....that is a tough choice on who to like........but Zexion in this one is more.....uh....what's the word...well....he's nicer......and more attractive.....:D.....but it's your call.

 

Axel.. cause he's the one who seems to care more.... he's always trying to keep you safe... even if it means slaming you into a bed, so you can't attack people... but ya.. NEXT CHAPTER!!!!

 

Possibly Last Chapter (or not lol your all's choice!!!)

Chapter 8

Maybe this was it. Maybe this was my death.

I always pictured it would be calm, and quick, but this, was just too much. But how could I be talking to myself? I just had to keep reminding myself. I’m still here; maybe there is still a chance?

The thoughts of that demon still ran through my mind.

‘Once more, and the penalty will be her death’

‘Tell them to stop now, or you’ll be dead by the end of the exorcism’

Maybe my mind is just playing tricks on me, and there never was a demon.

But that doesn’t explain the colors of my eyes and my demonic voice. Reality seemed much different now, since I can remember.

“There’s no heat in her body!†Zexion shouted out. Everything stayed pitch black. I couldn’t’ feel anything, not even my heart beating.

There was something Zexion said to me, when he taught me Latin before Xigbar and the others triggered my state.

“You’re special Rhaxas. You have a heart, and can see the unimaginableâ€

I can even recall Zexion and Vexen arguing, and I can remember feeling the emotions.

“She’s a freak in this organizationâ€

“She’s just like any other nobody!â€

“No! She has a heart. She can feel her emotions… I’ve never encountered any Nobody to do that… She needs to be sent off as soon as possible, before she gets too out of handâ€



I can even remember sitting inside my room, against the door with my ear up to the door. I could remember crying, and thinking that one day something bad would happen, and something bad did happen.

“She’s not breathing!†Axel shouted aloud. Something pulled at me, and I felt like I was floating, but nothing was there, only darkness.

It felt so weird now. I wasn’t even alive and yet somehow I could sense my being there, or whatever it was we had.

A light soon flashed, and I was lying on the ground in my room. I sat up and rubbed my eyes. When I opened them, I saw Axel on his knee’s in the floor, with Zexion on his knee’s bent over. Axel was, crying! I looked closer and saw myself there, lying on the ground. I felt something stab my chest, as if my heart just shattered. I took a few troubled steps, because I was across the room from them.

I soon made it beside Axel and I saw him still crying. His hand was holding my body’s hand on the ground. I raised my hand to put it on his shoulder, but when I saw that my hand was light and see through, I pulled back slightly. I pulled my hand up to view and saw that I could see through myself.

What the heck was going on? I looked down and noticed that I wasn’t wearing the black Organization Coat. I was wearing a while gown, and no shoes. I knew at that moment I was dead.

“Zexion, can you help her?†Axel asked, raising my hand p and kissing it. I felt the warmth of his lips press against my hand. I felt it, and it was so real. I took a chance and put my hand on his shoulder, and I felt him, just as I knew he could feel me. He turned back and looked at me. More tears dwelled up in his eyes.

“Rhaxas?†he asked, sputtering the words that came out of his lips. It was hard for me, to see him like that. It was difficult to comprehend it. I felt wetness come in my eyes, but they wouldn’t pass through.

“I’m right here Axel,†I said, the sound of my voice having a small echo to it. It felt heavenly.

“Please don’t leave me,†He said, putting his arms around my waist. It felt so real that he was able to touch me, but I hated that it looked like I wasn’t touchable.

“Axel… I don’t want to leave either. But I think it’s time for me to go now,†I said softly. I felt so heartbroken, and I felt like he wouldn’t ever move on, after I went away.

“Come back, please,†he said, an edgy roughness in his voice that cracked. I wiped my eyes even though there were no tears. He released my waist and stood up, putting his arms around my waist more securely than just for a hug. I looked over at Zexion as he just watched, with a half frown. He was so sweet to me, and he was very nice. He looked like he was shy or something.

“Zexion?†I asked, still having the sweet heavenly voice. It startled him and he shook his head softly.

“Yeah?†he asked, cracking in his voice. I could see his eyes glossy as if he were ready to cry.

“Thank you, for getting me out of that pain, and getting me to happiness,†I said softly. His half frown turned into a straight across stance. He bobbed his head once in a nod.

“It’s no problem Rhaxas,†he said. I saw wetness come from the bottom of his eyes. I thought they couldn’t feel emotions, but I guess that they can still express it, or they really could feel it, just not believe it. It was so hard to think while I felt like someone was tugging at me to come along. I looked at Axel and he put a small space between us.

“Axel, I have to go now,†I said, more cracking in my voice. I felt him pull me close, as my chest and his collided, and his head tilted sideways until his warm lips melted onto mine. It felt nice and passionate. I was happy and nothing could take away this moment.

I felt the wetness rol down my cheeks, passed on from his, and he didn’t want to let go, but I felt myself slip away right at the end, and just as everything grew dark, he held out his hand and said

“I love you,†just as soft as he could

 

Awww......that was sweet ending.....you're a great writer..:D....

 

AW!!!!!!!!! NAW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ITS SO SWEET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (wow, look at all the exclamtion points..) NAW!!!!!!!!!! NAW!!!!!!!!!!!! NAW!!!! *continues "NAW!!!"ing for an hour*

 

you said comment if i want more?
well guess what?
I WANT MORE!!
if its not too much trouble
lolz

 

*agrees with KingdomKey 13* Make like a "2 Years later" when Axel runs into you again, but your not a ghost..

 

I've got an idea so far, but right now, my computer crashed and my whole story was deleted (don't worry i got my sister's computer and I can copy and paste :D)

My idea is that, where she was a nobody and somehow had a heart, she can come back, if she tries hard enough. At the moment, she isn't able to see anything and she wants to go back... Trust me, she gets her own guardian Angel :D

 

That'd be so awesome! :D.....can't wait for it.