Is This Real? Or Not?

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    Is this Real? Or Not?





    I stood there in the park, lying on the ground as I felt a large stab in my chest. Everyone surrounded me, and I was wondering, what did I do? I looked around, noticing the faces. They weren’t right. They looked like… they weren’t human, paler and scarier.
    “What’s going on?†I asked, seemingly out of breath. Why was it that I was suffering for something that I didn’t even know what was going on.
    “Rhaxas?†I heard a man call out. I just buried my face into the ground, feeling my wet tears soak down my face. Someone put their hand on my shoulder.
    “Rhaxas, are you okay?†I heard the man call out again. I didn’t bother to look up, but he put his hands under me and picked me up. The exact way a three year old would be picked up, and I was fourteen! I could hear him humming a small tune
    “Who…who are you?†I asked cautiously. I could feel him pat my back, and his hand was warm. My clothes were so thin.
    “Don’t worry Rhaxas, I’m taking you back home where you belong,†he said again. I felt his spiky hair against my neck and it tickled.
    “Who are you though?†I asked, sleepy from the tune. I could hear him chuckle and his voice was so smooth.
    “My name is….†And then I trailed off, never getting the name. I never got a look at his face and he was so sweet and kind.

    I don’t know how long I slept, but it was the best I ever had. I could see myself, back at the playground having so much fun with others. But it was only a fantasy.

    “What were you thinking?†I heard a man yell out. The voice wasn’t in my dream. It was in reality.
    “She was being attacked Xemnas. The poor girl doesn’t have anywhere to go and she’s just like us!†I heard the man yell out once more. I opened my eyes, to a dark room. It was hard to see, but the light under the crack of the door was visible. I pulled the blanket off my body, and left the comfortable bed. Being quiet I tiptoed over to the door, but I accidentally tripped over something that felt rubbery. More likely a shoe. I shut my eyes when I came to impact.
    “What was that?†I heard the man called Xemnas ask. I put my hands over my eyes and curled up in a ball. My long blonde hair seemed to help cover my face. I heard the doorknob turning, and my heart was pounding. I had no clue where I was, and no idea what was going on. Were they going to hurt me? What was their plan? And what part did I take in it? I heard the door creak and saw the light shine in. I kept my eyes clothes.
    “An attack?†the man asked as he looked down at me. I got the courage to look up, and see him, wearing a long black coat and black boots. His eyes were olive green, and his hair was spiky red. One green marking lied under each of his eyes. He was fairly tall, and he looked very curious.
    “Rhaxas did something attack you?†he asked in his sweet voice.
    “Impossible, they can’t get in this castle,†Xemnas said. I looked over at him, and saw his honey golden eyes, His longer silver hair, and his creepy frown. He seemed mostly monotone in his speech. Axel frowned, tilting his straight lip into a slant. He pulled his hand down and offered to help me up.
    “Come on sweetie, I won’t hurt you,†he said smiling. I looked from my blue aqua eyes into his olive green, and at that moment, I knew I could trust him I reached my arm out, reaching for his hand. When my arm reached the light, I saw bruises and scars on my arm. I retracted my hand quickly, but I knew he seen by the way his eyes got wide. He got closer to me, and put both his arms around me. I let out a small gasp, thinking he was going to hurt me, but he held me close to his chest, in a protective way. I hadn’t the faintest idea of what was happening, but I kept my arms straight up, onto his shoulders, and I could feel my face starting to soak up with tears. His reaction to my tears seemed more curious to him, than my feelings. He wiped one of my tears off, and examined it.
    “Tears?†he asked softly in my ear. I tilted my head back, giving my eyes a small sadness ember to them. He seemed to gasp and hold me closer.
    “Rhaxas, go to sleep, please,†he said softly then starting humming a tune. I felt myself losing my consciousness again.
    “I will help you in the morning. Don’t worry. Everything will be fine,†he said. His small tune got to me and I felt limp in his arms. He kept a hold of me, and pulled me up in his arms. I could feel it. My arm crossed across my stomach, and my other arm hanging downward.
    “Axel, we will discuss this tomorrow when she is awake,†He said. He didn’t seem happy, or mad, but it wasn’t pleasant. He laid me back down on the bed. He pulled my jacket off and pulled my jeans off. I was a little embarrassed about that, but I didn’t seem bothered. I could hear the metal part hit on the table next to me. He pulled the warm blanket over my body.
    “Sleep well,†he said softly. I felt him put his hand on my forehead, and pull my hair out of my eyes. I could feel him get close to me. I could inhale his scent.. It was nice and warm


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    Not be mean, yes I probably deserve bad rep, or like a warning but Rhaxas sounds like an off-brand version of Roxas...
     
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    Chapter 2

    I awoke in my bed, or what I thought was my bed. I yawned softly and sat up, stretching my arms. I could already feel the frizziness in my hair. I even giggled a bit and smiled. I pulled the blanket off my body again, and stood up in the light room now. It was so wonderful. It was white walls with a bluish tint to it. I looked around and saw a desk in my room. I hopped out of the bed, and grabbed my jeans, sliding them on, quickly. They were pretty easy to pull on because of my very skinny waist. I ran over to the desk, almost tripping. I sat down in the chair and looked around. It was so nice to have somewhere to actually draw, and write. I loved it, and I even hugged the desk. I stood up and looked around the room. I saw a large white teddy bear sitting on a rocking chair. I smiled and it was half the size of me. I smiled hugging it. It was warm, and smelled of the scent Axel did. I saw a card in the hand. I was curious. I picked it up and read it.

    “Welcome to the Organization, Rhaxas,” was the greeting. I smiled, feeling welcomed. I ran out of the doorway, and immediately ran into a woman. I knocked us both over being clumsy.

    “Watch it,” she yelled a little angrily. Her hair looked like antennas that picked up electricity, because I thought I saw a few sparks.

    “I’m Sorry,” I said standing up quickly, helping her up. She didn’t smile or anything, but she did seem curious.

    “Rhaxas right?” she asked. I looked up into her aqua blue eyes. She looked a little similar to me, but my hair wasn’t that blonde. It was much more faded than hers.

    “Yes… How does everyone know my name?” I asked. She grunted and scoffed.

    “Who doesn’t?” she asked snobby like, and seemed a little annoyed. She walked back down a few doors and went into a room with the number Twelve written across. I looked back at my room and noticed the number Fourteen. I looked around and noticed the hall was now empty. I walked down the hallway, and just kept walking. It was pretty long. I passed up all the rooms with numbers on them, until I reached a big white door. I was curious. I peeked through the crack and saw the room was large and white. With many seats. I chuckled and looked down both sides of the hallways, making sure that no one could see me. I chuckled softly and walked in, closing the door behind me. The room was so bright that it hurt my eyes. I walked across the platform slowly. Feeling overwhelmed.

    I heard whispers.
    Get out
    Go away
    Run
    Leave

    More than ten different voices were saying those words in random order. It gave me a headache. I put my hands over my ears.
    “Leave me alone,” I managed to say. I felt something just hit me, right across my face. It stung so badly and I could feel the ‘smack’. It was a great force that knocked me onto the floor. I could feel something grab my legs and pull me across the platform. I left out a scream. I tried to pull whatever it was off me. Something grabbed my wrist and pulled me the other way.

    Curiosity killed the cat, and the cat was me.
    “Let me go, leave me alone!” I shouted out, starting to cry more and more. I heard something knock on the door.
    “Rhaxas you in there?” I heard Axel call out.
    “Axel help!” I shrieked out, before another blow struck across me. I never felt so bad to be alone. I cried and cried… sobbed and sobbed, begging for it to be over.
    “Rhaxas open the door it’s locked!” he shouted. He started banging on the door more. I just lay there on the ground crying. More forces hit me, and hurt me, just to be doing something. What was the purpose of hurting me? What purpose do I serve?

    “Rhaxas!” Axel shouted. Then suddenly, everything was quiet. Nothing was dragging me, and my wrist was now able to move on its own. I pulled my hand up to my face and just sobbed. I heard the door open up.

    “Rhaxas!” Axel shouted out as he ran over. He got on his knees and pulled me up, embracing his arms around me. I could hear him sniffle as he ran his hand down the back of my hair as if he were petting me. I wrapped my arms around him, and held him close to me. Never wanting him to leave.
    “They were hurting me. I don’t want to be hurt anymore, make them stop,” I sobbed into his coat shirt. It was muffled, but hearable. He kept his arms around me.
    “Shhh, Rhaxas, everything will be okay. Everything will be alright,” he said soothingly. I just cried and cried.

    “Make them stop, please,” I sobbed. He frowned and still patted my back.

    “Rhaxas, I don’t want you hurt. I would do anything to get them to stop,” he said. I sniffled, wiping my tears off. He put his hand under my chin and tilted my face towards his. He put one hand over my face, not touching.

    “They are violent. Very violent,” he said, examining where I was hit across the face. He looked shocked, and didn’t even want to see the sight of it. I could see wetness appear in his eyes.

    “Rhaxas, you’re hurt. There’s a bruise across your face and one on your neck,” he said. I buried my face into his coat again. He rubbed my back a couple more times.

    “I think that maybe, you should go see Zexion. He might know what’s going on,” he said softly.
    “Okay…please, take me to him,” I said. I could feel him nod. He took my hand and pulled me up, leading me out of the room


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    Naruto- She's not anything to do with Roxas :3

    I wanted to make up a story with my nobody in it

    My name is Sarah and I mixed up the letters and inserted an 'x'


    NOTE: I am a very quick writer, so be on the lookout xD
     
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    Oh, Is this like kingdom hearts or something? xD I didn't read the whole part, that's why...sorry.
     
  6. Sexy Sheva Banned

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    It's okay :3

    here's the thing

    Rhaxas is a 15 year old girl, who has the power to see Paranormal activity. She is a nobody, and her paranormal power allows her to feel emotion.
     
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  8. Sexy Sheva Banned

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    Thanks

    I would write more, but i gotta head to bed D=

    I'll be thinking of more ideas for my next chapter

    If you guys have any requests, you can tell me and i'll think about it :D

    Goodnight ^_^
     
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    Chapter 3

    The cold rush of air brushed along my skin, and I stood outside the doorway of number six’s room. I was uneasy, scared, and most of all frightened.

    “This is beyond my control,” I could hear Zexion say through the doorway. I shut my eyes and pointed my face down,, shutting my eyes tightly.

    “You know what’s going on with her though. I don’t,” Axel said. I sighed, relaxing myself. I opened my eyes, and there was a white face, of the scariest thing I ever saw. It growled and hissed at the same time. I screamed loud for about two seconds and jumped back, crashing into the wall. I pushed myself closely into the wall, as the white face just rose, and a white line of smoke wrapped into a figure, and it turned black. A baggy thick layered black cloak that was a little torn and raggedy formed on the body. I could hear the groan and it sounded like a low hollow screech. I screamed a few more times; until I saw Axel and Zexion open the door. They were in shock.

    “What is that thing?” Zexion yelled aloud and he pulled Axel behind him. Fast wind approached, blowing me face down on the floor. I felt like I was in the middle of a cyclone. I rolled over onto my back, trying as hard as I could to stand up. Whatever that thing was, it stuck its hand out and a white beam shot into a white gassy orb around me. I felt one of the strips plunge into my chest, and pull out a large amount of more white gassy strips. What the heck was that stuff, and why do I feel so weak now.

    “Get away from her!” Zexion shouted out as he stepped forward opening a book, that looked plain and empty.
    “Reverto ut silenti etc. Reverto ut vestri universitas. Licentia is parvulus unus , quod may vestri everto phasmatis incursio in 'Book of Mortuus’,” he said. I knew that language. It was so familiar. The wind slowed down, and the figure was howling, and screeching . I shut my eyes and heard one last groan, until everything became quiet. I opened my eyes, and I soon felt Axels touch and his warm hands.

    “Zexion what just happened?” I asked, shockingly. I was shaking and breathing heavily. He opened the book and showed me the first page. I saw a roman numeral I and across from it, was the words
    “Animus Rapio”

    “Why were you speaking Latin, and why did he disappear into the book, and have the words Animus Rapio?” I asked. He chuckled, and close the book ,placing it in my hand.

    “I’ll teach you Latin. It’s the only way to pull those spirits, into the book of the dead,” he said

    I nodded and looked at the book closely.

    “The book of the dead,” I said softly.

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    Reverto ut silenti etc. Reverto ut vestri universitas. Licentia is parvulus unus , quod may vestri everto phasmatis incursio in 'Book of Mortuus

    To go back when the dead. To go back when your the whole. License this child one , and may your to destroy ghost clash upon 'Book of Dead





    and Animus Rapio means

    Courage to Seize



    Sorry its a short chapter i'm still thinking lol
     
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  13. Sexy Sheva Banned

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    lol
    Thank you two :D
    *ish happy someone reads lol*

    I'm halfway done with the 4th chapter

    and there's some more Latin, but i'll have the translations at the bottom
     
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    i like that you put the translations at the bottom.
    they dont teach latin at my skewl anymore... *sigh*
    i get french instead -_-!
     
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    Chapter 4


    I shivered, feeling the cold wind, blow through the crack of my window. The howling of the wind sent shivers
    down my spine. I looked at my desk, and one image popped into my head, another spirit. I quickly grabbed a pencil and a piece of paper and started drawing. It wasn’t like I’d planned to, but it just…happened. The figure was detailed greatly. Another cloak, except it wasn’t as dark, a bit lighter, and not so raggedy. My hand just kept writing, sketching, and drawing. I even tried to stop once. I ended up pulling another sheet of paper onto my desk, and then I began writing words, More Latin. I didn’t know these words. They were so hard to understand. My hand wouldn’t stop writing.

    “Stop,” I tried to command myself. Soon, I stopped writing and threw the pencil at the wall, tucking my hand close to my chest. I looked down at the figure and the words.

    “Addo of lux lucis , vestri nightmares may exsisto turpis , quod vestri pedes dies mos subsisto futurus vestri novus nightmare. Pario parvulus of phasmatis , quod imperium tractus of vestri solvo mos. Haud imperium quod haud succurro,” I screamed aloud as I saw red marks scratch down the paper. Like, someone was scratching it, with the red crimson color of blood. I ran over to my door and opened it, looking at another figure in a black cloak, with the hood raised above the head. I closed my eyes a screamed falling backwards. They stuck their hand out reaching for me.

    “Go away! Leave me alone!” I shouted starting to cry. The figure backed up and started to chuckle. It sounded human, almost. Behind the figure were a couple of other organization members. One with long silver hair and a scar in the shape of an ‘x’ right across his face. The other one was a smaller kid that looked my age, with blue eyes and spiked up hair. They were laughing along with the other figure that was standing in front of me. They removed their hood, and it was an older man, with an eye patch over his left eye, and a scar on his right cheek. They looked like the saw something and just laughed, which was what they did. I stayed on the ground and looked down, starting to cry. That was mean, and horrible. They just made me so mad, and yet I just wanted to sit there and cry. The person with the eye patch put his hand under my chin and tilted my head up.

    “What’s the matter sweetheart? You afraid of ghosts?” he asked still chuckling. I looked up, and he seemed pale. Paler than a…ghost

    “Whoa,” he said under his breathe. I felt myself stand up as he backed up a step. Wind surrounded my room, and shut the door, as he stood there.

    “Your name,” I said, in a demonic voice. My face was slanted as if I were in between looking straight, and at the floor. He hesitated, and breathed slowly.

    “X-Xigbar,” he said, standing close to the door. I chuckled, not knowing what was going on. I felt so mad, and I felt like…hurting someone.
    Solvo vestri ira. Solvo vestri odium. Quod Solvo vestri vox” was the words that went through my head.

    I don’t know how, but somehow I hissed at him, and the room got darker. The lights blew out, lightning started crackling, thunder started rolling, and the rain shattered onto the rooftop.

    “Who are you?” Xigbar asked, fearfully. He was shaking in fear from me. I felt bad now. I didn’t want to actually hurt anyone. That wasn’t me. How could I? It wasn’t me… It was something else, something taking control of me. I parted my soft lips, and said these words, forcefully.

    “Diabolus in vestri Eyes.” The room stopped blowing wind, and my head felt lighter. Everything was going so fast. It was blurry, and I was disorientated. The thing in my body left for now, and allowed my body to be free once more. My body clashed backwards onto the cold hard floor, making a loud thud sound. I was afraid now. I would always be afraid, and nothing, would be able to stop me.

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    Translations :D

    The words she wrote on the paper
    Addo of lux lucis , vestri nightmares may exsisto turpis , quod vestri pedes dies mos subsisto futurus vestri novus nightmare. Pario parvulus of phasmatis , quod imperium tractus of vestri solvo mos. Haud imperium quod haud succurro

    To give of light , your nightmares may to emerge unseemly , and your going on foot day will to stand to be your novel nightmare. To bear child of ghost , and sovereignty a dragging of your to loosen will. No sovereignty and no to run up under.

    Basically if you don't understand that, I wanted it to mean this

    Bringer of the light, your nightmares may be foul, and your walking days will cease to be your new nightmare. Bring forth the child of spirits, and control the movements of your free will. No control and no help.

    The words going through her head
    Solvo vestri ira. Solvo vestri odium. Quod Solvo vestri vox

    To loosen your anger. To loosen your hatred. And To loosen your cry

    Still if you don't know that I wanted it to mean

    Release your anger. Release your hatred. And Release your power


    The answer to Xigbar's question 'Who are you'
    Diabolus in vestri Eyes

    The Devil In Your Eyes


    I don't make this story go beyond anyone's beliefs in Ghosts, Spirits, or the Devil, but i do love paranormal activities and This is why I made up this story.
     
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    I use an English to Latin Translator

    the translations are at the bottom of the chapter :D
     
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    i really like this story!!

    its really different from everything ive read before! ^^
    keep it up! =D