I won

Discussion in 'Archives' started by robert the yogurt, Dec 14, 2008.

  1. robert the yogurt Traverse Town Homebody

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    Hey everybody I won a copetition called the big green poetry machine! MY poem will get published in a book called A world of difference - Verses from South West England. This is the poem.


    What we are doing?
    Green grass, thousands of trees.
    This is what our enviroment used to be.
    But look at what it has become.
    From green grass to sewage.
    From thousands of trees to cold stone buildings.
    From a powerful sheild called the ozone layer to melting ice caps.
    From millions of whales to an endangered species.
    Animals magically turn from friends to food.
    From sunshine to rainy days.
    From clean to toxic air.
    Green grass, thousands of trees.
    This is what our enviroment used to be.
    But look at what it has become.
    We are destroying it.
     
  2. Firefly Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Congratulations! And that's a great poem!
     
  3. robert the yogurt Traverse Town Homebody

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    Thanks I never actually thought I'd win it. I tried though and so I'm a 13 year old getting MY poem published!
     
  4. Juicy Chaser

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    Lol Ive had three of my poems published its not that rare :3


    But its a very good poem ~
    I like how you repeated "look what it has become" :3
     
  5. Catch the Rain As the world falls down ♥

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    Awww congrats hun that is great news <3

    Nice poem too ^^
     
  6. Redeyesblackdragon Twilight Town Denizen

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    Great, Is it coming to US or Just England in the book?

    One of the Best Poems ever.
     
  7. robert the yogurt Traverse Town Homebody

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    Oh come on the poems not that great and I'm not sure WHERE its coming out all I know is thats its in a section called the south west of england. And it DID say that poems were entered from over seas so I don't see why it wouldn't go to you. But the books over 10 pounds but it has loads of poems in it. I don't know how many people won but I do know over 10,000 were entered.