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  1. Odamadillo Twilight Town Denizen

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    The creator has returned to what he did make
    And now I shall sleep by a crystal lake
    My rhyme was short and easy to write
    But life is is a welcome sight
    More replies is what I do desire
    Fuel your own creative fire
    Mindstorm posts but Nas speaks true
    Thanks to you both and to dear Sayu.
     
  2. mindstorm787 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    You sound like a fool, my good-natured friend,
    I don't just post, I write and I write.
    And with this speech, under this dim light, I write,
    "I'm glad that you're back again and you never wait to the end."

    And I don't just write either,
    I'm more straightforward than the average meager,
    More slient than a mouse (Up to this point)
    Crazier than a lunatic, up to the joint.

    I may speak gibberish and titter all the while,
    But know by a mile,
    And this makes me smile,
    That I'm more than the average juvenile.

    So I thank thee, friend, for thy comment and thy praise,
    For this thread was beginning to faze,
    Let us continue,
    shaping and shaping this poetry maze
     
  3. nasirrich King's Apprentice

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    To me the fool is the one who uses a tool to write under dim light
    So that makes you more straightforward right?

    I'm here to embarrass clown rappers
    So I'll just run a marathon backwards
    Just because I'll still be here after
    The next person goes so clap for us sir

    I'm tired of people saying we the best thinking they're fresh
    You've been to Paris too much your grammar is a mess
    Guess Scramble won't help out at all yes

    Time to be random just because I feel so rad?
    If my photographer's happy could you picture me mad?

    Alright time to bring the heat since I know I'm realer
    Take Medusa's head out of my freezer because I'm a stone cold killer

    This is just me messing around with some spare time
    Super stoked for the next person to lay down a few rhymes
     
  4. Odamadillo Twilight Town Denizen

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    I call out to all who see
    What has become reality
    Our home has many empty rooms
    So escape your lifeless tombs
    Rhyme with a never ending smile
    And show the world you own style
    Oda has called out east to west
    So will you put yourself to the test?
     
  5. nasirrich King's Apprentice

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    When I take the test I make sure to pass it
    Why is it when I speak my mind I have to become elastic?
    Meaning I have to respect those that don't even deserve to be in this establishment
    No one here I just mean those that enjoy to create tragic
    Events lavish because they feel its rad when others get ecstatic the moment your try to spit a flow

    Do you get what it means when people say go?
    If likes is what you want don't be scared of the echo
    It may take some time, but soon it'll be cheers and chants hoping you continue to grow
    Speed is something that shouldn't bug you if this seems slow
    What have you provided to even be considered judgmental material?
    How is it you even expect to blow?
    A great start would be to post something in this spot and just continue to let them rhymes roll
     
  6. Tadashi Merlin's Housekeeper

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    I'm not much of a rhymer
    Especially publicly, I'm a first-timer
    I'm pretty shy and I don't mean to be a rude or homophobic kind of guy

    But I feel like I need to vent
    When these dudes at my work be looking like they're in Broke Back Mountain about to pitch a tent
    They can swear that they be straight but to me they look bent
    When I see what they do i wanna fly away like Clarke Kent

    I walk around the corner and see my co-worker twerk
    I say that's pretty gay and all of a sudden I'm a jerk?
    I feel like getting the hell outta dodge
    When I go in the warehouse and see them in a huddle saying #teamhandjob

    In my stand there's a guy who swears he's sly
    Says he spends time with girls and gets that cash to shower them with pearls
    Dude we get paid the same
    I know you use your little cash to try and get a chance to smash
    And ultimately fail and the girl's disses be hitting you like hail
    You guys are like Haha made you look, now you want me to lay on this dirty floor?
    I look you dead in you're eyes and say there's the door


    You guys range from 18-23 yet you're so juvenile
    So just sit there on little kid isle
    I'm here on adult island
    Go ahead and grumble like a troll
    Because you can't even begin to afford the toll

    I feel like demanding some reparation
    Because you're a disgrace to be called a Haitian
    So just drop out of your so called big kid race
    And please, oh please know your mental place....
     
  7. nasirrich King's Apprentice

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    Yea know your mental place
    A lot of the lames on this site are sluggish at making rp's great
    If you'd like to challenge me be sure to not underestimate
    I know for a fact these whack cats have no way of taking the bait

    Why is this so?
    Because I'm a terrible terrorist plot
    You're more like the character Carrot Top
    I'll continue to stomp on barriers until my era stops like a triceratops
    Even when I'm gone from this Earth you'll be dumbfounded that my bones have yet to rot

    But enough of the little taps to peoples jaw
    We'll all play a game like that movie we once Saw
    Incorporate some plays like the Titans so we're remembered by all

    Huh you think you're making a name for yourself because people quote what you did bro?
    Yea right keep making your point with broken fingers so
    Can do me a solid like a G.I. Joe?

    Get your entire crew and the fans who adore you too
    Just so I can take your shine
    Give it back to you just to say what you think is yours is mine
    Pass the mic so yet another person can kick some slick spits this time
    Enjoy what you see so you'll be able to have an open mind
    No disrespect to anyone on here for what is said in my 2nd, 3rd, and 4th lines
     
  8. KeybladeMasterJoe Merlin's Housekeeper

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    The underdog has returned again
    to spit out the rymthes that are bigger than him
    his story is legit
    he's true to his sh*t

    his love is his life
    the pain cuts like a knife
    these words couldnt be more true
    if it wasnt read from a goodnight moon

    his stories are always heard
    even if he seems alittle absurd
    he came to speak
    and he has spoken
    let these word you read become broken.
     
  9. Odamadillo Twilight Town Denizen

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    Nas you briught Joe along?
    Haha it seems your words are still strong
    My inspiration is weak these days I am afraid
    So very few rhymes can be made
    I ask you not to dis me inn any way
    Because I am sad almost each day
    I have a reason but that is mine keep
    Let's just say this sadness cuts deep.
     
  10. Ienzo ((̲̅ ̲̅(̲̅C̲̅r̲̅a̲̅y̲̅o̲̅l̲̲̅̅a̲̅( ̲̅̅((>

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    All your rhymes are marvelous! Keep it up!
    Anyway, I thought I'd pop in and say 'sup.
    Great idea Oda, but I think I told you that before
    All these rhymes, oh how I adore!
     
  11. Odamadillo Twilight Town Denizen

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    Spread across our community my friends
    And how to do so depends
    Your sig can carry the link
    Or tell about on profiles and pms I think
    Though I admit this rhyme is sub par
    It is just asking you to show everyone where we are!
     
  12. Lauriam I hope I didn't keep you waiting...

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    Hello poets, of which I am now one.
    I was invited to join in the fun.
    I've been rhyming for years, my grandpa taught me.
    In real life, I rhyme unintentionally.

    No, really, it makes my sister laugh hard
    when I try to talk normally and rhyme like a bard.
    But I can accept that I rhyme all I say.
    Besides, I think life is just more fun this way.
     
  13. Odamadillo Twilight Town Denizen

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    Marushi I welcome you to our humble abode
    There is no need here for any secret code
    Nasirrich, Tadashi, Ienzo, myself and Keyblade master Joe
    Are poets you will soon know
    I am my glad invitation you didn''t decline
    So as long and you have fun here everything is fine!
     
  14. Clawtooth Keelah se'lai!

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    I shall echo my comrade's glowing praise,
    Of this particular activity,
    The art of rhyme and meter, form and phrase
    Thus used to conversate organically.

    The pleasing rhythm of this discourse is,
    A feast to mind and ear and eye you see,
    Which swells my beating heart with perfect bliss,
    (I know that rhyme is half, don't lecture me),

    I shall, myself, keep watch over this thread,
    To watch your progress in this art of words.
    I do hope this shall ne'er be left for dead,
    Amidst the to and fro of posting herds.

    And as I leave for now, one final thing,
    Good luck to all and may your stanzas sing.
     
  15. Odamadillo Twilight Town Denizen

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    Another Mod joins the rhymer's home?
    I am pleased to this place did your eyes roam
    I know that rhyme is recycled from my sig
    But inn my mind why should I dig?
    For the joy of speaking inn rhyme is amazing
    I hope many other the tides do bring
    Our poetic home welcomes all wanders near
    And remember we all have a home here.
     
  16. nasirrich King's Apprentice

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    This is pure lyrical homicide no sodomize of course
    I'll stay dope even when they find me as a corpse
    I know these bars are fire just don't roll up when you view my Toxicology Report

    Glad to see more folks have come in adding their flow to this
    Just be very cautious for these words will make any Caption see sick
    No time to become complex but if the new folks do it my turn to be slick

    So for the folks who swear they don't spit whack
    All I see you do is making slick crap
    When we do it you know we got raw tracks
    You are hearing bars like your ears against Kit Kat

    Now its my turn to become more intense
    You'll use incense to enlighten those with no common sense
    Then prepare your defense as I try to condense this like keeping all the action at the end of the anime and cutting you off at the end to increase THE SUSPENSE!!!!

    Just call me the Lyrical Hitman
    The moment I find my target everything about them is dammed

    So if all the hating fakes could please try it
    Use your inner most thoughts then reply to this
    You wanna call me out, but can't reprieve sh**
    I'm real so I move in silence like a mute driving a new hybrid
    While you fakes try to cause an uproar in the library... BE QUIET!!!

    Here's how I know I'm just getting too excited
    My twisted thoughts are coming forth but don't worry they're just Twizzlers so BITE IT!!!

    So now I guess there's no one who could possibly rival
    kh-v poets and if you're still in denial
    I'm a dude who'll try to sue a dude who's suicidal
    I'll bite and pass the mic so this thread won't need a revival
     
  17. Lauriam I hope I didn't keep you waiting...

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    So I feel I've been challenged to a battle of the rhymers.
    rest assured my written word will blow your mind and inspire
    You to give it up, give it up, have you had enough?
    Forget this absurd idea that I don't know how to rap, how to tap out a beat, how to make you take your seat.
    Sit down. Boy, you don't know me at all. You make me take a fall, you make me crawl, until it all
    seems pretty hopeless but I'll just get back up.
    It's so repetitive.
    A negative definitive, a representative of a culture beyond recognition.
    What's this is that is there is gone is moving on, it's moving on and now it's gone,
    going beyond the song and behind the rhyme, I'm here to figure out the real reason behind the crime.
    The reason beyond pain, beyond gain, beyond the call to fame. It's so lame how tame we aim to claim.
    I don't want to sit down and watch the world pass me by,
    I don't want to lie down and stay awake until I cry.
    I don't want to shut down until I can't feel to try,
    I don't want to wake up when it's my time to die.
    I don't want to wake up when it's my time to die.
    I don't want to wake up just to find that I died.
    You feel that yet? You feel it? It's so repetitive.
    Let the music play in the background, plug the mic in, let the bass pound, set the sound.
    Give the record a spin, let the wannabes in, it's time for the open mic night.
    You alright? Feeling tight? The light's too bright to love the spotlight, it hurts your eyes.
    You realize there's more to life than this. There's something amiss. You feel no bliss.
    Is this all there is to life? Can you live up to what you once were and what you once wanted to be?
    Can you see who you are, do you know who you are or did you go too far?
    Take a step back to reflect.
    Take a step back to redirect.
    You can still make it from here. There's no fear, there's no weakness in starting over from the top.
    Give it all you got, till the music stops. Forget yesterday, don't worry about tomorrow.
    Live for today.
    Live for today, and tomorrow you won't hate yesterday.
    Tomorrow you won't hate yesterday.
    Tomorrow you'll be fine with yesterday.
    So I feel I've been challenged to a battle of the rhymers.
    Rest assured, my written word only serves to inspire.
     
  18. nasirrich King's Apprentice

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    No one was challenging you
    I'm letting you know those rhymes you have isn't worth being challenged boo
    If this was Oda's idea of a joke I'll get him for that too
    So if you'd like I'll direct my comments to Marushi this is true

    Silly trick you must not know I authorize my own all-access
    Your rhymes bore and here's the catch them vocals of yours will be snapped in
    Do your head like a panoramic roof leaving you marked absent

    Now when I step up Oda better notice it
    Chillin on the same boat Noah built
    Surfing on the same waters Moses split
    Guess this is poetry in motion, but I'll sit on your grave site... OVERKILL!!!

    Here's how I know you are worth another lip split
    I roll up like end credits in movies, but all your moves are scripted with the people I showed who directed it

    I guess now I've encountered another clown
    Now you have to jump through the hoops thinking your in a rhyme circuit, but you're the circus
    If the fire around the circles right in front of you I'll fire rounds
    Gun Pun intended to be extended, but no more since the mark is down
    Keep repeating your words I'm sure sooner or later you'll be able to find the right sounds

    So much for feeling tight I guess you must be conflicted
    Like a Boa finger lickin on the mouse and lizard it'll leave constricted
    Now that's what I call a smooth killer leaving only tread prints
     
  19. Tadashi Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Damn so much animosity, but I love this velocity
    We gotta take this thread to new heights but we shouldn't have random fights

    Marushi, Nas wasn't trying to pick you apart
    So I don't think you should take it to heart

    Anywho I haven't made a post in a while so I think I'm overdue
    It's always nice to see a new friend joining this rhyming trend
    Not one but two, it puts a grin on my face this is true
     
  20. Lauriam I hope I didn't keep you waiting...

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    Oh, so my rhymes aren't worth challenging? How interesting.
    And yet you bothered to reply with all that energy.
    You seem to have some sort of rivalry, don't let me get in the way.
    You go ahead and call him out, but don't dismiss me so flippantly.

    I may be a newbie, but don't count me out. I may be inexperienced, but I ain't down for the count.
    Call me a clown, that's just fine with me. I'll take it like I always have, that stuff don't phase me.
    In fact, it just amuses me, this makes me smile. I'm in it for the fun and I'm getting it.
    Even if my stuff's OVERKILL for the Lyrically Hitman's oh-so-chill pill it's all just for time to kill, I ain't nothing like the real deal.

    Oda didn't set this up, this was all me. I saw somebody spitting rhymes, and joined in for the melody.
    And actually, it seems to me you're alright, Mr. Lyrically.
    But seriously, don't target me, the newbie who writes poetry.
    I give you props, 'cause I love puns, the music stops and I am DONE.

    Good night, sleep tight, don't let the bedbugs bite. :)

    EDIT: How to say this in a rhyme...
    I understand, 'twas all in jest.
    No hard feelings? I'm just fine.
    nassirich, thanks for the epic test. :)