Traditional Art ....Did i really do this?

Wow... I am freaking out here. I can't believe I actually drew this with my own hands (along with the help of Paint Tool SAI, of course)

As usual, CnC please~~! I need to know where I can improve. Try to do like one good point and one thing I need to change... Thanks so much!!

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If you can't see it, here's the page...
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=31399301&tag=神宮寺レン

 

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Here's some advice: Ditch the animu and start doing realism. It'll help you out a lot.

As for some flaws on your dude..... Well it's an anime style drawing so really there's no point in pointing out the flaws since it's not really like. You know. Make his eyes closer together.

 

I agree that you should concentrate on realism first before doing anime but it doesn't mean you can't draw anime style drawings as I think this is really good. You can still critique manga artwork.

Anyway, the only complaint I have is that there is somethnog not quite right with his eye- it's a bit too big and should probably be closer to his nose.

Apart from that I think you did the proportions really well and the hair has a proper flow and you've used some good shading. Keep it up!