LINK Works been slow...I've been a little sick and got side tracked. I've also not put something up for a while. Still working on Fran. :sweatdrop: Drawing her face is a bitch. But here's a small sketch of a Dancer and Kupo I did last year. I came across it in my pile of forgotten works. Enjoy? CnC is appreciated. =]
pretty good, but Dancer seems to stiff for well "Dancer" making her look a little more fluid will do the job and the moogle needs to be plumper
Would adding little movement lines make it more fluid? Or should I make her a little more like jell-O? She was mostly twitching more than "dancing" on screen when I drew her. I should draw a Dusk with her next time. :3 And that moogel was...anorexic. Ah, so that's what was wrong with the Moogle.
i think making her arms in different placement would be better at least xD but i supposed you can try the lines
I think it's her posture that's making her look stiff. I also like your idea. I'll use both the lines and the hands in a different position next time. Thanks~
I like the drawing as a whole,but I agree with reptar on this,the dancer does look a bit stiff. Also,her left foot looks odd to me,maybe because it's facing forward and the other one isn't. The moogle is cute,I liked the way you drew it,came out nicely. I think the only thing is some of the features of the dancer,although it's a nice drawing all in all.
The reference for the dancer was KHII...literally. I turned on the game and went through Jiminy's journal till I came across her, kept the screen and drew her. Haha. She was on screen as she is now. :sweatdrop: However, thank you~ Lol, thank you~
Awesom moogle xD. I'm thinking the dancer looks a bit too...Still for a dancer...I think if you made it a bit more loose it'd look alot better
Ah,I actually used to draw like that,lookin' at jiminy's journal. x3 Your welcome~ You're a good artist.
I like it, you're quite good. I am with everyone else on the Dancer's "stiff"ness, but I use to do all my drawings of DBZ (::L:) like that so it looks fine. The Moogle is good. c:
Thank you all for the CnCs. I honestly appreciate it. It's good to have people give honest critique. Unlike before when people were too afraid to say anything at all about my drawings. :.-.:
