dahlia-petals meaningless poetic thoughts..

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  1. dahlia-petals Merlin's Housekeeper

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    the thoughts of a loveless, pointless nobody go here..


    I.

    i want love in a paper cup
    tip it over, drink it up
    always easier said than done
    i'm still a flower.. @-,-'--
    without a sun
    </3
     
  2. Korosu Kingdom Keeper

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    I d'awed so much. That little piece was cute! I liked it. Just watch your grammar and be careful not to use smiley faces, it ruins the effect, imo at least.

    Nice, I guess~
     
  3. dahlia-petals Merlin's Housekeeper

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    i love smile faces )^=..
    but i do overuse them. </3
     
  4. Vexen<3 Merlin's Housekeeper

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    I loves chu, Mar Mar! *huggles* And I like your smilies too. Don't be sad~ And hurry up and come home so you can be back on forums.
     
  5. Technic☆Kitty Hmm

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    Cute. It was short sweet and to a point, I like it *thumbs up* I think it would be nice to read some more of your work ^_^
     
  6. Plums Wakanda Forever

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    Awww, that was really cute. ;~;

    I liked the metaphor of the first line, and just overall d'awww. ;___;

    Like Koruso said, just try to watch grammar a bit (as well as the smiley faces). Otherwise, hope you post more soon!
     
  7. Dinny I am Anime ( ⚈้̤͡ ◡ ⚈้̤͡ )

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    This is really adorable and so so kawaii <33333

    I agree, I am totally in love with the first line.

    I feel like I can see this on those super adorable korean notebooks and pencil cases with the little poetry in the bottom and stuff. That's just ever so lovely. I love them, I have a couple xD
    But yeah, I see something like this on here. You should share moar ~~~ <3