Club Smokes

Club Smokes, started business not too long ago, gangs calling turf as soon as the Club opened its doors. Gang Dark Heaven, first to call the Club, is one of biggest gangs in New York City. Members of the gang cover the floors of Smokes with girls left and right. Mr. Smith, the owner of the Club, hired one undercover agent to see if the Club is safe on the streets, and other possibilities. But one late night, a young exotic dancer was killed in a sexual assault, with a suspected Dark Heaven Gang Member. They have no lead, but are most sure for the Gang's involvement. The exotic dancer was also very close to Mr. Smith, who is paying double for the finding of the murderer. More undercover agents are being sent as I tell you this, and there is one already investigating the Gang's activities. Suddenly, an exotic dancer comes out, and tells the FBI that she knows more then anyone at the scene. They bring her in arrest, and are questioning her.

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***Okay. This is how it goes. I say who the Undercover Agents is. It's a first-come, first-serve base. You can't just fill it out saying that you are one. Okay? BUT you can say that you are an FBI Agent investigating. That just means that you can't interact as much as the undercover agents. 'Kay?
Rules:
1. PG13. I know this is a Club, but please, think if teenagers are there. (There probably will be...)
2. Cursing is allowing. *'s please.
3. If you read this, type 'Put your hands in the Ayer!' in your post. XD
4. No more then 4 Characters. Thanks.
5. If you love me, you will comment my profile, and add me as a friend. ;D

Character Form:
Username:
Character Name:
Gender:
Age:
Race:
Appearance:
Bio:
Personality:
Weapon:
Occupation:
Anything Else?:

Characters:
Lillian 'Lilly' Garrison: roxasissomebody/RIS
Robert Smith AKA: Mr.Smith: roxasissomebody/RIS
Charles King AKA: Charlie: Fayt-Harkwind
Norah MacIntosh: Virtago Haven
Adrian Harris: Starkiller *ArchAwsomeman

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Username: roxasissomebody/RIS
Character Name: Lillian 'Lilly' Garrison
Gender: Female
Age: 22
Race: White
Appearance: http://x3d.xanga.com/a738577322648214110750/m167289318.jpg
She looks like that when she is with other agents, but when she is at the club, she wears a white dress, that reaches her knees, that flairs.
Bio: Lilly was a FBI Agent since she graduated from College, and works for the NYPD. She works with psychotic behavior, as well as Gang related incidents. Her mother and father were killed in a shooting on the streets of New York, from the Dark Heaven Gang, when she was 16. Ever since then, she has been against gangs, and hopes to take gangs out of New York City for good.
Personality: Determined, Listening, Ambitious, And Quiet Around New People.
Weapon: Self-Defense, nearest hard, or sharp, object.
Occupation: Undercover/Special Agent
Anything Else?: Put Your Hands In The Ayer! ;D

Username: roxasissomebody/RIS
Character Name: Robert Smith AKA: Mr. Smith
Gender: Male
Age: Early 50's
Race: White
Appearance: Grey and Black hair, About 6'2, Likes to wear nice shirts with black slacks.
Bio: Mr. Smith is a ladies man, and loves to work at his club through-out the night. He makes sure that nothing goes wrong, so he won't have to close for the night. He has one daughter, named Millie, and she works as an exotic dancer. She suddenly was murdered as a result of Mr. Smith fighting with her. He thinks it is his fault.
Personality: Laid-Back, Serious, Humorous, and Busy
Weapon: Huge Baseball Bat and Shot Gun
Occupation: Owner of Club Smokes.
Anything Else?: Put Your Hands In The Ayer!

Username: Fayt-Harkwind
Character Name: Charles King
Gender: male
Age: 22
Race: white
Appearance:
Bio: He was raised in England and has a distinct northen accent. he was sent to America to evaluate the FBI for MI6 and got put in on case. Only the FBI boss knows he's from MI6.
Personality: rather quiet yet wise when he opens his mouth
Weapon: Twin 45. calibur handguns
Occupation: MI6 agent evaluating the FBI as an agent
Anything Else?: he has very good hearing

Username: Veritgo Haven
Character Name: Norah MacIntosh
Gender: Female
Age: 21
Race: White
Appearance:
Bio: A good actress. Her older brother was killed in a drive-by 6 years back. She pursued a career as an FBI agent as soon as she graduated from post-secondary school.
Personality: Determined, yet laid back (if that makes sense).
Weapon: 40 caliber handgun. Is a black belt in Kempo Karate.
Occupation: FBI Agent
Anything Else?: I do this right, yah? ;D

Username: Starkiller
Character Name: Adrian Harris
Gender: Male
Age: 23
Race: White
Appearance: Wears a white hoodie and dark blue jeans. Underneath he wears a plain black t-shirt. Long black hair, brown eyes, and stands at about 6 feet tall.
Bio: His family died a few years ago in a car "accident". Adrian knows it was never an accident but never found the ones responsible for killing his family, all of them worked for the FBI at one point in their lives. Once worked for the FBI until he was kicked off for using...his own methods of getting clues. He doesn't like following the book and can tend to resort to violence to find out what he needs to know.
Personality: Has a dark sense of humor, can get mad easily, a bit of a pessimist, yet he still likes trying to make new friends when he isn't threatening people.
Weapon: 50 cal revolver and CQC.
Occupation: Private detective.
Anything Else?: He's very observant.

Username: DSK
Character Name: Jeff Herman
Gender: Male
Age:24
Race: Caucasian (aka, white)
Appearance:
Bio: He was on his day off when it happened, but had wanted to work anyway. He blames himself for not being there to save her.
Personality: Can be nice, but doesn't take kindly to riff-raff.
Weapon: Katana, but it's mainly for show. He only uses it when absolutely nessicary. He mainly uses his fists.
Occupation: Bouncer at the club.
Anything Else?: Brother of the killed dancer

Username: DeadlyxMascara
Character Name: Charlotte Gilliand
Gender: Female
Age: 20
Ethincity: Caucausion
Appearance:
Bio: her best friend of 8 years was a tv reporter who was killed in oe of her airings, by 2 gangs having a war... one being dark heaven. Having the grades she went to uni to become a police officer, but became a detective instead.
Personality: very soft, wont speak unless she is spoken too, but can pick things up easily
Weapon: a hand gun? i dont know the difference between guns
Occupation: detective

Username: Daxma
Character Name: Jack
Gender:Male
Appearence: Black jacket,black boots and black cargo pants.Has blurry white eye's because his eye's are blind.
Race: Human
Bio: He lived in New York for most of his life and people thought short of him because of his blindness but there short sightedness was unfounded for because of this all of his other senses and physical abilities peaked up 100X.He would be able to hear a single heart beat out of a giant crowd of people.He used a power he had in a unique way.He sent pulses into the ground like sonar to see everything around him in detail.He is a vigilanty within New York city seeking those who do wrong.
Personality: He can be very socaible if you gain his trust.
Weapon: A pure Steel and red cane with a steel version of the nobody dragon scaling up the cane as the handle.
Anything Else?: He's aged 17 and is in search of meaning and purpose which he finds in justice.Carries the cane with him everywhere and if thrown away from him he can summon it back.

Username: Last of the Organization
Character Name: Louis Samuelson (Nickname:
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Race: Human
Appearance: http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l1...20guys/002.jpg
Bio: His mother worked as a waitress in bars all her life and had run off with some man, his father was in prison. He had basically been abandoned and was forced make his own living, mostly by being a drug dealer.
Personality: Quiet unless he knows the person, appears dumb however is quite clever, knows a few tricks and tips to avoiding cops.
Weapon: Beretta, concealed behind his jacket.
Occupation: Drug Dealer (If this is not an acceptable occupation please let me know and I will change it)
Anything Else?: He usually hangs around different clubs on certain days.

 

Username: Fayt-Harkwind
Character Name: Charles King
Gender: male
Age: 22
Race: white
Appearance:
Bio: He was raised in England and has a distinct northen accent. he was sent to America to evaluate the FBI for MI6 and got put in on case. Only the FBI boss knows he's from MI6.
Personality: rather quiet yet wise when he opens his mouth
Weapon: Twin 45. calibur handguns
Occupation: MI6 agent evaluating the FBI as an agent
Anything Else?: he has very good hearing

put your hands in ayer or something like that

 

*Since you are first person to post, you are going to be an undercover agent. B]

Ohh, You're inn. BD

 

fair enough, it kinda works anyway XD

 

Username: Vertigo Haven
Character Name: Norah MacIntosh
Gender: Female
Age: 21
Race: White
Appearance:
Bio: A good actress. Her older brother was killed in a drive-by 6 years back. She pursued a career as an FBI agent as soon as she graduated from post-secondary school.
Personality: Determined, yet laid back (if that makes sense).
Weapon: 40 caliber handgun. Is a black belt in Kempo Karate.
Occupation: FBI Agent
Anything Else?: I do this right, yah? ;D

Username: Vertigo Haven
Character Name: Fallon Blair
Gender: Female
Age: 18
Race: White
Appearance:
Bio: She dropped out of high school, only because of peer pressure. She was kicked our of her parents house. Now desperate to survive, she has joined Club Smokes.
Personality: Tough. Quiet, but not shy.
Weapon: A swiss army knife she has in her pocket. Kept sharpened.
Occupation: None
Anything Else?: So, I is doing dis right? xDDDD

 

Okayy!
We'll start when one more person starts.
XD

 

Username: DSK
Character Name: Jeff Herman
Gender: Male
Age:24
Race: Caucasian (aka, white)
Appearance:
Bio: He was on his day off when it happened, but had wanted to work anyway. He blames himself for not being there to save her.
Personality: Can be nice, but doesn't take kindly to riff-raff.
Weapon: Katana, but it's mainly for show. He only uses it when absolutely nessicary. He mainly uses his fists.
Occupation: Bouncer at the club.
Anything Else?: Brother of the killed dancer

Put your hands in the Ayer!

 

Okay. We can Start. ;D

Lillian Garrison strode into her hotel room, stressed, and tired from her job at work today. She found out something about the case, but it had to wait untill morning. She slowly started the shower, and suddenly, her cell phone vibrated on the counter. She picked it up.
"Hello?" She said, as she listened for an answer.

Mr. Smith jogged down the stairs to his club, as the Janitors cleaned the rugs and drinks left from the customers. It was 4:00 AM, and He wasn't an inch tired. He strode through the front hall, and waved a short 'hello' to the Bartender. He went into the hidden door, that was to the right of the bar.

 

Jeff was sitting in his bed, his shift over. He knew that he must find the one who killed his sister and bring them to justice.

 

Username: DeadlyxMascara
Character Name: Charlotte Gilliand
Gender: Female
Age: 20
Ethincity: Caucausion
Appearance:
Bio: her best friend of 8 years was a tv reporter who was killed in oe of her airings, by 2 gangs having a war... one being dark heaven. Having the grades she went to uni to become a police officer, but became a detective instead.
Personality: very soft, wont speak unless she is spoken too, but can pick things up easily
Weapon: a hand gun? i dont know the difference between guns
Occupation: detective

 

Lilly heard answer of a black man, saying 'Are you the shorty to the pimp named 'HotBox'?'. Lilly thought in disgust of the name. She answered in a 'No. Why?' She said, hoping he would stop talking soon. He only hung up. Lilly shrugged, and started to undress for her shower. (OOC: NO MORE ABOUT HER UNDRESSING!)

Mr. Smith was in a back room, in the VIP room, with more girls in it, but no men. He smiled, and walked through the drunk girls, and went to the end of the room, and walked through another hidden door. This one looked not very clean or decorated, but he saw some men smoking, and playing cards. "May I men ask you about the gang in my club?" He asked, knowing they knew everything or anything about the Club. Some men were tough, and two were black men. They didn't look friendly, but Mr. Smith walked forward, towards the table.

 

Charles walked down the road to Club Smokes, he had onlyarrived in America for a few days and was assigned something like this. He entered the club dressed as a civilian.

 

After Lilly jumped out of the shower, she got ready to go back to work. She had to meet Mr. Smith at the Club before 7:00, so he can close up completly. She dressed in a shirt/dress, and leggings underneath, and headed out the door. She was just down the street, and she aproached the Bouncer, who was almost asleep. She walked in, and waited by the Bar, as she made small talk with the Bartender.

Mr. Smith heard the door censor ring, and left the room. He went through the room of women without saying hello this time, and saw Lillian by the Bar. He aproached, and sat beside her. "Good Morning. Early for you?" He asked, trying to get her to get close to him.

 

Jeff's alarm went off, signaling it was time for him to head to work. He got up and grabbed his katana, putting it on his back. His sister had given it to him. He headed out the door and into his car.

 

oh sorry

put your hands in the ayer

 

Charles looked at a suspicious looking guy who took a look at him then went to the bar.