Discussion in 'Retirement Home' started by Mysty, May 6, 2014.
Buhh I couldn't think of any good powers for her so I just placed her as a human instead X_X
Character Name: Poke
Appearance: Height is 5'8', spiky hair, cyan eyes, black coat and red t-shirt, dark-blue jeans and black-white shoes.
Bio: It wasn't until an incident involving an exploding soccerball that Poke realized what he could do. At first, people were afraid, but his old friends, who knew of his cheery and joke-cracking behavior, were able to convince him that he could be as humane as the next human. Poke was happy, but his parents always encouraged them to stay away, them being rather discriminatory. When Poke had enough, he dropped his name and left his family, being helped by a friend in making a new home in Organna. He named himself after a few humorous incidents where, during the early days where his powers were uncontrollable, anything he poked would end up with a small explosion in its face.
Primary Power*: Explosive Matter - He can form matter by releasing a white gas that he can manipulate to shift in to a hovering shape. What ever he puts out can become a solid, and when it's hit hard enough, it'll explode. If he releases it as just a regular gas, then it'll have to be ignited to go ka-boom. The amount of power depends on how much energy he puts in to it, ranging from fireballs the size of small firecrackers to dynamite explosions. He has a finite pool of gas, and it is constantly regenerating. However, when he's used every bit of it, he can not draw out any more power until the bar's set back to 100%. He is able to tell(With slight difficulty)how much amount of energy he has left. He can also train himself to increase his limit.
Inherited Power*: Healing factor - Healing is at superhuman levels
-limit : His factor is greatly reduced(A knife wound would take more than a day to fully heal) , so while his healing is just above average(Definitely not superhuman as described above), it won't be much help in a fight if he's constantly getting pounded. And if he takes enough damage, then his inherited power won't work at all until he gets out of battle.
Weapon: Besides his power, a yo-yo and a matchbox. No, seriously, an actual, pretty tough, but otherwise regular yo-yo. He's pretty good with it, too.
Starting Location: Human District
Other: Since his explosives blow up on his command, or from being forced to, then if you can pull off some Kung-Fu Panda tricks, you can direct the matter back at him, or at anyone else.
Theme: Reverse Situation - Naruto Shippuden
Multiple issues here:
Primary Power - I'm all good for him having the ability to excrete gas and solidify it, however being able to force it to explode through sheet will power and mind control is a big no. Controlling the explosion's direction is a no too. It exploding is okay because there are some materials that do explode from extreme sudden pressure, but it would have to be manually achieved by either punching it or throwing it.
Secondary Power - The kind of recovery is fine but the time isn't. Minutes no, hour/hours yes.
-limit - not sure if you want to change it according to the above information or not.[DOUBLEPOST=1400192592][/DOUBLEPOST]
Human it is! If you need help with powers, please ask me for assistance, I'm always willing.
The funny thing is, when I mentioned the knife wound thing, I meant for that to apply to someone that had that ability as a primary power. For Poke, I meant for it to be totally different. A knife wound would take more than just a few hours to fully heal. I'll edit the wording
As for the things related to his primary power, I'll get to those too. I hope me adding in him being able to release it as just explosive gas works. If not, I'll take that out. Also added a matchbox to his weapons.
Alright, edits are in.
Okay, that's much better. As he is now, its Accepted.[DOUBLEPOST=1400235930][/DOUBLEPOST]Username: Myst
Character Name: Feo
Bio: A lustor who saw no joy in happiness. The only joy he received was from the displeasure of others. The people who tried to become friends with him... killed. His parents that loved him so much... killed. Those that could laugh... killed. Blood had been spilled onto his hands. Some who heard his name knew what he was, a demon. Not a lustor, not a human, but a being who only wished for the extinction of all life for his simple laughter. Now, a war is coming and he only wishes to make it move along quicker. He decides to aid each side to make the upcoming battle even more bloody then it would be originally.
Primary Power*: Mitosis - The ability to split one's self into multiple projections. At this current time he can only split himself into 2 beings
Inherited Power*: Reverse Triple-Alpha- The ability to convert Carbon molecules into Helium molecules at will allowing Flight to be achieved.
-limit: Cannot breathe during Reverse Triple-Alpha.
Starting Location: Both the Human and Lustor districts.
Other: Can hold his breath for about two minutes.
Character Name: Jedediah
Bio: One of the higher ups in the human faction. He considers himself the Anti-Orpheus, and wants more than anything to overcome him. While Orpheus contributes to his faction by supplying them with an army of undead, Jedediah considers himself to deliver evened odds as an "army of one". His relentless assault on Orpheus has given him the largest kill count in the human faction, if undead is counted. Even in terms of just enemy soldiers, he's near the top. He doesn't know he's a lustor, simply believes himself to be a human with god given powers to lead humanity to salvation.
Primary Power*: Manual reflex. Is capable of performing incredibly quick and accurate actions and motions normally only possible through instinctual reflexes at will.
Inherited Power*: Delayed exhaustion. Feels no repercussions from strenuous physical activity until hours after it has been performed. Giving him the ability to perform a tireless charge
-limit: When the exhaustion from his actions hit, it hits all at once. Making it hard to gauge his limits and making him incredibly vulnerable if it occurs in fights. As his power increases, he will have a bit of control over when it hits, and can dull the effects.
Weapon: Galantine and Avalon (it's a shield not a sheath)
Starting Location: Neck deep in undead.
Other: Considers himself on a mission from god, to save humanity from ruin and defeat the unholy undead that plague the land and their master. Thinks of himself as a paladin.
Theme: Doooooom is all around~
Accepting what could be one of the most broken primary powers.
Character Name: Gawain Griffin
Gawain is either a hybrid or a freak, depending on which parent you asked. His mother a lustor and his father a human, their love would be frowned upon by either race, but that didn't stop them. They gave birth to two children, both males. The first they named Stefano, and the second Gawain. However, just a little before the birth of Gawain the parents split, leaving Stefano with his father, who would raise his son to live the life of a human.
Gawain was always left out of things as a small child, rejected by many for his blood alone, no matter how powerful or worthy he proved himself to be. This didn't change as he got older, and he found himself enlisting in the group of lustors that served Lord Mordecai, however due to his blood he knew that no matter what he did, no matter how important the tasks he fulfilled, he would always be nothing more than a grunt. He accepted this and dedicated himself to serving Mordecai and keeping the humans under check, although he is still quite often treated worse than garbage.
Primary Power*: Increased strength:
Gawain is much, much stronger than your average lustor, to the point that he could probably lift up The Warden with a small degree of difficulty, but by no means has super strength (to begin with).
Weapon: The sword you see in his picture.
Starting Location: Outside the human district, among the npc lustors and undead.
Other: Is Hunter's brother.
I see the ability more as having the muscles within him to be more dense allowing for twice the norm for lifting and strength. Either way, accepted.
Today is Saturday (for me at least since we have an Aus with us). As such, tonight I will be updating the grid.
Character Name: Gale Lumia
Appearance: Totally not one of Moksha's characters
Bio: Someone who has not had the best start on life. His powers decided to showcase themselves almost immediately after birth, turning his entire body into basically a rock. Because of this, his body had a very hard time actually working and coping with a body of made of stone, and so there was an immediate threat of him dying. However, this power switched off before he could cross that very fine line between life and death, and managed to be saved. This sort of process went on for a good deal of time in his life, making the boy adopt an odd mentality. He could die at any given moment, and it could come out of literally no where. So, he basically learned how to stop being sad. With that, he's basically gone through life being happy at any given opportunity...including moments where one would expect the visible emotion to be anger. Regardless, he sort of just lives life with a carefree demeanor and strolls through whatever situation with a smile on his face.
Primary Power: Geo Plating: The ability to turn any portion of his body into to stone in order to increase his strength and defensive capabilities. Unfortunately, it is still making him rock...and so he weighs more and as such, slows down when in use.
Inherited Power: Sonic Pressure: The ability to vibrate his own molecules at such a speed that he starts to soften things that are touching him, making them a lot easier to punch through.
Weapon: Unarmed fighting...so just punching and kicking and stuff.
Starting Location: Lustor District
Theme: Yeah I got nothing
Love it. Accepted. You don't have to limit yourself so much by the way. There only needs to be one limit meaning either A. the weight doesn't really affect him, or B. He doesn't deteriorate from vibration. You can still have both, just want to say you don't have to.
Oh...okay then. Edited out the sonic pressure limit then.
First to get upgrades
Orpheus: Can withdraw the blood from undead, thus rendering it unusable but quickly healing him it process.
Beuce: Can breathe fire. Yes. Breathe fire.
Cierra's upgrade. Transfer some blood directly into the chains heating them almost instantly and they can reach the same temperature as her blood, boiling point. (100C) Not hot enough to melt anything but would leave severe burns.
Upgrade for Sven: Bones now cost a smallish amount of blood to generate, cost is the same for retractionn/detachment.
Upgrade for Hunter: Physical strength increased.
Updated the OC with your enhancements.
Character Name: Lilith
Bio: Raised an orphan, Lilith never knew any sense of family. She was raised by a kind stranger, who gave her food, shelter, and a place to call home. As she got older, Lilith grew less and less attached to her savior. He was too boring for her, so she made the decision to leave. Packing her things, the girl took what food the man had and then utilized her ability to leave the home in seconds. Travelling across the lustor district, she sought some form of entertainment, some way to cure her boredom. She found it in the human district with the one known as Jedediah. She knew from the moment she met him that he was a lustor, but he seemed very convinced that he was not a regular human, but a "gift from god". This belief was entertaining to her and very amusing, so she made the decision to stay in the human district and take whatever treasures she found, all while reinforcing the idea that Jedidiah really is "the gift from god".
Primary Power*: Lustor Sense - Very simple. Can tell whether somebody is a lustor or not, but before upgrades can't sense what powers they may or may not have.
Inherited Power*: "Molecular dispertion" (teleportation)
-limit: Cannot "blink" further than 5 metres at a time.
Weapon: Dual daggers
Starting Location: Human District
Other: Is bisexual, and deceptively manipulative.
Character Name: Outlaw (Stephan Marks)
Bio: After a falling out with Mordecai, Stephan decided to leave Mordecai's ranks. Stephan still wanted to uphold law and order just not Mordecai's. He decided to contract himself out to various smaller, mostly human run jails under the alias Outlaw, due to that being what he had become when he left. Although being a luster that was something that Outlaw kept to himself. He never told anyone about it especially not those who hire him. The only time people would discover it would be right before they met a brutal end. Right now Outlaw is contracted out to the Warden working alongside him, never under him.
Primary Power*: Ability to make his skin into a scaly like armor to protect himself. (Currently can be as strong as chain male)
Inherited Power*: Can hear truths in peoples words.
-limit He cannot lie himself.
Starting Location: Luster Distric
Other: Outlaw is talented at dodging questions since he is unable to lie. He does not reveal his true name to anyone either. He discarded real name to take up the name outlaw.
Character Name: Nickel Jackson
Bio: A mercenary recruited by Mordecai from a distant continent, he has a rather uninteresting backstory, but is a dedicated soldier. Currently, he's working as a spy.
Primary Power*: Superhuman Speed
Inherited Power*: Muscle Memory. If it is within his capabilities, when he sees an action performed, he can then perform that action.
-limit: He must physically be able to perform the action, and cannot copy lustor powers. His speed is limited to running, and cannot perform other actions at higher than normal speeds.
Weapon: Begins with crossbows and moves onto a gun.
Starting Location: Human district
Other: Is good with martial arts, and a skilled thief when he needs to be.
Character Name: Oz "Grim" Valker
Bio: From a early age Oz has had the uncanny ability to control his blood. Because of this early development of his powers, he found it difficult to interact with other people due to his little control over his powers. In the end he started to separate himself from other people to the point where the only ones that he spoke with were the birds that flew around him. As time went one, he gradually developed enough control over his powers to prevent them from acting up and causing problems. Unfortunately that was the end of one of his problems and the start of another. Upon turning 10 his parents were killed and Oz lost his arm as a result of him trying to exact payback. Wounded, armless and alone, the young boy wandered the Lustor district, begging for help, but no one would aid him in anyway. In fact he soon collapsed, fully expecting to die when he next awoke in a bed being treated in the human district. 11 years was spent in the human district, healing, getting used to doing things with only one arm and somewhere in the middle of those years a hatred of lustors grew. While he knew that he couldn't hate all the lustors, the hatred he harbored was directed at the ones more deserving of it. So he ended up becoming a vigilante, not for justice nor for vengeance, but more of an order keeper of sorts(I guess, I can't think of a better way to word his reasoning)
Primary Power*: Can manipulated any external blood into any form he wishes
Inherited Power*: Is able to understand and speak with birds
-limit: Can only form a certain amount of things from his blood before he is affected with blood loss
Starting Location: Lustor District
Other: He is indeed missing an arm
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