Blood will spill Tonight

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Sumi, Sep 6, 2008.

  1. Sumi suicidé

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    push and pull
    all that upstate bull
    fight me with your hands
    before i send you to holy lands

    the devil, satan, is waiting
    through the fire you are wading
    settle this like a man
    not like your brother, who ran

    afraid to hit a girl?
    into a ball i'll make you curl
    before i give up this fight
    blood will spill tonight

    on this backroad path
    you will feel my wrath
    your brother made the same mistake
    and his life, i did take

    i may be a girl,
    my hair put up in curls,
    wearing a sunday dress
    god, you'll be a mess

    and once your blood has spilled
    and my empty heart has filled
    you'll know that you weren't right
    and that blood spilled tonight
     
  2. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    that sounds like such a strong and.....tomboish poem.

    i was so amazed by it, the words are really strong.

    specially the theme.

    just dont kill anyone..k?
     
  3. Sumi suicidé

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    lol...ur too late. i killed the dude in my math class who got an earaser stuck in my hair (long story). jk. thanx, i'm not very good...but i'm gonna submit my poems to get published soon.