Axel's good deeds

Make the fourth chapter soon! I want to know how Axel's going to help Roxas ask Larxene out!!!

 

That's really awesome!

 

Very nice! ^-^

Wait... Marluxia asking out Vexen....? O.o;

XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

*was gonna vote for the first one, but votes for that just because she thinks it'll be hilarious to see*

 

okay.. The votes are in!!!!!!

looks like Axel will help him by:


DA DA DA DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!



ASKING OUT VEXEN! YAY!!!!!! (lol)

I will try to post it withing the next 10-20 minutes

but, Luxord is next. I already have an idea of him needing help with gambling. I need ideas! I'm the writer and your the reader.... I need your opinions!

 

How do you write so fast?! O.o;

OH! and help Luxord out by having him ask out XIGBAR! =D

*punched by both Luxord AND Xigbar*

 

Axel's Good Deed Quiz......

Okay If you've been paying attention, I will ask you a question...


What did Larxene say as an excuse to get out of the meeting?

Hint: Chapter 1

 

Cool! I liked this one :)

 

I'm really good with computors and I can even type without looking at the keyboard. I'm doing it right now! lol

I'm half-way done... and It's Hilarious!

 

Oh.... I'm a really bad typer. XD;

Maybe that's why it always takes so long... >.>;

 

great great and GREAT!

 

WHAT THE.....?

Roxas is 15!!!! And Larxene's like 20!!!!!

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*shrugs* They do make a cute couple :)

Awesome work! I can't wait to read the next one!!! :D

 

Axel's Good Deed's Chapter 5

Chapter 5

Axel woke up from another loud crash in the middle of the night, but this time, it came from the hallway.
“Can’t I ever get some sleep? He said getting out of bed.
He saw Marluxia sneaking into Vexen’s room and coming back out.
“Marly! What are you doing?†Axel screamed while whispering.
Marluxia jumped scared to death.
“Nothing important, just go back to bed,†Marluxia suggested.
“I can’t with you making all that noise,†Axel said while shutting the door.

---------------------The next Morning-----------------------

Axel woke up, got dressed, and combed his hair.
He walked down the stairway and into the kitchen. Marluxia was there.
“What was that all about last night?†he asked Marluxia.
“Oh… um…Axel, can I trust you?†Marluxia asked.
“Sure, what is it?†asked Axel.
“I am kind of in love with Vexen,†he said.
Axel said, “Okay.†He got up from his seat.
“I am going to walk away, and we will never speak of this again,†Axel said.
“Please help me! You helped Roxas and Larxene!†Marluxia said.
“Yeah, but they are the opposite sex though!†Axel said.
“Please,†Marluxia said.
“Alright, I’ll go talk to him,†Axel said.
“Thanks,†Marluxia said.

Axel walked up to Vexen’s room.
“Hey Vexen, you’ve got a secret admirer,†Axel said.
“Who?†asked Vexen.
“Marluxia,†answered Vexen. Vexen started to smile.
“Will you ask him to come up here, I got a surprise for him†asked Vexen.
“Sure, but did you know it was him?†asked Axel.
“No, but someone left me a note on my table wanting to meet me in here,†Vexen explained.
“Okay,†Axel said while running down the stairs into the kitchen.
Hey Marluxia, Vexen wants to meet you in his room,†Axel said.
“Thanks a bunch!†yelled Marluxia as he ran up the stairs.
Axel smiled.

A few hours later he walked up the stairs, but he heard some noises coming from Vexen’s room. He stood next to the closed door to hear what is going on.
"Mmm that’s so good," Vexen said.
"Feels good too" he said again
"Especially right there!" he yelled
"What? Really? Let me try!"
"Ya! Right there!" Vexen said again
"Oww. stop yanking! It's not like it's all gone" Marly said
"Ha-ha. Sorry. Mmm that's really good," Vexen said
"GAH! Aww crap, it's dripping!" Marly said
"Man sorry about that. You can't control it," Vexen said
"It's okay, we can lick it up," Marly said
"Oh good idea," Vexen said.
"But not there! That tickles!" Marly said
"WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON IN HERE?" Axel yelled
He saw Vexen and Marly eating a salty sweet ice cream.
"Uhh, you want one?" asked Vexen
"Why the hell did I just think that?" Axel asked himself.






I got the ending from here:

 

omg sweet story i hate when the alarm goes on its so anooying man xemnas is a @$$hole that was pretty sweet that axel help her

me:-warps in the louge- why did u do that mansex? TnT
xemmy:well she-
me:-slaps him and kicks him in the nut- dont ever mess with larxel! >: D
xemmy: o..ok...;_;
me:-warps away-
xemmy:damn she slaps hard ;_; oww..my...balls.....>n<
org.members: xDD-starts laughing-

 

Yeah,this story's good!! I like it!! Xemnas has issues!!! BAD XEMNAS!!! *Kicks Xemnas* Uh..I'm going to run now,before I get hurt...*runs away*...

 

wow u write fast good story wtf did xaldin and saix had to beat him up for god they're mean

 

0.0 xigbar had a horrible life i feel sorry for him even though i like him ^^ and zexion too axel's a good friend i like these chapter no wonder its call axel's good deed's keep on writing

 

omg yes sweet i got the right answer :D good thing i read it whats tthe next question?

 

idk. I'm goin to put all the stories together then give a pop quiz when I'm finished!

 

SWEET! Poor Demyx,he's such a softi. Xaldin and Saiix are EVIL...grrr. lol. I like this story!!!

 

omg i thought..nvm