~Attention!~ KH-Vids Rap/Lyric Writing Contest!!

You can't understand me like quantom physics
I'm like an alien on a short term visit
Roughly like 4 minutes with a bad ass beat
This a quicks stop to get some brains to eat
Nah just kidding, I don't really eat em
But to understand you I really do need em
Call me sylar, I have intuitive apptitude
Smart ass ***** with hard ass attitude
Fix my watch and try to understand it
Every time I drop a track its cuz your fans demand it

lol theres like 5 heroes refferences in there

 

...Maybe I should drop out? xD

 

nah bro it all good. stay in. you ain't bad. just work on your references and flow.

 

Spit sumtin vee jee enn D:

 

Alright then. I'll give it a shot...

In the game, there are a lot fans and some hating cats
If flow can be compared to weight, then you are annorexic and I'm insanely fat
In other words, I am a beast who is just obese
People call me Mickey Mouse 'cause *****, I get chesse
I will not say what you want to hear
My words aren't weapons so do not have fear
And if you die tomorrow because of aids you got in the ear
It's because my words have ****ed you and will make you forget all the B.S. you have heard or will hear
I will keep you coming back to me like a song stuck in your head
When it comes to money I'm a heavy weight, so come back to me when you stack more bread

Well, there goes my 10 bars...it sucks, I know. D:

 

what you talkin about u got potential and that ending line was killerrr.

 

Flow and refferencing need work and the skill is unrefined but it's there.

 

Thank ya.

I realize that, but I can't think of a way to do these things without messing up the flow and making the line unnecessarily long.

 

That was good, but like G. said, the flow was a little off.

and for future reference, 1 bar is 2 lines, so that was 5 bars. lol

You all spittin **** that only the motha like
someone come battle me on the other site
it's only 8....so my rhymes lack substence
just wait till I write more when I can funtion
my mood is sick, cause this dude is IT
and I'm pothead cause I know the shoes'll fit
I'm an old mind while most on this kid ****
like Riku, I think I got some unfinished business
but not with a puppet,man **** it, I bang hoes
hoes while you grab and sock and you tuck it

That was whack, it's too early for this stuff. lol

somebody up this thread

 

Hmm...nice guys, nice. We still need more damn people to join.

 

Let's face it. This is as many people as we're gonna get. We might as well start now.

 

Hmmm..let's just wait a few more days...

 

Before we decide if we should start, lets see who we've got...

Me, VGN, Split, JD, Noise, Elemental queen...I have doubts about the las two though >.>

*will edit with more*

 

2 other people signed up too. I should make a post edit with the users that signed up...or something.

 

Make a new post with the actual game, and tell nobody to post in it or we'll cut 'em