A short long story.

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  1. kitty_mckechnie I want to hug you like big fuzzy Siberian bear!

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    Perhaps on Thursday when i get time off & actually think of something to write. (i'll have to read that whole scene too.)

    Plus it will mean i will have to redo that part. *thinks*
     
  2. Jiηx You're such a loser.

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    i was rather mystical
     
  3. Mish smiley day!

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    Thursday...

    Just churn whatever comes to mind out now. x3
     
  4. kitty_mckechnie I want to hug you like big fuzzy Siberian bear!

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    *Thinking* 'What shall i have for din dins? I could really eat a whole cow right about now, i'm starving!' *stops thinking*

    Nope, nothin'.

    Except when you got punched...you failed. :P
     
  5. Ansem-the-Wise Destiny Islands Resident

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    It's a great story! I really like it. You're a good writer!
     
  6. Patsy Stone Мать Россия

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    I lol'ed at that so much. I sat and read it into the night :3
     
  7. kitty_mckechnie I want to hug you like big fuzzy Siberian bear!

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    Awright Mish i've done your wee scene with Lithy again. I'll post it in a few.
     
  8. Ienzo ((̲̅ ̲̅(̲̅C̲̅r̲̅a̲̅y̲̅o̲̅l̲̲̅̅a̲̅( ̲̅̅((>

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    YAY! You put it up^^

    I love this story! It would be great to read another one.
     
  9. kitty_mckechnie I want to hug you like big fuzzy Siberian bear!

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    Yeah, i wanted Choco to read it. Do you know if she has?

    lol, i would like to write another one actually.

    Bah! Mish...you'll have to wait then.
     
  10. Ienzo ((̲̅ ̲̅(̲̅C̲̅r̲̅a̲̅y̲̅o̲̅l̲̲̅̅a̲̅( ̲̅̅((>

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    Well, she will when she gets back on Saturday T_T I hope, well I'll tell her about it. She's gone somewhere and won't be back for two days.

    Will I be in the next one? *puppy dog eyes*
     
  11. kitty_mckechnie I want to hug you like big fuzzy Siberian bear!

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    That's cool, i hope she likes it. ^^

    lol i dunno who would star in the next one. I would need to think about it. :P
     
  12. Mish smiley day!

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    I'm here, post the extended scene now. D:
     
  13. cronoking Chaser

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    I shall star in the next one 8D
     
  14. Fork These violent delights have violent ends

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    lol, and I'd star as your sidekick/minion again =D
     
  15. kitty_mckechnie I want to hug you like big fuzzy Siberian bear!

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    Aye aye missy.
    It's nothin' really just a rush job & wrote whatever came to mind. It continues from where Lithy first appears...

    Out of the blue, Lithium appeared for some reason. Reacting on her first thought, Ienzo grabbed Lithium & tossed him at Mish. Mish reached out to meet him, pulling him into her bosom holding him tight, petting his little head. Lithium was still trying to figure out what was going on, he was just an ‘innocent’ bypasser. Mish raised him up to her face, holding him by his rear end were she started to gently rub her nose against his. He tried to push himself away but was overpowered by her mighty strength. She slowly lower herself to the ground while continuing to rub noses with Lithium, crossing her legs & placing him in-between. She removed the heavy gauntlets from her hands tossing them to the side. Lithium stood there shivering, as he gawked at the giant beast, unsure whether to be scared or aroused. She put her hands on his shoulders getting a grip on his clothing, tearing off his shirt with ease. She looked down blow his waist. Lithium was about to look down too but Mish had already whipped his trousers off of him. He stood there even colder than before, crossing his arms, shivering as his teeth chattered together, in his underwear. Mish giggled at the sight of his underwear & it’s teddy bear patterns. Lithium tried to cover up but he was too damn cold.
    Mish spread her legs wide apart, for someone in armour she sure was flexible. She forced Lithium down on his back in the freezing snow which caused his small body to squirm frantically. She leaned over him pressing her head against his stomach where Lithium sunk deeper into the snow. She stuck out her long tongue placing it at the tip of his underwear forcing it up & down his fragile body. His jaw opened wide in disgust, grasping hard onto her head but soon started to enjoy the feeling. The saliva from Mish’s tongue brought warmth to his body, he couldn’t help but want more.After many moments of tongue lashing Mish lifted her head, starring at the very wet boy. She licked her lips in a cruel manner, looking as though she was about to feast on the boy.

    Ienzo & kitty were stunned by what they were seeing. They could’ve escaped but they wouldn’t have gotten far with Choco in her current state, so they ran over to her trying to help her as best they could, leaving Lithium to entertain Mish.

    Lithium laid there starring up at Mish, the look of pleasure draining from his eyes. The look in her eyes scared the little boy, & as soon as he saw her head come down on him he shut his eyes. A loud unusual noise caught Ienzo’s & kitty’s attention. They looked over at Lithium to see that Mish had her head in his stomach blowing hard, making rude noises. Lithium could not control his laughter as Mish continued to blow. He tried to move but she held him down tight not allowing him a single bit of movement. It looked as though he was about to die from laughter as he struggled to breath. His skin had turned red by this point from the bitter cold so Mish picked him up & placed him on her lap. She rubbed her hands wildly together creating heat & gently rubbed them over Lithium, her hands being able to fit around him quite easily. Lithium was enjoying being pampered by her in this manner, he only wished she wasn’t wearing that armour. He could only dream about the wonders that lay beneath. Mish’s hand rubbing had gotten slower & had reduced to one hand. Her fingertips gently moved in a circular motion up & down his back. He could feel with every pass her hand moving closer to his underwear, soon her hand was skimming through it. Her hand had finally found it’s way through to the ‘bottom’, giving it a slight squeeze to say hello. Lithium’s body jumped. He tried to hide his face as it had turned red from blushing & smiling too much. Mish knew she had found his weak spot, so she took advantage of it. She continued to finger around his back occasionally pass though the lower regions. The strange markings on her face had started to fade away & her eyes had almost returned to their normal state as she ’played’ with Lithium. She laid him down on the snow were she followed to lay on top of him, meeting her face with his. Lithium stretched his arms as far as he could around her neck as she placed her hands behind his head.

    A loud terrifying cracking noise caused Ienzo & kitty freeze. They looked backed & saw Mish starring into the ground, but there was no sign of Lithium. Mish’s heavy armour had caused Lithium to sink until he had hurt the ground & without the support of support of her arms he was doomed, but they had forgotten about that. Mish looked down at him seeing blood raising from out of his mouth. Lithium cried in pain. Mish was about to get off of him but it was too late, his body had already been completely crushed. Mish’s body shook as she started to laugh, which then turned into the maddening laugh that sent chills down the others spines. With shift turn Mish had set her eyes on Ienzo & kitty, with the strange markings imprinted on her face again.


    Ok that is one way to end it, but here’s another.

    Her hand had finally found it’s way through to the ‘bottom’, giving it a slight squeeze to say hello. Lithium’s body jumped. He was furious that he had been violated like that, & with one swing of the wrist he slapped Mish’s hand. That didn’t go down well with her. She stared angrily at him for a moment before she tossed him in the air, grabbing him by his leg. Within the same flow of movement she slammed him heavily against the ground several time & wall that was close by as if he was a club. She looked at him for a moment as he hung upside down, blood dripping from him as he hung in a bloody state. She raised him above her head & swinging him around, releasing him at great speed. Lithium spun through the air towards Mish’s mighty chainsaw where his body made contact with it causing him to split in three.

    There you go.

    Think what you will of it.
     
  16. Rosey Chaser

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    LOL xD

    The second ending to that is better xD
     
  17. Xegreny Kingdom Keeper

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    *copy/pastes this into word* I should read this later. =D
     
  18. Fork These violent delights have violent ends

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    lmao, I have to agree, 2nd ending is better XD
     
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    Lol Mish you beast.
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  20. kitty_mckechnie I want to hug you like big fuzzy Siberian bear!

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