A King's Story

ooc: you'll have to wait for either kbwol to comeon, or rhixan to come on then, cos i live in the fire kingodm...currently eating bacon...

 

I guess the fire lands will have to be my salvation then

 

ooc: yup!, just walk in or something....

 

hello? anyone I've come for an audiance with the king/queen hello

 

" looks like we have another guest..., i'm Xyam, he's the king.." she pointed at Kazune.

 

your majesty Kazune (bends to one knee) I have come to ask your aid after the attack on the air lands the remaining population needs help rebuilding our homes and our lives we ask your help in return we shall give what you what you need, our land has secrets that could help you emensely and I have been asked by the late king to give you this letter. (hads letter to Xyam> who hads it to Kazune) the letter says "that I the king hands my most trusted adviser to you I hopes he can aid you like he added me"

 

OOC: You just godmodded. Thats when you say that a chara that you don't control does something. E.G - Kazune (me) and Docyx (you)

Not godmodding:

(my post): Kazune smiled. "Sure, i'll help."
(then your post): Docyx grinned. "Thank you so much!"

Godmodding:

(my post): Kazune smiled. "Sure, i'll help."
Docyx then grinned. "Thank you so much!"

See? Try not to do it again.
Plus, can you use "" when talking? And try to use proper grammer and such =P
I'll kinda do your post up for that so check this if your not sure-

"Your majesty Kazune" Docyx bent on one knee. "I have come to ask your aid after the attack on the air lands. The remaining population needs help rebuilding our homes and our lives, we ask your help. In return we shall give what you what you need, our land has secrets that could help you emensely and I have been asked by the late king to give you this letter. He handed Kazune the letter. The letter says - 'That I the King hands my most trusted adviser to you I hopes he can aid you like he helped me'

Its easier to understand like this too. Hope this helps you more.

BIC:

Kazune read the letter. "Who attacked your Kingdom? And... one thing. The Air Kingdom hasn't been seen for years after the Earth and Fire war. Where did it go to?" He asked.

 

ooc: oh leave him alone...
bic: xyam went back to bacon eating...

 

Kazune looked back at Xyam. "I'm guessing you're hungry."

 

"mmmhmmm" she said with her mouthfull

 

Kazune grinned. "Thought so."

 

she finished the bacon and sat back in her chair with a glass of whatever was in the jug or kettle,etc

 

OOC: Apple Juice~ Plus, I can't do much without Cody on.
BIC:

Kazune sighed and sat back down. waiting for Docyx's answer.

 

ooc: oh yeah, he's only on during school hours too...
bic: " i think we should go and get changed, i don't think we'll be much help in our pyjama's .."she stood up and looked at docyx. " you wait here" she began to walk off

 

Kazune nodded. "Help yourself to a drink." He walked away to his room to get changed.

 

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xyam went to her room , showered and changed.

 

Kazune got changed and warped back to Docyx.

 

she appeared in the dinning/ breaky room...." ready!"

 

Kazune looked at her. "We can see that."

 

" i know, just thought i'd say anyways" she grinned